Preface: You’ll want to read the first parts of this story for context. Please feel free to let me know what you think. I’m new to writing and I’m still trying to find my style.
Part 5
Randal continued driving along the long dark country road, following a route perpendicular to that which would have otherwise taken them to Chloe’s house. Chloe’s concern grew as they deviated further from the main road. In all her years of friendship with Lorelei, Chloe had never seen Randal behave like this. She had no idea what to expect next.
“Randal, please speak to me. What are you thinking? Where are we going? I have to be at work tomorrow. I really can’t be out much later. Please. I’m sorry about what I did. I get your point now.”
“You said you’d do anything, right?” Randal said in an almost annoyed voice.
“Y.. yes. What do you have in mind? It can’t be anything ridiculous!” She said a bit louder, starting to regain some confidence.
“You can’t change parameters now. Either you’ll do any and everything I tell you to, or I can take you home and you can sort out your behavior with Lorelei tomorrow.”
“Fine. I’ll do ‘anything'” She replied slightly sarcastically, thinking she was calling his bluff.
“Very good. You can start by shoving these in your mouth.” He said as he removed her panties from his pocket and handed them back to her.
Taken aback, she took the panties and placed them into her mouth. “Maybe this won’t be so bad.” She thought to herself. After all she had just had those same panties in her mouth moments ago. This was nothing new to her. Just then Randal surprised her with a hard open hand slap to her left thigh.
“Ouhhhh!” A muffled cry escapes Chloe’s panty stuffed mouth. A clear open hand print begins to appear on her leg.
“I like the look and sound of that.” Randal slyly admitted. He was beginning to open up more to his idea of retribution. There were several things that turned Randal on in thought that he had never expressed to anyone. “Maybe she was right. Maybe I am too nice. Well we can take care of that tonight.” He thought to himself.
After driving south ten minutes or more, Randal saw a dirt road ahead and slowed to turn onto it. The last house they passed was over five minutes back and there were no other lights in sight. The car continued down the dirt road a while longer then slowed to a stop on the grassy edge of the road.
Chloe had been sitting like a statue with her eyes front. She was hoping not to antagonize Randal any further. When the car came to a stop she began to tremble, unsure what was to happen next.
Randal reached over grabbing Chloe’s jaw and forcefully turned it to face him. He stared directly into her eyes as he explained the rules to her. “You will not speak unless i tell you to. You will do exactly what i say, when i say it. You will not question me. If you break any of these rules you will be punished. Do you agree to these terms?” He said as he squeezed her cheeks firmly forcing her mouth open. He then placed his fingers into her mouth, retrieved her panties and placed them back into his pocket. “Before you reply, remember what the alternative is.” He added.
By this time Chloe’s drunkenness was beginning to fade. She actually wished she was still more drunk. She now had to make a clear decision without the aid of alcohol to blame it on. With Randal’s firm grip on her jaw she couldn’t look away. Her eyes darted side to side as she tried to weigh her options. It seemed like several minutes had passed and Randal had not broken his grip on her or his gaze into her eyes. Finally Chloe came to her decision.
“Yes.”
“Yes, what?” Randal inquired sternly.
“Yes, sir.” Chloe said as she dropped her eyes as low as she could, embarrassed at how weak she had become. Chloe finally resolved herself to do whatever was necessary to get to the end of the night as soon as possible. “It’s only one night. I can handle this. Besides, maybe it will be fun.” She thought to herself trying to motivate herself for the evening ahead.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/v0tgw3/randal_the_nice_guy_part_5