Author’s note: Hey there everyone. This is my first time writing an erotic story, so I’d love to get some critique on this. Both on what I did well and what I could improve on. In any case I hope you guys enjoy my story. Have a nice day! <3
**Chapter 1:**
It was just the day after my 18th birthday. A warm Saturday evening, my mom had gone out, both my older sisters had already moved in with their boyfriends. It was just me, my dad and his two best friends he had invited over to watch some football matches. I was in my room, relaxing in my bed, wearing my comfy black sweatpants with an equally black thong beneath, while my upper body was only clad in a loose pink tanktop. It wasn’t like I intended to go out today, so I figured there was no need to dress myself up all that neatly.
Suddenly my dad shouted from the living room: “Clara, honey. Could you come here for a second?” was all he said, no further explanation. I rolled my eyes and quickly answered. “Yeah, dad. I’ll be there in a minute.” I thought about changing first, but didn’t really see the point, so I decided to just head down the way I was dressed now. I came in, it seemed the football matches had finished, all of the three men must have had a lot of beer by now, judging by all the scattered empty beer cans laying on the ground. I look at them, with pretty tired eyes, no surprise considering how long I had stayed up on my birthday party last night. They were all sitting on a large couch, to the far left was Will, a tall muscular guy with gray eyes and dark brown short hair. In the middle was my dad, his typical proud smile whenever he saw me, looking at me up and down with his blue eyes. His hair had long since started thinning out, so he had recently decided to just shave it off to a few millimeters. And finally on the right side was Carl, a thin man with blonde hair and an almost frightening gaze, staring through me with his brown almost black eyes. All of them went to the same school together putting them all in their mid-forties.
“There you are sweetie. Look at her, hasn’t she grown into quite the beautiful woman?” My dad was always like this, with my sisters as well. He was just all so proud we have grown up to such ‘beautiful women’ as he likes to say. He wasn’t wrong of course, me and my sisters had all grown well shaped boobs, an ample inviting butt, were quite fit and had all pretty faces, inheriting our dad’s blue eyes. I wore my dark brown silky hair just a little over shoulder length, today it was open falling over my shoulders.
“She sure has, how old are you now?” Will answered, while nodding in agreement.
“I turned 18 yesterday.”
“Oh, really? Wow, how the time passes. I remember you still being about this size.” Will held his hand close above the ground, to emphasize his words. “But look at you now, an all grown up sexy woman.” He concluded.
Did he really just call me sexy? That was quite the bold thing to say, considering my dad was sitting right next to him. Then again my dad made no secret of being happy to have sexy daughters and liked it when we got lots of attention. I guess being such close friends they all had a relatively dirty mindset.
“Now could you please come a little closer, sweetie. I wanted to show these two just how much you have grown.” I looked at my dad with a little confusion. They could see me just fine from this distance, couldn’t they? Well what’s the harm in it anyway, so I might as well roll with it.
“Sure, dad.” I answered and slowly moved over to the three men. I could feel how their gazes traced my entire body. Did they notice I wasn’t wearing a bra, beneath my top, where my nipples poking through too much? Well it didn’t matter now. I reach them and now stand directly in front of them, their stares just seeming to intensify.
“Wow, you are even more gorgeous up close. You have absolutely amazing hot daughters, Mike.” Carl said, looking directly at my chest, not even trying to hide it. Weirdly it didn’t make me feel uncomfortable. But rather feel wanted, feel desired, feel sexy. A feeling I had really longed for, considering I didn’t get to hook up with any of the guys at yesterday’s party. I had spent the rest of the night locked up in my room masturbating in frustration and self-doubt. Finishing neither satisfied nor feeling better in the slightest.
“I know, she is amazing, right? She has grown in all the right places. What was your cup size again, sweetie?” My dad asks. Was he serious? Asking me about this infront of these two men, what was he thinking?
“Uhmm C-Cups.”
“See? She has grown some really nice tiddies, don’t you think?”
“For sure.” Will and Carl answered.
“Now Clare, why don’t you take that top off for us, so I can show them just how great your tits really look?”
I need a moment to realize what my dad just said. Take my top off? Was he crazy? Infront of his best friends, just show them my boobs, just like that? I know he liked to brag with me, but this?
“W-What?” Is all of an answer I could muster. My cheeks had flushed red, as these three horny men gazed at me. Somehow it made me feel hot, made me feel like a desirable woman. I felt a slight burning arousal filling my stomach.
“I want you to go topless for use, Clara my sweetie. I want to show my friends how sexy you have become.”
“Yes I heard that, but what kind of request even is this. I can’t just show off my tits like that.”
“Ooooh come on, sweetie. Do it for me, please. You know how proud of you I am, so be a good girl and do it for us.”
“Dad, really… I-I don’t know. Isn’t this a bit too much?”
“Don’t worry, Sweetie. I’m sure they’ll love looking at your tits, they look great. There is nothing to be ashamed of, you are a gorgeous woman. Please, do it for me.”
“A-Allright…” What was I saying? Did I seriously just agree to this? Why did I do this? This was crazy, I was about to go topless in front of three men, all roughly 25 years older than me. Was I insane?
“Thank you so much, Sweeite.” My dad stood up and laid his strong hand on my shoulder with an encouraging smile on his lips. There was no going back now. I had to do it, or I would greatly disappoint my dad. And somehow deep down, it felt like I wanted this, it felt like it’d help me forget my sexual frustration I felt last night.
My dad sat back down, looking up at me expectingly. I took three deep breaths, then grabbed the bottom part of my pink tank top. I slowly, but surely lifted it, first revealing my flat, well trained belly, inevitably approaching my chest. Just as the under parts of my boobs started to peak out I stopped and took another three deep breaths. Then in one smooth motion I practically tore down the top and threw it towards my dad. He caught it with a satisfied smile.
“Ohhh, my fucking god…” Carl said, his mouth wide open, as he blatantly stared at my bare C-Cups. My nipples had stiffened making them throw tiny little shadows over my areola, as the sun had begun to set and shone in a flat angle.
“Fuck… she didn’t even have a bra on. So hot.” Was Will’s remark, equally drooling over my body, staring just as much. My cheeks flushed in an even brighter red, as I felt myself getting devoured by their gazes.
“I know, right. My girl has got the best tits in the entire family. And those nips, don’t they make you just want to bite them?” The way all of them talked about me, the way they looked… it made me way too hot. It kindled my burning desire for sexual attention even stronger.
“Will and Carl… You can try touching them if you two want…” I hesitantly say. What was going on with me? How did this make me so horny? I could feel how my panties slowly grew a wet spot down below, I could feel how the knot in my stomach grew into an almost unbearable arousal.
“What the fuck man, your daughter is the best!” Carl exclaimed, not even hesitating a moment. He leaned forward and reached his left arm up towards my chest. His thin fingers closed around my right boob and dug into my soft flesh. He squeezed my boob firmly, my nipple poking his palm, as he felt me up.
“Yes she is really just perfect!” Will agreed, as his right hand reached for my free left boob. He immediately went after my nipple, rolling it between his thumb and index finger, pinching it, then twisting it. Finally he couldn’t resist and started groping me as well, feeling my softness.
“Hahaha, you two really seem to enjoy my daughter. That’s great! But say Clara, my dear. If we have taken it this far why don’t we show them how fine your entire body has grown. Why don’t you get completely naked for us and prove to them how gorgeous and sexy you truly are.” My dad laughed, as he happily watched me getting groped by his two best friends.
As Will and Carl heard that, they immediately stopped groping and looked at me with expectant eyes. “Yes please get naked for us!” They said, both at the same time.
“W-Well fine.” I couldn’t help it anymore, all I could think of now, was how horny this had gotten me, how badly I needed this appreciation. So this time I didn’t try to argue with my dad, this time I just obliged. I looked at them, and slowly traced my hands down my body, sexily rubbing over my chest, down my belly, until I reached my thighs. There I go back up again and grab the upper part of my sweatpants and pull them down in one swift motion. Now all that was left on my body was my black slim thong. I turned around, showing off my bubbly soft butt, as it was barely covered at all by my panties. I slowly bowed over, while grabbing the sides of my thong’, sticking up my but far in the air. I slid it down, this time slow and playful, revealing my clearly moistened up cleanly shaven pussy to them from behind. I stand there for a couple of seconds, allow them to enjoy the sight, take it in. Then I finally get back up, turn around and smile at them, standing there completely naked.
“Woooooow, what a fucking gorgeous butt, what a perfect pussy. And it’s so smoothly shaven too!” Will said, licking his lips, a bulge now clearly showing in his tight jeans.
“And did you see that. How wet she was? She is so turned on by showing us her body. Fuck, she is a real slut.” Carl said, with an even bigger bulge forming down there. Now those two really didn’t hold back on me anymore. They blatantly spoke out what they thought, even calling me a slut. But I felt neither disrespected nor offended, if anything it aroused me even more, as I could feel a little of my juices running down my inner thigh.
“Mmmmh, I told you two my daughter is absolutely perfect. And it seems she likes it too, right sweetie? Did this make your little pussy wet, did this make you horny?” My dad teasingly said with a smug grin.
“Y-Yes dad. I’m really wet… and… and I’m super horny too…” When had I gotten so bold? Being so honest with men… no, actually being so honest with myself. It was a completely new, freeing feeling to me. I wanted it, I wanted it so bad, I wanted to be a total slut.
“Good girl, then please show us. Show us how my girl gets herself off. Touch yourself for us.”
“Yes dad… with pleasure. I’ll masturbate for you, I’ll rub my pussy for you.” I get down on the low table, cast aside a few empty beer cans and sit on it in a laid back pose. Then I slowly open my legs revealing my dripping pussy to them, glistening in the sun rays coming in from the window. Will and Carl let out gasps, as they look at my nude body, visibly widening their eyes as they devour me with their gazes. I playfully smile and slowly trace my right hand down between my legs.
I use my index and middle finger to spread my folds apart, giving them an even deeper view. Carl took out his phone and seemingly started taking pictures, maybe even filming it all. My face flushes red in embarrassment, but I kept going. I place my hand on my clitoral hood and rub it in circles, showing off just how puffy and soft my pussy must be. My head snaps back a little, my left hand starts playing with my nipple, as first quiet moans and gasps escape my mouth. Will takes out his phone as well, now both men, eagerly taking pics and videos of the spectacle, as my dad sits in between them, with a self-satisfied smile on his face.
“Aaahh, yesss…” I moan, as I increase the pace, rubbing my clit stronger, with more pressure. Waves of pleasure, stronger than I had ever felt before pulsate through my body. My moaning grows louder, my juices flow down my legs, down my butt. It’s too much, I need something inside me, I need my fingers in me, I need them rubbing my inner walls, pleasing my vagina.
“Yes, fuuuuck, yes. Watch me finger my slutty pussy, watch me!” I scream, as my head snaps back even further, my back stretches out, my legs raise into the air, my toes curl up. My fingers slide into my pussy, I fingerfuck myself, both my middle and ring finger buried deep inside my warm and wet pussy. They rub my insides, as my thumb stays on my clit, pleasuring it, rubbing it, pressing it. My entire hand gets slowly covered in pussy juices, as I never felt this amount of arousal before. I couldn’t hold myself back any longer. Quickly I reach my climax, getting close to cumming hard in front of these three men.
“Fuck, I’m cumming, watch me cum for you, watch this slutty pussy cum… ahhhhhhh.” Waves of the purest form of pleasure rattle me to the bone. My entire body starts shaking strongly, as my pussy contracts wildly, cumming hard with my fingers deep inside. I keep fingerfucking my pussy, keep rubbing my clit as I cum, driving me insane. I moan, I scream, I tremble. The orgasm goes on and on, I forget everything around me. All that exists for me at that moment is the overwhelming pleasure, my nude body enjoying itself to the fullest. It was so much, it was way too much. As the final waves of the orgasm pulsate through me, my body just collapses on the table in exhaustion. My conscience slowly slips away, as I pass out right there, a panting wet mess.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/uyuc45/how_i_became_a_perfect_slut_fmmm_masturbation
Loved it want more
Started OK, got more unbelievable as time went on, culminating in some pretty egregious r/menwritingwomen material.
It was good. I have to agree that as soon as the main character went topless it all felt very forced and unnatural.
The action itself was ok, but the dialogue didn’t make much sense.