30 minutes into the drive and there was a comfortable silence but the aura, I don’t really know how to describe it, but it was definitely one I’ve never felt before. I looked over to see that he was a big man, had little silver hairs here and there, a strong jaw, thick thighs, muscular arms, and his right arm was filled with tattoos. Wow!
“I didn’t have the chance to say thank you, so thank you.”
“No, it’s ok, I actually live close by to the location you gave.”
“Oh really?”
“Yes, in fact, I’ve been noticing you for quite some time actually, today I got off a bit early so decided to offer you a ride.”
“Stalker”
He just smiled and shook his head.
“You really get off that late?”
“I tend to overwork myself, I have no one to go home to.”
“I’m sorry.”
“Don’t be, it’s better this way.”
“Why do you say so?”
“You see, I am 41 and I was even married and also had a child, but my wife cheated on me and took away my child. I did everything I could to keep my daughter with me but she played her tricks well and won. I don’t even know where they are now. I tried everything I could to forget my baby, got into smoking, got these tattoos because my daughter once told me it would look good on me, got drunk pretty much every night, and made my house a complete mess. I fucked up.”
I couldn’t say anything, nothing.
“I got in touch with a trainer and told him everything. He made me leave all my bad habits by calling me to the gym at odd hours. I started working out more and more and even spend more hours in the office. It is a temporary relief.”
“I am so sorry.”
“It’s ok, love”
I couldn’t help but look at him and trace his tattooed arm, “These are so intricate.”
“Do you like them?”
I just nodded.
I traced them again and every time, there would be an involuntary flex in his forearm.
I didn’t know what it was, whether the fact that he was 16 years older than me or him in general, I leaned undeniably close to his ear and whispered, “stop the car”, with a faint kiss.
He complied and turned his head and looked at me, while I stared at his eyes and then his lips and leaned forward just the right amount that our lips touched and faintly said, “kiss me.”
He looked me in the eyes for reassurance to which I just nodded and I next thing I know I was engulfed in an earth-shattering kiss.
part 3?
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/w172dp/the_stranger_in_the_car_part_2
ASAP
I would honestly say to make the parts much much longer as they feel drastically too short.