# The Crimson Vow
**Chapter 1: The Deal**
*This is a work of Fiction, all individuals presented here are non real people who are all over the age of 18. This will be a slow build up to a rather large Climax. This is also the first ever erotic literature i have written and thought how fun would it be if it was in a screenplay format?*
***Cast List:***
**Astraea Jebivic – Countess and Figurehead of Castle Mejko**
**Age : seemingly her erly 30s**
**Ciran Velkaguza – advisor to the countess**
**Age : seemingly her erly 30s**
**Bjorn Kuretz – new slave sent to Castle Mejko**
**Age: 28**
**Frederick Kuretz – Bjorns father, slave to the royals**
**Age: 58**
**Amadia Jebivic – younger sister of the countess**
**Age: seemingly her erly 20s**
**Duna Velkaguza – Wife of Ciran, Arcane arts teacher**
**Age: 42**
**Zora Maimoon – plaything to the royal family and head maid**
**Age: 56**
**Alexia Malicice – Prisoner**
**Age: 26**
**Alfred Malicice – Happy Farm Resident**
**Age: 26**
**Albert Malicice – Student**
**Age: 22**
**Sellen Dobrapicka – Happy Farm Resident**
**Age: 24**
**Marik Dobrapicka – Prisoner**
**Age: 20**
**Yuria Kravamejko – Student**
**Age: 24**
***Settings:***
**Castle Mejko** – Home of the royals
**Castle Mejko Throne Room** – Throne room of the Countess
**Kuretz Family Home** – Old stone house restored to the Kuretz
**Astraea’s Bed Chamber** – The Countess’s Personal Room
**Ciran’s Dungeon** – A playground for the advisor
**Duna’s Magick Academy** – Where Mejko Magick Flourishes
**Amadia’s Happy Farm** – Just a Happy Farm with Happy Residents
*This story begins in the throne room with The Countess, a tall, red haired voluptuous woman with alabaster skin as pale as the moonlight, her eyes a deep green color, her lips full and often in a deep red coating. Her breasts were large and they sagged, her ass was wide to accommodate for her hips. She was a very curvy woman who was a symbol of fertility known among the citizens even though she bore no children of her own. She is clothed in dark purple robes that hug her figure well and silver jewelry hanging between her breasts
.*
*She is joined in the throne room by Ciran and Zora.*
**Astraea**: Zora, oh Zora my sweet pet, be a dear and fetch me Frederick from the dungeon, we have much to discuss.
*Zora is an older woman of average height and build, with short brown hair and pale blue eyes with freckled fair skin, she wears a maid uniform.*
**Zora**: Yes Countess, right away!
*She leaves in a hurry for she does not want to disobey the Countess.*
*Ciran clears her throat before turning to the countess, she was a very tall, short haired woman of darker complexion, lean but with a rather large heart shaped ass, her breasts were smaller than the Countess, and she was dressed in the finest robes of charcoal coloration, she preferred tighter clothing to show off her toned body and muscular physic. Her hair was blonde and always in a small bun.*
**Ciran:** She seems happy for someone so unaware. Your charm is always a spectacle to behold Astraea. Have you told your sister yet?
**Astraea**: Amadia knew this would happen someday. It must be done, when Zora comes to her senses, I imagine she won’t be so quick and willing to serve us now will she. If only we didn’t have to resort to such tactics.
**Ciran**: I believe Frederick will be more than willing to cooperate once he hears what you offer him. I also might have a solution to that problem.
*the door opens and in comes Zora and with her a man bound in chains and clad in mere rags, he is an older man of great shape with salt and pepper hair. He dons a scruffy beard and has body hair en mass, in a dark alley some might mistake him for a beast.*
**Ciran**: Frederick how nice of you to join us, now have you had time to think about the offer presented to you? Zora unchain him, make him feel the comfort he was depraved of for his silly insubordination.
*Zora looks over to the Countess and after a slight nod of her head she follows suit and unchains the man.*
**Frederick**: Oh Zora, what have they done to you? Don’t you recognize me?
*Zora looks at the man puzzled before she speaks.*
**Zora**: Am I supposed to know every last slave in this castle?
*His eyes tremble as those words escape her mouth, he looks in anger towards the countess.*
**Astraea:** Looking at me like that is what got you in this situation in the first place, I suggest you be a good dog and sit and listen. I might just show you some mercy.
*She reaches her hand out and snaps her fingers, a spark of light and then Zora falls to her knees, Frederick quickly catches her.*
**Astraea:** Now then, here is my offer, I will grant you and your wife freedom from the royal family, but you must offer me something of equal value in return.
*Frederick holds Zora in his arms as she sleeps soundly in them, he looks up at the countess who even from a distance towers over them.*
**Frederick**: what could you possibly want from me? You have taken everything from me! You and your damned Magick!
**Astraea**: Oh not everything, you see Frederick I found your little secret, I will give you both release if you agree to sell me your son!
*Frederick gasps, his hands tremble and he looks upon his wife, then back at the countess.*
**Frederick:** I have barely been in that boy’s life, he only knows of me vaguely but I have been in chains for so long I don’t think we have any sort of connection, but Zora, she would never forgive me if I made her choose between herself and our boy, She had to give him up once already!
*He ponders for a moment.*
**Ciran:** The Countess has been most generous in her offer, the boy will not be harmed in anyway and you two will be released from your bindings, what more do you have to think about?
Astraea: All you need to do is simply sign here!
*She flicks her hand and a Parchment floats in front of Frederick with a small sharp object next to it.*
**Astraea:** You must sign in blood, as head of household you will be signing on Zoras behalf as well.
*He sighs deeply and then takes his finger and pricks it onto the object and starts signing his name, just as he finishes Zora wakes up.*
**Zora**: Frederick? Is that you? What are you?
*Her eyes go wide, and she jolts up and tries to stop him, but it’s already too late.*
**Astraea**: Don’t be too upset Zora, you’re free now! You won’t ever have to wear that uniform ever again and even better; Amadia and I won’t be able to lay a hand on that pretty little head of yours anymore.
*Zora shudders and feels disgust, she looks at Frederick, she sees the pain in his eyes, and she feels the pain in her heart intensify.*
**Zora:** We will never truly be free, not while these monsters rule over us and even now that they have our son!
*She stands and then stumbles a moment before catching herself, then she looks over at the Countess.*
**Ciran:** No matter how much anger you have towards us, the Crimson Vow has been signed, there is nothing more that can be done. If you show any form of aggression, you will forfeit your newfound freedom with no hope of regaining it and with it your lives.
**Astraea**: That includes your son’s life as well, but if you both listen and bring him to me all will be well for you, you will never need to labor or struggle again, I will see to it that all of your troubles will cease myself.
*Zora and Frederick look at each other for a moment, then tears start falling from both of them, they nod at each other and look back at the Countess.*
**Frederick:** He doesn’t know about us, if you can really give him a better life, if you can ensure his survival, all we ask is that you never tell him about us, what we did to buy our own freedom.
**Astraea:** Your son will want for nothing, now go bring him to me, you are dismissed.
*Frederick and Zora turn to leave, the Countess smirks to herself and with a wave of her hand she manifests a rune onto the two of them and then the two are transported to their home.*
**Astraea:** Ciran when the boy arrives, I want him escorted to my bed chambers. Tell Amadia she can have her turn after I finish breaking him in.
*She turns walks to her chambers as Ciran nods silently.*
***New Scene***
***Kuretz Family Home***
Frederick and Zora appear in front of their home but something is different in them, their years of enslavement had worn them down but not anymore, they both look at each other and notice that they look so completely refreshed and filled with vigor, they seem to have deaged the last 30 years of their lives and are young fit adults again.
**Frederick:** By the gods, Zora we are young again!
*He looks at his wife who now and before was as beautiful as the day he first met her.*
**Zora**: Frederick!
*She looks at him and examines his body in greater detail, she sees how his muscles swell underneath the tattered rags he wears and how exposed he is, she sees his strong burly arms and for a moment can’t help but gaze at his impressive frame, she starts feeling herself become hot and bothered, perhaps a side effect of the Vow’s Magick? She can’t help herself from thinking about how good it would feel to have his cock inside of her once more, while she is fighting the urge to just throw herself at him in a fit of passion he puts a hand on her shoulder, she looks up from her daze and sees he is breathing harder, and his cock is swelling underneath his rags.*
**Frederick**: I’m not sure what’s happening Zora, I’m overcome with a feeling of lust for you, not that I wouldn’t normally but this, this is different. By the way you are lookin at me, I can tell you’re feeling the same way, the Countess must have cursed us somehow!
**Zora**: Aye she did, Frederick I know it might not be the best idea, but I don’t care anymore I just want you to fill me with your seed.
*She pushes him into their home and onto the floor, she quickly pulls out his impressive cock from his rags and straddles him, she then pulls up her skirt and shows how wet she is.*
*He looks up at her and then right at her juicy wet pussy and before she can say anything he slides his massive cock inside of her.*
*She lets out a deep moan and feels her heart racing, her thoughts all but disappear and the only thing she cares or wants for in that moment is more.*
**Frederick**: Zora I love you, I know we are under some sort of curse but I don’t care, I want nothing more than to fill your cunt with my seed.
*He sits up and with his strong arms he rips apart her uniform exposing her supple breasts, he grabs them firmly in his big hands and brings his face closer to them to suck.*
*She moans as he pumps his cock into her cunt, the sensation of having her pussy filled while her nipples are being teased sends her over the edge for a moment and let’s out a loud guttural moan while her vaginal muscles grip tightly onto his cock not wanting to let go.*
**Zora:** Oh God Frederick I just, that was so incredible!
*She starts riding his cock with more intensity, she feels it reach deeper inside of her, she feels it crash against her womb, she accelerates, and he grabs her closer to him while they rhythmically slam into each other, a sound of heavy clapping almost to a beat.*
**Frederick**: By the Gods, Zora I love you!
*He shouts from the top of his lungs as he convulses and loosens his seed into her very thirsty cunt for her to soak up. She brings her face towards his and they embrace in another wet warm passionate kiss and she again feels her body starting to convulse and shake with his cock still twitching inside of her she grabs firm and moans in pure ecstasy as they finish at the same time.*
*Out of breath they both lie there on the ground at first thrilled about being reunited after so long, but then they both frown and remember that while they could enjoy this, they must give away their only son to the Countess who has tormented them all these years.*
**Zora:** Frederick? I don’t know what came over us, but after you filled me, I-I can think more clearly now, Frederick I think the only way we can come up with a plan to save him is if you keep fucking me enough for us to think straight.
**Frederick**: Aye, in the moment all I could envision was forcing myself upon you, I’m relieved we have such young bodies that allow us better stamina but if we don’t deliver him to her, our hearts might give out from this curse.
*They both take a long breath in, and then seeing each other now in their nakedness, see the runes places upon them, after that visions flash before their eyes and they come to understand that the runes will cause them to intensity their hearts more and more each day to the point of death unless they deliver their son to her.*
**End of Chapter 1**
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