First time writing like this

Was this it? My cock was ready to explode. Every stroke of her graceful hands led me closer to climax. Her rhythm changed. She was going faster! And louder, my breaths got deeper. This was it. My eyes closed, when I opened them they saw a different sight. My bedroom? Fuck, another erotic dream just to clean up my pants.

I was about 3 months into school, senior year. Almost everyone had lost their virginity this summer. Not me, same old me. I was desperate. I almost fell for one of those “Hot girls near me” ads on the hub. First period was always the worse, however there was one sight that made time almost stop. Jessica Beverly, god she looked like she was straight out of a magazine. She was always the quiet, skinny girl. Not anymore, her body grew as well as her personality. I tried talking to her in the past but she was out of my league. Few hours past and I’m in my anatomy class. Coincidentally she was also in my anatomy class. Want to guess the subject for today? That’s right, female anatomy. I was a pretty smart kid, the human body fascinated me so I knew most of female anatomy as well. Ironic because I still was single. Daydreaming in my head the teacher calls on me. Care to explain what this part is? Uhh, the clitoris? Correct. Every girl looked at me like I was some kind of perv. I felt ashamed but my teacher was a bitch for picking me out like that. Anyways, bell rings and I walk out like usual. Except, Jessica stopped me, she said “for a virgin like you it’s impressive you knew what the clit is”. I blushed, it was a compliment and an insult at the same time. Before I could say anything she slipped a note into my pocket. It was her phone number! She said to text her after school. A thousand thoughts rushed through my head. Excitement, fear, arrogance. I get home and the first thing I did was text her. I asked her why she gave me her phone number and she said “Someone like you shouldn’t be a virgin”. Holy shit, what did she mean? We were only a few houses apart but I wanted to talk in person. On my way there she said her parents weren’t home. Like something from a 2016 vine I ran over. It was about 4 so it was getting kinda dark. I knocked and there she was, short shorts and sports bra. Was this it? Don’t tell me I fell asleep doing my homework. She grabbed my wrist and brought me to her room. Holy shit! Holy shit! Before I could say anything we were kissing. Her lips were so warm, they met mine so gracefully. Her hands around my neck mine around her waist. Despite being a virgin I knew what parts to touch, kiss, suck, lick. After a minute of kissing I was on top of her. My hands met her wrists but they didn’t leave. My lips drifted from hers to her neck, to her collarbones, breasts, stomach. Down to her “parts”. You know where the clit is right? Uh y-yeah. It was easier to see on a diagram not a real girl! I put my tongue on it hoping I landed the right spot. Her breathing intensified, okay so this was the clit. I began sucking like I saw in porn and her moans got deeper along with my fingers. She let out a cute gasp that made my cock throb. She said, let me pleasure you now. This was it! We switched positions and she was now on top. Her hands followed my abs down to my v line. Her graceful hands met my cock but never left. She began sucking. It was so warm, wet, beautiful. I started to breathe heavy. Unngh, It felt so good I didn’t want it to end. Her tempo changed. Her hand speed increased and so did my arosual. This was it, I’m cumming. I let out the biggest load ever. Landed on her mountainous breasts and she licked it off like a pornstar. I had did it. I lost my virginity

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