Author’s Note: Avid readers it’s finally happened……I got myself an editor.
That’s right no more faux pas or gotcha moments where my storytelling doesn’t make sense…..grammar wise at least.
Pretty sure there will still be mistakes but my NEW editor starting on Chapter 257 will help pave the way for a new style….and hopefully a more enhanced and greater story.
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Story/Writing: u/Lightning454572
Editing: u/Comfortable-Bid-602
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*Summer*
I sat in a room the attendants called a ‘*Sensory Reallocation*’ room; we sat as our senses rushed back into us. I could see again; the room was dimly lit, and soft, calming music played, allowing my hearing to return while I sprawled nude on some pillows.
Ok, I wasn’t wholly nude; I had a towel wrapped around my body, but still.
I felt like my mind had overloaded after having all my senses deprived. Supposedly I spent an hour bobbing in that tank of water. However, it felt like an eternity as whatever was in there continued to lightly lick my body, scaring the crap out of me. Still, nothing ever bit me, causing pain. Just an annoying sense that something was nibbling at my body, but each time I went to touch myself feeling for the culprit, the only thing I felt was my own body.
It was maddening having the feeling, but after the seventh or eighth time, I gave up trying to find the perpetrator, just associating the sensation as part of whatever they added to the tank.
Ok, I may have swatted at my body when the sensation of something nibbling or licking my body lasted longer than a few seconds. But each time, I felt nothing.
And it wasn’t like the sensations were focused on one central location or anything. Still, more than once, it seemed like they were focused on critical areas of my body. I eventually chalked up the experience to Lilith’s taking effect.
Eventually, I said fuck it and just bobbed around, letting myself relax.
I lightly made a mental note to ask the attendants what exactly they put in the tank, but at the moment, my mind was re-aligning my senses again.
I sat on the pillows, wrapped in a towel, and inhaled the incense. I casually let whatever was on me dry off.
I sat there for a moment before my first comrade in the deprivation dunking was escorted into the same room with me. I lightly smiled as I saw it was Kelly.
I smiled, “How’s it going Kelly?”
Kelly looked around the dim room, finally seeing me lying on the pillows, “Oh, there you are. Sorry I couldn’t see you right away.”
I lightly chuckled, “Yeah same here. Your senses are still re-aligning after being deprived for so long. Sit.”
I padded the pillows next to me, informing her I wanted her to sit next to me.
Kelly looked around, “No chairs?”
I smiled as I slowly shook my head, “None that I see.”
Kelly lightly huffed before smiling at me and finally plopped down on the pillows.
Kelly sat quietly for a moment as she laid back with her eyes closed before I decided to ask the question that was nagging at me, “Hey, Kelly?”
Kelly made a sound, “Hmmm?”
I spoke lightly, asking my question, “Did you feel anything in the tank with you?”
I turned my head to look at Kelly and gauge her reaction. I saw her face twist a little bit. She obviously recalled her experiences in the tank before shaking her head slowly as she spoke, “Not really.”
I spoke, “Really?”
I watched her shrug, “Other than my imagination trying to play games with me.”
*Hmmmmm*
Was my mind playing tricks on me?
It was possible, but I could have sworn I didn’t imagine the sensations. It felt like something actually latched onto my body more than once, but I wasn’t too sure due to my body tingling. Before Kelly came in and after the attendant left me alone, I looked at my body. I could have sworn something did latch on to my nipples, only to find an ultra erect nipple. That is all. And in the dim light, it was hard to tell if there was anything there.
Kelly looked at me as I thought, “Did you?” as she sent my own question back at me.
I looked at her and sighed, “Same I guess.”
Kelly mused and shrugged before laying her head back straight and closing her eyes, letting her senses flood back.
We laid there in silence for a few more moments before I spoke again, “Hey Kelly?”
Kelly mused again as she sounded, “Hmmm?”
I looked at her, “Do you feel any different?”
She turned her head, looking at me, “Meaning?”
I sighed as I added, “Any more horny? Or at least hornier than normal?”
She looked up, and again I could tell she was checking her internal body. She considered what she felt before turning back to me to face me, “Sort of.”
She turned her head back to face up, “Ask me again in a few minutes after my brain reboots.”
I lightly growled as I honestly felt like I wasn’t any hornier and that Nadia had lied to us.
Just then, the door opened, and a figure entered our room…..just the person I wanted to speak to…….Nadia.
Gabe
I was led into a dim room after spending an eternity sitting in water. I nearly fell asleep more than once and nearly drowned each time I let my head dip into the viscous liquid. I walked in with a towel wrapped around my waist, and another draped over my shoulders.
I found my girls and our new companion, Nadia, had already moved from their tanks to this room.
And I was happy to see them in good spirits as they all smiled at me when I entered the dimly lit room. However, I questioned why all of them were sitting on the plethora of pillows. I looked around to find there wasn’t a single chair in the room.
Summer instantly smiled, “Come. Sit.” She padded the bundle of pillows next to her. Kel moved from her location as they indicated they wanted me to sit in between them.
I shrugged as I moved over to where they wanted me to sit and simply plopped down onto the pillows, nearly rolling back as the drop was significant. Still, I managed to right myself and not put a Gabe-sized ball dent in the wall behind me.
Then I simply sat there looking at my girl’s seeing that they had towels of their own that they had let simply fall, letting their forms bask in the dimness. And they weren’t the only ones, as Nadia had also let her towel simply lay underneath her. However, I had long ago been accustomed to her form as that is how I met her when she first exited her room.
Kel was the first to speak, “How was your time in the chamber?”
I looked at Kel and shrugged, “Alright I guess. Could have used some extra water in there as it didn’t fully cover me until I literally had to sit down.”
Nadia giggled at me, talking about my height. I faced a long list of inconveniences being vertically challenged.
Summer chuckled but asked, “Did you at least relax?”
I looked at Summer and again shrugged, “As much as the next person, I guess.” I really didn’t want to mention that I nearly tried to drown myself a few times due to sitting in the water and falling asleep, making it difficult to relax. She would never let me live that down, and I knew it.
Summer frowned at me before she shrugged as she looked at Nadia, “You’ll get used to his noncommittal personality.”
Nadia chuckled and smiled at me, “I gathered that.”
I looked at the girl, “How was your time in the chambers?”
Nadia mused as she lightly moaned out, “Fantastic!!!”
I looked at her weirdly but moved on to Kel, who shrugged, “It was alright, definitely relaxed.”
I looked at Summer, who blushed but spoke, “Weird but good.”
I was expecting more or less the same kind of outcome as I had as I thought it was alright but definitely not fantastic. But each girl described a universal liking of their time in the chamber.
Well, most except Nadia.
I looked at Summer and Kel, pointing my chin at Nadia, “Why is her experience better than yours?”
Kel smiled wide as she laughed.
Summer grumbled as her cheeks looked red in the dim light but muttered, “Ask her.”
Kel started chuckling more.
I looked at Nadia, “Well what did you do different compared to us?”
Nadia leaned forward with her own mischievous smile, “You really want to know?”
I looked obviously missing something but shook my head, confirming I wanted to know.
Nadia smiled mischievously; she crawled up to me, forcing me to lay down as she continued until her face was mere inches from mine as she leaned down more. Her mouth got centimeter’s from my ear as she whispered, “I masturbated while I was in there.”
The moment she whispered those words in my ear, my eyes went wide and made my dick instantly hard.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/uvh8ye/step_sister_corruption_part_262_day_139_free_use
Liked this very much but the second part needed some spacing between the text like in the first part. Also, did you mean part 267 or has the editor already started?
Liked this very much