(this is my first story and I would love to hear your thoughs on my writing)
(we are both 18)
My boyfriend, Adam, and I were hangingout at his place just sitting on the couch watching a movie. I laid my legs across his lap and he put one hand on the back of my head to play with my hair and the other on my thigh. I was only wearing shorts so his fingers gentlly brushing my bare legs made me tingle between my legs. I get the message of what he wants and nuzzle his neck softly before I start to plant kisses up and down his neck.
I hear him moan my name softly and push his hand further and further up my thigh as I kiss him. As his hand nears the top of my thigh I quit kissing him and tilt my head back offering my neck to him. I squirm and moan as he hungrily nibbles and kisses on my neck. I feel his hands firmly grasp my hips and begin moving them, he repositions me so that I’m straddling him and grasps my butt firmly as he pulls me in.
As my hips meet his I feel his boner press firmly against my clit, he slowly, but firmly starts rocking my hips into him. I moan into his neck as my hips rock in his hands, even with two layers of clothes on it still feels incrdible. As we kiss and grind I can feel myself get wetter and his boner get even harder. Pretty soon his slow gentle grinding becomes harder and rough which only stimulates me more. I feels something bulding up inside, something pleasurable yet so far impossible for me to get out.
Pretty soon I feel Adams hand squeeze my butt tightly and I then feel his dick start to twitch, “Fuck Kylie, you’re so hot” I hear him moan directly into my ear ” Fuck I just came to you baby” he says as he lick my neck softly. his hands relax on my hips but I keep going because it feels so incedible. “You didn’t cum did you baby” He says in a seductive “No baby but I’m glad you did” I respond with a cute nuzzle.
As I his softly nuzzle I feel him push my hips over to one of his thighs and begin to control my hips again. This time he tilts my hips forward and grinds my clit on his muscular thigh. He qucikly gets me up to the same speed I was before he orgasms, and I’m about ready to pop. I queeze him tightly as I orgasm in his arms.
Our pace quickly slows and he gives me a kiss softly. I sit on his lap a while before he slides me off. I finally get to see a huge wetspot on the front of his shorts. It’s around the same time I notice another wet spot, this one leaking through my thin shorts.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/vqhxvf/my_first_time_orgasming_18mf_dryhumping_virgin
You wrote it very nice. Not clear if you remained virgin…