I just wrote a story for the first time, its regarding a fantasy of mine that involves casual nudity, and my wife getting naked for my friends. Not sure how good or bad i did and i would love to run it by someone, all constructive criticism welcome. Its only the beginning and i do plan to add more any help would be welcome. Also its a cuckold leaning story. Sorry if this is the wrong sub to ask for help.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/vi7nmt/looking_for_pointersediting_i_just_wrote_my_first
I’ll crit it for you
Honest answer: Just post it. You’ll see what happens.