Writing Feedback

This might not be the place to ask but I’m trying to get some feedback/opinions/criticism on the first two chapters of an erotic story.

It’s based on a male student-female teacher relationship for context, happy to share it in a DM if anyone is interested giving it a quick read!

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/12a8xtg/writing_feedback

3 comments

  1. I would be happy to give you my insight. I prefer Private Messages as opposed to chats, but I will take what you give me.

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