I want to push your beautiful ass down on your bed and crawl on top of you putting my weight into you so i can feel all of you across me. i want us to kiss passionately feeling your tounge against mine sharing saliva and bitting lips. I want to move my hands up your shirt and slowly caressing your body moving up your body till i take off your shirt and bra afterwards kissing and bitting your neck. Ill take off my shirt as well and gentely push you on your back kissing you down your chest till i make it to your wonderfuly soft and squishy breast. Ill then take my time on each one feeling then with my hands and mouth kissing and sucking on your nipples flicking my wet tounge on them swirling it around and arounnd on one while my hands had the other. After i feel you really moving from pleasure I’ll go lower kissing you lower and lower till i get to your panties. I’ll grab them with my teeth and pull then down using my hands to help.After i get them off ill start at your toes suckking on the big one and moving up your leg with kisses teasing you the closer i get to your wet place. Ill then gently kiss you down there and lick around your clit still exciting you getting you wetter and wetter playing with your lower lips tracing your opening with my tounge before i go all out and in. I want to make you cum multiple times as i fondle your breast and play with your nipples.i want to feel your juices all over my face, i want to feel them flowing as my tounge is inside you. When I’m done making you cum and enjoying your taste i want you to grab my hand and lead me back up to kiss you some more having you taste yourself off of me. I want you to then have me lay down and you climb onto me and kiss me fevorishly not giving me time for anything else but an ocassinal breath. All while gringing on my leg so i can feel the excitment aginst my leg. Still while doing that i want you to move your hand over my pants gently touching my throbbing member waiting to be played with. I want to be griping your waist softly and a even softer breast in the other. I want you to then pull off the remaining clothes kiss me while your full weight is against me both as naked as the day we were born kinda wet and sticky already i want you to gently drag your fingers down my body and legs then going back up toward my cock wich is probably alil wet with pre cum. I want you to look at me in the eyes as you slowly put me into your mouth feeling my member against your lips as you move your tounge in ways that make me quiver from pleasure. I want you to feel the heart beat thru my cock that’s raging hard and inside your mouth. I want to feel your fingers and hands playing with my balls maybe squeezing gentely. I want you fell me cumming in your throat and mouth having you not stop till I’m squirming in the bed and still keep going. I want to see you swallow my seed. And after i want to go back to kissing with me moving my hands down your body slowly carresing you and feeling you.When i finally reach your sweet bare pussy ill feel how wet you are and use both my hands to please you one on to breast twisting and pinching your nippple the other seeing how wet you are feeling you sweet opening and playing with your clit alil before i put a finger inside slowly feeling you abit inside and having us enjoy before going faster and faster moving my hand from your breast to your clit so i can keep both hands focused down there’ when i finaly get you to cum and get your sweet tastey juices all over my hands i want to bring them up and clean them off together. I finally want you to whisper something in my ear before you get on top of me slowly tease me cock against your pussy and finally take my virginity. I want you ride me slow barely moving having your while body against mine and kissing me hard biting lips and being drunkenly and passionately attached at the mouth after a minute i want you to pull up push me down and ride me while i grip your waist and ass. I want you to call me sweet names . I want while your riding me to suck on your breast an have you pull my hair and head further into your round and soft tits. I want you to when I’m close pull out and edge me let calm down and let me play wit your ass maybe let me eat it out slowly tounging it till its nice amsd wet then ill add a finger and have you go back to riding but putting it in your ass instead i want you to ride me while playing wirh your pussy so you can get off ontop of me. Amd when im ready and about to cum i want you to force yourself onto me and let me cum in your ass slowly pulling out to keep as much of my seed in you as possible. Then i want you to kiss me alil more while we hold our naked selves next to each other and cuddle in our filth till morning.
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