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Liana had just finished her shift at the clinic and was on her way home. She was 19 years old and training to be a nurse’s assistant. The streets were empty as it was late at night, but she was grateful for this. She had heard that many unsavory characters were out late. There was even a rumor that a Wolfman snuck into the castle gardens and had his way with one of the princesses recently. Her boots clicked against the ground with every step. Though the streets were empty, she was still on guard. Watching her surroundings. Every now and then, she could hear the fluttering of wings nearby. As if a bat was flying around. She picked up the pace a bit, not wanting to trust the noise but not really wanting to take any chances. She kept walking for a bit before hearing some whispering behind her. She turned around to see a tall, dark-skinned man with piercing yellow eyes looking at her with a menacing smile. She turned around and started running. Frightened of the Man and unsure of what he had in mind. The Man chased her for three streets before she tripped on a pothole and twisted her ankle. “FUCK,” she shouted as she tried to get up and limp away. But the little bit of time was all he needed to catch up to her. He forced her back onto the ground and climbed on top of her. “Get the fuck off me! HEEEEEEEELP!” She punched the man in the chest, but it felt as if she had struck a brick wall. She tried to push him away as she continued to cry out for help.
“SHUT THE FUCK UP,” demanded the Man as he swiftly backhanded Liana. Tears began to flow down as she could taste blood forming in her mouth.
“What are you going to do to me?” She asks in a soft whimper.
“We are going to have some fun,” he says as he slides one hand up her shirt and cups her left boob. “No, no, please, no,” she cried as she tried to wiggle out from under Man’s weight. But it’s no use; she doesn’t budge. He grabbed her face with his right hand and forced her to kiss him. She feels violated as his long tongue circles the inside of her mouth and goes down her throat a little. She tries to bite down on it, but the Man only seems to enjoy this even more. The Man pulls away from her and licks up some blood dripping from her cheek.
“Mmmm, you taste like a virgin,” he moans into her ear. “Don’t worry. I’ll make sure you enjoy this.”
She continues to cry as he begins to pinch and pull on her nipples with one hand, and the other caresses her body.
“This can’t be happening to me,” she thinks. “Not my first time. Not her in the middle of the street.” The Man continues to ignore her whimpers of fear; having felt enough with his hands, he reveals a sharp claw. He slides it down the length of her shirt, cutting it and her bra cleanly in half between her breasts. She begins to scream loudly for help again, but the man quickly grabs her throat and begins to squeeze.
“I won’t tell you again. Shut the fuck up,” he growls at her. Her vision starts to go foggy as the Man chokes the life out of her. But right before everything faded to black, he loosened his grip, allowing her to breathe again. He forced her to look him in the eyes, and the edges of her vision blurred slightly again, and she could no longer feel her legs.
“What did you just do” she whispers through tears and a pained throat.
“Making sure you don’t run.” The Man rips the rest of the shirt away before taking her right nipples into her mouth. She can feel the sharp teeth encircle her nipple while the Man sucks hard and deeply on it. He continues his assault on her left nipple as well. Terror builds in her chest as she realizes there is nothing she can do here. The Man seems to sense her rising fear and is even more pleased by it. He releases her from his mouth and slides his tongue down her stomach as he moves towards her crotch. She is horrified to find that the stimulation of the nipples has aroused her.
The Man rips away her pants leaving her only in her light Grey panties exposed to the cold night air. The Man gets up and stands above her. She tries to move her legs again, but they are still unresponsive. He takes in her entire body. Her beautiful face twisted in fear and terror. Her nicely shaped breast with erect nipples. Her slender stomach. Her toned legs. And the small wet patch growing over her pussy. He smiles sadistically. He smiles sadistically at her and drops his robe, revealing his naked form. He is well built and has an 8-inch fully erect penis sticking out between his legs. He lays back down over her and she starts to punch him in the face. Much like when she hit him in the chest it feels as though she is punching a brick wall. The Man is unfazed by this and begins to caress her body again.
“Keep this up and I won’t be so gentle.” He growls at her. In response, she jabs his eye causing him slight pain.
“FUCK,” he yells. “I see you want to do this the hard way.”
The Man throws her left leg up unto her stomach and pushes her right leg out. She looks down in horror as he begins to rub the tip of his thick cock against the fabric of her panties sending shivers down up her spine. Suddenly the Man rips the panties away, and she can feel the tip of his dick pressing ever so slightly up against her entrance.
“Please, no, I’m begging you,” she pleads as more tears continue to fall down her face.
“You beg me, huh?” He responds. She weakly shakes her head yes.
“GOOD!” the Man howled as he rammed his dick deep inside her pussy, snatching away her virginity.
She screamed out in pain at the sudden intrusion. The Man’s dick filled her insides like a firm hot rod. Unwavering and sliding against every available surface. He thrust deeply every time, making sure to savory the feeling and the sounds of her pained screams. The feeling is painful yet oddly pleasuring for her as the man continues to rape her. She continues to try to push him off of her, but he only pulls her closer. Thrusting ever so harder and deeper breaking louder and louder screams from her. Soon their chest is pressed together, and his full girth is pounding away inside of her. She can feel his balls smack the start of her ass crack and his pubic hair tickle her clit with every thrust. Soon her screams make way to moaning, and she is loosely holding on to the Man. She Can feel the flex of his muscles and his hot breath on her throat. She can hear his faint grunts, and he takes pleasure in his latest victim. Her hands are around his back, now holding her firmly to his chest. She looks up at the full moon as she feels an orgasm rising. Suddenly the Man starts to suck on her neck, sending her body over the edge. Her toes curl in her boots, and she squirts hard on the Man’s dick as her body shakes with orgasm. “Ohhhhhh fuck no” she moans with a slight whimper still in her voice. The Man takes delight in this however and begins to pound her a little faster. She continues to look up at the moon, feeling betrayed by her body’s hornyness at the Man’s assault. He begins to play with her nipples again as he stretches her insides. Before long, she can feel another orgasm rising, and it seems to be for the Man as well as she can feel his dick clenching inside of her.
“Fuck” he moans into her ear, “you’re the tightest pussy I’ve ever raped.”
With this, the Man cums into her filling her womb with wave after wave of his hot seed. Each wave sends new jolts of pleasure across lianas body. The Man cums so much that it sprays out of her pussy before he even has a chance to pull out. He lays there on top of her for a while, catching his breath while her pussy continues to have small orgasms and clench around his still rock-hard dick. Eventually, he pulls out and she sights with relief, hoping the worst is over. But the man had different plans. While still leaking with his cum, the Man flips her over, pulls her onto her knees, and pushes her head down. (Face down, ass up) He once again positions his dick right against her pussy and thrust in with a newfound vengeance. This new angle stretches liana in a way she has never been stretched before. She cries out in pain and pleasure as the Man pounds away. He squeezes and smacks her ass as he does so, leaving bruises and small scratches here and there before focusing on her asshole, with some of their combined sexual juices that had leaked down her crack from their first round. He lubes up his finger and forces it into her tight asshole. Being a complete virgin. Liana had never had anything up her ass before and she found the experience weird but pleasurable. The Man continued the assault on her holes while she lay beneath him, completely lost in the pleasure of her rape. The Man continues to pound her pussy and finger her ass. After a while, he inserted a second finger sending jolts of pain down her spine, but she was too dazed to notice. She had been in constant pleasure and orgasm since he started this position. After a while, he folded her arms behind her and held her up so that she was leaning against him. Every thrust pushed her into the air, forcing her to crash back down on his dick. She could feel his tongue on the back of her neck. Tasting her sweat and caressing her skin. Her breast bounced openly, and her nipples were stimulated by the night’s cool breeze.
“Please don’t stop,” she whispers slightly under her breath.
“What did you say, you slut?” He asks as he continues to punish her pussy.
“Please don’t stop fucking me,” she whispers again.
The Man grunts as he blows another massive load inside of her causing her to once more quiver with orgasm. But this time, he bit her on the neck as he did. She screamed out in pleasure and pain as the vampire left his mark on her. After he finished, he dropped her onto the ground and got up to get his robe.
“I didn’t turn you into a vampire.” He spoke. “Not yet at least. Just a slave. Every time you touch the mark on your neck, I will come to you and make you mines again and again.”
This was the last thing she heard before passing out.
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