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If you would like to skip to the “good stuff” right away, it’s marked with “xxx”.
[Chapter one here!](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/vcaoqa/take_on_the_heavens_first_version_fm_monstergirl/)
xx The Second Chapter. xx
Luci woke up under a soft blanket. Her mind was dim and so was the lighting. A single candle on the drawer beside the bed was the only thing casting shadow. You could distinguish the boards in the walls by the shadows between them. Luci was still feeling tired and adding to that sore. After the hard fucking she got she wasn’t sure if she could even stand. Pulling the blanket off and getting up she noticed a mirror on the wall next to the door. There was also some clothes on a chair nearby, seemingly for her. “I’m an archangel, I don’t need clothes.” she thought, dismissing them. She stumbled to the door and pushed it open. In front of her was an old lady fiddling with a large pot over the fireplace.
* Can I help you with that? she asked politely.
As if she had seen a ghost, the woman started to scream her lungs out trying in vain to unsee Luci.
* Get out! Leave me be! Back demon! the woman yelled.
* It’s okay, I’m not going to hurt you, Luci pleaded as the woman took out something from her pocket.
Luci instinctively put her hand on her chest. It felt though as her heart had imploded. She started seeing blurry and looked at the woman again, hoping for help that would never come. She saw the x-marked hand of the woman holding up a cross towards her. Her vision soon disappeared entirely and Luci passed out on the hardwood floor.
As she woke up yet again it was with a bang. A flashing knife stabbing at her ribs. The thin blade snagged on the inside of one of her tits. The blade edge crushed it a little bit, but when it got pulled back the boob bounced back as normal. Luci rubbed her eyes and took a glance at her attackers. An old man with a five o´clock shadow and the woman from before.
Apparently they didn’t know simple steel can’t cut the skin of an angel. Maybe no one ever told them. They seemed to dislike her nakedness and her red skin.
It appeared that she’d been out for a while and that they had been trying to kill her for that same while. Bent knives, broken hammers, lots of utensils that were not as useful as they once were. When they finally realized that she was awake they backed up a bit. Afraid that the woman would use the cross again, Luci got up as fast as she could and flew away. She wanted to find the boy.
She had been in a house not far from the tree they’d fucked under, and that was where she found him. The tree was just as big as before. Long heavy branches stretched out from the trunk. He was sitting there reading as he did yesterday but something was off. He didn’t have the same kind of energy. She flew into the tree above him but she didn’t feel horny. He flipped a page and Luci saw the “x” on his hand. ” He has sinned, ” she thought. That was when she made the connection. When he was a virgin she couldn’t resist him, but now she had taken something from him. His curly hair flew in the wind. ” How sad, she thought. I guess I’ll have to find more virgins.”
For the following days she went from house to house taking the virginity of young men. If their hands were marked she couldn’t be bothered but if they weren’t Luci was damp. Her pussy needed the touch of a virgin cock.
After a few days the word started spreading of the succubus going around. Some were afraid. Are we really worthy in the eyes of the Lord? There was also a mass of people willing to ignore the word of god and willing to accept Luci as a lover, and as a leader.
When she finally did expose herself to the masses the result was that this cock hungry slut got what she wanted. However after the orgies and gangbangs she got the masses riled up again. She figured if she could get back at god in any way it would be through the “house of god”.
She and the rally of people got to the church and before anyone knew it there was fire. Luci slammed open the giant gates and walked inside. Smoke filled the large chamber and the roof had large holes in certain places. People were running out to the angry mob rather than staying inside. Luci, proud over what she had done, started to snicker to herself. The smoke thickened, broken burning parts crashed into the ground. As she walked to and sat down on the altar she couldn’t help but laugh. The fires everywhere signaling her victory and her laughs echoing out through what remained of the hall. She had won.
Suddenly water covered her entire body. Cold water, making her shiver in an instant. Her hair instantly stuck to her shoulders and covered her pert niples. She looked behind her and saw a man on the second floor in a priest gown holding an empty bucket.
* Frick, I should have blessed it first, he declared.
Cold she may be a fire still raged in her eyes. A man of god? Ha, what a joke. Though he was sort of cute. Not as young as the boy, but not old. 25 maybe. Suddenly a thought jumped into her mind. A man of god? That ment, that like all good little priests he hadn’t been fucked. A virgin, she thought. At that moment most of her thoughts disappeared. The priest noticed something was off by Luci’s lack of action, and decided this was his chance to get away. In the blink of an eye she flew towards him and pinned him down. He tried to fight her, but he wasn’t her match. She was about to unclasp his belt, when he suddenly fainted from lack of oxygen.
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As the man awoke he found himself surrounded by candles. Everything else was basically dark. He was laying on a red carpet, probably made out of silk. It was insanely smooth. He wondered for how long he’d been out. It was still night, but the candles had burnt down a fair bit. Even though he didn’t know where he was he didn’t feel the need to get up and have a look around. Now, even if he did he wouldn’t have seen anything. He closed his eyes for just a second trying to remember how he’d gotten here. When he opened them again he found a little demon girl on his lap. Her skin was warm. It was red. She was looking away, as if she didn’t even notice where she was sitting. The priest sat up, laying his arm around her waist. At this point the girl turned around and looked at him. He felt turned on. Such a seductive smile. Her eyes most likely had something to do with it too. The smell in the air, there was something with it too. The girl slowly sat up, one leg on either side of his knee. She put her hand in the middle of his chest and softly pushed him on his back. She ran her fingers through her hair, revealing her protruding horns. He looked up at her. His eyes were instantly drawn to her supple breasts. It was a tease. She knew he was a priest, that he couldn’t enjoy her the way they both wanted. Or to be exact, he couldn’t do it, if he was to remain in his position. When he looked down between her legs and saw one long, shiny drip of pussy juice, he felt himself give in.
Luci had a large grin on her face. Teasing him was so fun. She would make him give in, one way or another. Neither of them were leaving before both their bodies were satisfied. Rocking her chest back and forth as well as keeping eye contact she started stroking his member. He was about to protest, but her finger on his lips made him change his mind.
* You are going to fuck me right? she asked teasingly.
Continuing to stroke him she reached back and caught the swaying drip on her finger.
* You want a taste?
She put her finger to her lips and sucked her finger clean, enjoying her taste to the fullest. Now his tip was soaked with precum which she spread out using her thumb. She laid down in his lap. Her boobs on either side of his leg. She slowly licked his cock. massaging the tip and savoring his essence. Soon she opened her mouth entirely letting him slide between her short sharp fangs. After a while of this she started climbing him. Grabbing at his warm skin, rubbing her wet groin on his thigh. Kissing him all over. Nibbling on him. Caressing his body. As Luci got up to his head she wrapped her hands around his cheeks and kissed him deeply. Their tongues intertwined, Luci lined up her entrance with her lover’s rod. She found release and the priest did the unthinkable, pressed through her moist labia. She let out a timid moan, and lightly bit his lip. It was like a fog clouded her mind. As if the entire world around them disappeared into nothingness. While she wanted to touch him, fondle his muscles, she also wanted to try something new. With this thought Luci dismounted him.
The priest was also in a haze. The act of her getting off him was a surprise and not something any of them wanted. However for her it was a necessary evil, because when the priest looked up Luci was bent over on her knees spreading her pussy open. The man got up and proceeded to grab her from behind. holding her by her soft, slightly moist hips, and teasing her mound with his tip. He wouldn’t hold back. He couldn’t hold back. Not for her, not anymore.
She felt his member slowly spread her open once more. It was easy. No resistance that meant anything, not considering how wet and horny she was. As he started thrusting she felt her tongue fall out of her mouth. At the end of every thrust his balls pressed against her clit, bringing her jolts of pleasure. He was hitting her so deep, she thought, way better than anything she could conjure up on her own. Luci’s arms gave out from under her from the pleasure, and she laid on her stomach, with her squished boobs holding her up somewhat. With all the lewd sounds and moans coming from them both increasing in volume, it was just a matter of time before one of them came. First up, the fallen angel herself.
The clit stimulation combined with the constant thrusting held her on the edge of orgasm for what felt like forever. When the priest’s thrusts increased slightly in power her nipples started rubbing against the smooth silk carpet. All of these things combined managed to finally push her body over the edge.
When her partner felt her contractions he grabbed a handful of her hair and lifted her chest off the ground. Luci’s orgasm increased in force, because of the slight pain and the fact he reached and penetrated her cervix. This was the exact point where the priest reached his own orgasm. Her back arched, Luci felt his thick ropes coat her insides. Warmth, fullness, pride, these were all feelings that crossed her mind within the few moments his cock twitched inside her. She had gotten him to lose control, she thought, and that thought made her happy. And she got her womb filled with hot babybatter in the process. ‘
As her thoughts concined for a moment, she laid down beside him. Resting her hand on his chest and relaxing. She would sleep here, she thought. Her pussy still made the occasional quiver followed by a spoonful of cum drizzling out. She closed her eyes and just let herself get lost in the smells, sounds and feelings around her, with the surrounding world back in its place. Suddenly the priest laid his hand on hers. Normally she would not take kindly to that behavior, but now it felt nice. The heat radiating off him was comforting.
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