The shower. A [m]ale response to yumelunarose’s[F] excellent story.

The Shower

I was lying there watching your chest rise and fall, slowly, rhythmically, hypnotically. Last thing I remember was collapsing from exhaustion with you in my arms. Just before that I was inside you, both of us covered in sweat. Tired and relieved. Drained but happy. I must have passed out moments after you closed you eyes and fell asleep with a smile.

My skin felt a little sticky from our lovemaking so I slipped out of the covers, trying my best not to wake you up, and I walked to the bathroom. Flipped on the light and glanced up from the sink. In the mirror my chest glistened in the light. I glanced over at the bed again, and you were still there, sleeping. Debating on whether or not I should return to bed and wake you with a kiss, I walked to the shower and turned it on, as hot as I could take, waited until the shower door steamed up and went in. The wave of warmth that washed over me reminded me of your body … yeap … hard again.

I started to wash up and moved my hands slowly down my body until I started touching myself. My hands felt rough, too rough nothing compared to your warmth and softness. Before long I realized I couldn’t stop. The memory of us together was overwhelming . My legs started to waver and I felt a small weakness to my knees. I knew I was close, my heart was racing with every stroke and I was lost in the moment. I threw my head back, arched my back and almost let go.

I felt a hand on my shoulder. I looked behind me and you were there..You pulled me closer to you, our bodies were touching and I was hard pressed between us. It felt good and I was not embarrassed. Secretly I wanted you to find me. I wanted you to share the pleasure with me. I wanted you to enjoy it.

I could feel warmth coming from under you. We started making out. Like crazy, as if we were teenagers again. Moving our tongues in a forceful dance. Getting on your knees was the most erotic thing I had ever seen. You crawled foreword and slid the head into your mouth. … You started licking it, slowly at first but more vigorously soon. You said you loved to taste it. You loved the shape and the size. I was close already and the way you looked up to me made me lose it … There was no turning back now and although you were warned you just pressed on until I released in your mouth, while you looked up with a grin.

It was time for me to return the favor. I pulled you up close to me and turned you around. The water was flowing on your back as you opened up to me. I let it run down on you passing over your beautiful ass. Slowly, I spread your legs apart and started getting closer and closer to your sensitive area.

You could feel my hot breath combined with the constant hot pressure of the water running down, teasing your clit. My tongue started moving on its own since my mind was swimming in lust. I closed my eyes and surrendered to the sensation. I lost track of time and the only thing keeping me focused was your soft moans and your increasing rhythm.

You started pushing back a bit and before I know it your hands were squeezing your breasts and your breath quickened. You were almost there. You started calling my name. Pleading for me to enter you.
You were going crazy, but I was ready too. I grabbed your hips, and with a fluid motion push all the way inside you. You instantly reached back and grabbed me, moving your body backwards to meet mine. The sounds, smells and touches were sending sparks throughout my body. There was so much heat and we were both going crazy.
“Faster!” you screamed through your moans. “Please, harder!”

And just like that my pounding got harder. You could feel every inch of me inside you. Touching every spot , big or small. When your pleasure nerves started going on overdrive you arched your back in ecstasy. All you wanted were a few hard pushes to surrender to pleasure. And I was there to provide them. Our bodies were now moving with a manic rhythm and you were making the most erotic sounds. Again and again I was pushing up inside of you, making you go insane.

And then you felt it… you started cumming, with a raw energy. Your legs were shaking and you could not hold yourself. You felt me grow inside you and that made your orgasm climax. Your skin felt amazing. You were so overwhelmed that you failed to register my soft complains … I will cum … I said. I should pull out ..
. I protested, but I did not really mean it…

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