Just a fictional story I wrote… It’s my first one so I would welcome any feedback or comments about it, feel free to comment or message me about it.
**Be-beep** A WhatsApp message. It was from my girlfriend, Louise. She had taken Friday off and gone back to her home town for the weekend to see her old friends. Now it was Saturday evening, she was meant to be coming home late tonight, but knowing her it would probably be the early hours of tomorrow morning. The message was an eight second video of the inside of her car, currently
lit up by some LED tape sellotaped to the dash, drum and bass playing so loud it distorted though the speakers, parked up in the dark on some country road with the headlights on. So typical of her I thought, always the epitome of class. At least she wasn’t in the Maccie D’s carpark this time.
I typed a reply,
“You’re having a good time then? You’re going to drain the battery with all that crap running and the engine off! Don’t worry I’ve got jump leads ;) Where the hell are you though? XD”
“Went for a drive round while the roads are quiet before I head back, such a gorgeous evening! I don’t know, parked in front of a field! I’ll text you when I set off xx”
About 15 minutes later, another video message **Be-beep**, this time she was trying to start the engine, the lights on the HUD and the headlights were flickering but the engine wasn’t starting.
“What do I fucking do!” was the caption on it. I wrote back,
“Jeez I thought you call yourself a car girl! I fucking told you you would kill the battery! Just turn everything off, lights, music, wait a min and then try starting it again!” Ten minutes and no response. I messaged again,
“Well? Did it work?”
**Be-beep** just a downloaded picture this time, a faked book cover of someone pointing at an engine, with the title “Learnabout Garages: It’s Totally Fucking Fucked Mate, Big Time. A Ladybird Book”
I was a bit worried, she was in the middle of no where and it was starting to get pretty late. I messaged her straight back
“Ah crap, do you need me to come jump your car?”
Another 10 minutes, I was starting to get a bit more worried and **Be-beep**
“Nooo it’s bloody miles, it’ll take you over an hour! Don’t worry one of my friends is coming. He doesn’t have leads, but a random guy I met down the pub four years ago was online, I messaged him and he said he has some and that he will come. Fingers crossed! Not got much battery left on phone and I need it to message them, so I’ll chat to you later. And stop worrying – I know you and I know you will be worrying! I’m fine! xx”
I said out loud to myself,
“Yeah sure, just stop worrying!”
I thought, well I suppose her friend will make sure she’s OK and I can’t do anything whilst I’m here. She had a lot of friends she kept in touch with, almost exclusively male. She always flirted effortlessly
with guys, sometimes not even realising she was doing it, but rarely ever got on with girls. Within a few days of meeting her she had told me in fairly explicit detail about her wild past, messaging guys,
fuckboys and couples online, sexting them, meeting up with them. Most of her friends were people she had started talking to in those days. I remember it was what made me first fancy her, hearing the stories. My favourite was the one where a couple asked her to have a threesome with them on their wedding night. She had said she never went through with that one, she had arranged it and then got last minute nerves, but just hearing it had made me burst out laughing, so taboo to do that on your wedding night of all nights. Taboo and hot. I told her how hot I found that idea, that the thought of swinging turned me on. I told her that if I had been there I would have tried to calm her nerves and talk her back into doing it. I remember her smile when I said that, it was what we first bonded over.
These days she wasn’t as keen on taking risks any more, but still liked sexting people when I wasn’t there to entertain her, and sometimes even meeting up when she trusted someone. She knew she always had permission from me when she wanted some fun and I wasn’t around, as long as she told me the story next time we were back together.
Those happy memories distracted me for a while, but then I started worrying again as I checked how long it had been. I tried and failed not to think about it for a while, until eventually I was put out of my misery about 45 minutes later, **Be-beep**. A photo of her bonnet up, jumps being attached by one guy as another stood watching. The caption read
“All sorted!”
Well at least it’s all OK now I thought. We messaged,
“Thank fuck for that!”
“I know right! Engine is running now, see you in about an hour and a quarter xx”
It was 12:30 now and I needed to get some sleep, but I couldn’t, not until I knew she was safely back. I waited, much more relaxed now I knew she was OK, but not quite at ease. Finally at 2:17 she came through the door.
“Are you OK? Journey take a bit longer than expected?” I asked.
“Yes I’m good, I knew you would still be worrying! Glad I’m finally back. It was such a banging night until the car trouble!” she said. She sat down on the sofa and kicked off her shoes. She carried on,
“Those guys totally saved my life though, I was pretty scared until they showed up. I knew it would only make you worry more if I said though!”
“Yeah, you definitely owe them both a beer after that, probably two!” I joked.
“Well actually I told them I was so grateful that I should suck them off to say thanks” she said, with just a hint of a smirk. She paused and watched me for my reaction. My tongue caught in my throat for a moment, she had caught me totally off guard with that one.
“Well did you?” I blurted out once I could speak again.
“Stories aren’t free.” she said. She pulled down her leggings and underwear, moved her legs apart slightly and beckoned me with a finger. As I moved closer she then pointed, first down at the floor, and then between her legs. I silently dropped to my knees and leaned in closer to her.
“Eat me out and I’ll tell you what happened whilst you do it” she said. I started to kiss around her soft lips, then slid my tongue between them, finding her clit and moving round it, gently, slowly.
“Their eyes almost popped out when I said that, haha, I loved how keen they both were. Jack already knew what a total THOT I used to be, but I’d never done anything with him before other than just the occasional flirt. I think he had wanted me to say that to him for a long time! The other guy Dan, the random guy from the pub years ago I told you about, he bought me a drink that time I met him and tried to hit on me. I messaged him a few times over the next few days, but hadn’t spoken to him since then. He definitely only came to help because he wanted to see if he could get another chance.
“Dan said ‘That sounds fair to me!’ and then I looked at Jack and he just nodded with a massive grin on his face. Not the sexiest look to be honest, but at least he was keen! Fuck I felt so sexy standing there with two guys looking at me like that. Like two lions looking at an antelope!” I barely held back a laugh and gave her one much firmer lick to show her I was keen for her to start telling me the juicy details.
“Mmm” she moaned appreciatively.
“Patience sweetie, I’m getting to it. So I said to them, ‘who wants to go first then?’ Jack said ‘blow him first, I want to watch.’ So I grabbed Dan’s hand and pulled him closer, got down on my knees, pulled out his cock and started sucking him. He was already rock hard before I even pulled it out, it turned me on so much and made me feel so sexy. Well, you know how I like it when I get horny baby, so I looked up at him, right into his eyes and said ‘I want you to fuck my mouth, make my mascara
run.’”
She knew I loved it when she was slutty, I started going faster, a bit more pressure to show her my pleasure. I was rock hard too, it had happened instantly when she said ‘fuck my mouth’.
“Urrrh that feels good baby, but I want your tongue inside now, use your fingers on my clit.” I did as she told me, running my tongue down and moving a hand up to carry on where my tongue had stopped. She loved me putting my tongue inside, but I couldn’t do it for that long before it made
my tongue ache from stretching out like that, so I needed to pace myself. I just started with licking round and just the occasional dart of the tip of my tongue inside.
“And I did not need to tell Dan twice! Ah… he was just how I like, grabbed my hair and pushed me all the way down. No niceties, just using my mouth. I think Jack liked it too, he liked it so much he couldn’t wait his turn and started jerking it as he watched! Well I felt bad making him wait, so I stood up bending over, still sucking Dan, pulled my leggings down to my ankles…” I felt her place her hand on the back of my head and push me in close ever so slightly, but firmly.
“and pushed my ass out towards Jack. He got the message, he grabbed my waist and thrust deep inside me, oh baby it felt so good those two cocks inside me, two men wanting me, to use me” She ran her fingers through my hair, and then gripped a handful. She pushed me in more forcefully, and started to buck her hips, grinding her pussy into my face.
“I’m close baby, go inside now, deeper. Can you guess the ending yet baby? Can you taste the ending?” I flipped her off with my middle finger but didn’t stop what I was doing.
“Hahah!” She laughed at my show of impotent rage as I carried on licking and obeyed her instruction to go deeper. That bitch, she was toying with me. She could see how horny I was and knew I would never stop now, not for anything. She was right, I thought she tasted just a little different, but didn’t think about it, didn’t recognise it. How could I, I had never tasted it before. But I could taste it now. More and more of it as I went deeper.
“Poor little Jack was so desperate and had been jerking off so much that he didn’t even last a minute inside me. As soon as Dan started to cum in my mouth it pushed Jack over the edge seeing it and he did one last thrust all the way in, balls deep in my pussy and came. Fuck, they were both pumping it in down my throat and deep in my pussy. I’ve never felt so used, such a cumslut, it was amazing! Don’t worry baby, I trust Jack, I’ve known him for years, he’s clean. Keep tonguing me, yes, deeper baby, deeper! FUCK ME! Uuuuggh yes baby, yes…” She pushed her hips forward as far as she could, pulled me in so tight she was almost crushing my face and held me there as she came. I kept licking as deep as I could and rubbing her clit until she finished and collapsed back in the seat, letting go of my hair
and releasing me. I stayed down on my knees in front of her, my head now just resting on her thigh looking up at her face and seeing her expression of total bliss and exhaustion.
“You absolute Bitch!” I said, standing up, raising my voice and lowering my tone. I had only got angry with her maybe once or twice since I had known her. I hated the feeling of being angry and she almost never gave me any reason to be, but at that moment I could feel my cheeks burning red, humiliated, shocked, not knowing what to think or do. She suddenly recoiled in the seat and tensed up, looking panicked and maybe just a little scared.
“Baby, look me in the eyes and tell me you didn’t enjoy that.” She said, a slight crack in her voice. I stared at her for a few seconds, felt my cheeks still burning bright red and then looked down at the floor. Damn it, I hated when she was right. And she was always right. Her whole body relaxed, she moved forward in her seat again as she broke into a beaming smile and spoke, her voice back to being full of confidence again,
“Oh thank God I was so stressed there haha! I was so sure you would like it baby, and I was right, you are a total cuck! Hahaha! That’s so fucking hilarious!” She said, moving her hand up to her mouth to try and cover her laughter. She saw me wince at her words.
“Oh I’m sorry babe, I love you so much, you know that right?”
I was trying to hold back the smile and laughter, still feeling humiliated, but as soon as she said ‘I love you’ I couldn’t hold it back any more and looked up at her. One look in those eyes and her beautiful smile and I remembered why I never got angry with her.
“Fuck you. Fuck you, you fucking bitch!” I said, laughing slightly despite trying not to, my voice now gentle and calmer.
“I am so pissed off with you right now! And horny. Pissed off and horny.” As I said it I could see Louise was desperately trying not to laugh any more as I said it, still with a smile on my face and in a light playful tone. Suddenly I felt over the humiliation, seeing her lovingly gaze at me. But I realised underneath the happiness I really was pissed off. It was time to get even. I dropped the smile. I heard my voice change back to a lower tone again as I said,
“That was was a really fucking mean thing to do without asking.” She raised an eyebrow as I said it and replied,
“Yeah it was, wasn’t it? So what are you going to do about it then?”
I felt my body straighten up, my muscles tensing as my inner caveman came bubbling to the surface.
“You’ve been a bad girl. And bad girls need to be taught a lesson.” I said, not angry, still completely calmly, and even still quite gentle, but now firm. From her reaction, biting her lip as I said it, I could tell I was in the right voice now.
“Oh daddy, I’ve been such a bad girl.”
Well thats the end of this one for now… Hope you enjoyed it! I have a couple of others I want to write which are a lot more male dom and female sub, both involving more than just the two people like this one did. Please do let me know if you would like to read those, and also if you would like the next part of this story (I haven’t thought of it yet, but might work on it if people are interested).
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