Your hot breath fogged up the full-wall window of our hotel room, as our sweat-covered bodies pressed together, your warmth and mine becoming one while your forearms, chest and head rested against the thick glass. Our hearts had matched in tempo long ago, just one of the many signs that all pointed to one thing. Your sweat mixing with mine, the warmth of my body embracing yours, every kiss I planted on your neck or that you returned with desperate fervor. While bathing in the brightly colored light of the nocturnal city below, we were becoming one. Again and again and again and again… My hands gripped you tighter, mixing roughness and pure adoration like no one had before. Holding onto you like you were the most important thing ever to have existed. Because, to me, you were. The moans I had been whispering into your ear grew louder, accompanying my movements becoming faster and more erratic. It was so much to handle, all at once. So much pleasure, so much lust and so much love. So, so much, until it became too much to deal with. It became too much to hold on. As our exhausted bodies slapped together one last time for the night, your frontside tinted a fluorescent shade of green which illuminated every line on the face I’d never get tired of staring at, ours legs lightly shook in unison, barely holding up while I took the opportunity to brush my lips against yours once more. “That was… perfect. *You* are perfect.” I whisper with an amused grin, still as enchanted as I had been when we first met eyes. And the best part, was that we could do all of that again the next night.
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Hey everybody. Hopefully you enjoyed that. As you can tell, this was a sort of “artistic” little thing, as opposed to it being super lewd. Also my first post here ever, so some support would be much appreciated :)
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/w8jdii/ma_short_soft_and_sweet_my_first_ever_post
Way more my preference of writing style than what’s been posted lately, thanks for the share !
i enjoyed that, thank you for posting it. i see a lot of kinky and fetish stories, and those are nice and exciting in their own way, but tiring when it’s ALL you see.
i appreciate the slow stuff too, more often than not, more than the exhilarating stuff. there’s only so many times you can be excited before it’s boring or exhausting.
my only criticism would be to add more spaces/lines between paragraphs, make it a little easier for tired eyes to read.