Looking for pointers/editing. I just wrote my first story about casual nudity/my wife being naked [M28]

I just wrote a story for the first time, its regarding a fantasy of mine that involves casual nudity, and my wife getting naked for my friends. Not sure how good or bad i did and i would love to run it by someone, all constructive criticism welcome. Its only the beginning and i do plan to add more any help would be welcome. Also its a cuckold leaning story. Sorry if this is the wrong sub to ask for help.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/vi7nmt/looking_for_pointersediting_i_just_wrote_my_first

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