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Being a little behind schedule the boy started to run up the station steps as he heard the growing hum of the incoming Metro train, which would take him back to the University campus on the outskirts of town. He was an exchange student who would study in the University but also experience the culture that the city had to offer before returning home a year later. Slightly out of breath he reached the platform just as the train was arriving and stood there regaining his composure.
The train was much busier than usual for the time of day and evidently, with no spare seats, he had to stand in the vestibule near the door along with a small group of girls. They were obviously locals and one of them had been taking her younger brother out for the day, but wanting to lighten the burden, had brought her friends with her to chat and relax in their shorts and skirts under the warm summer sun, maybe even study a little if it was necessary. By chance they were now all heading back to the University initially as strangers but with the opportunity to lightly interact with each other in the carriage.
The girl whose brother it was was maturing into a confident young woman and was open for passing a minor jest that it was lucky he just made it in time for the train. She could see his slightly reddened face and his forming chest panting somewhat. Maybe she had also caught his eye as he was reaching the platform and wanted to acknowledge the similar plight suffered by most students. Not being fluent in the language he tried to answer as best he could but also politely excused himself for the errors in his speech.
The girl turned to her friends and said something in local slang to them and they laughed playfully together. But not to be rude, she also turned back to the boy with a wink as if to acknowledge that it was a cute joke more than anything and she was in fact open for chatting further.
The journey in total was around 30 minutes from the leafy suburbs of the East side of town to the campus on the West and in that time an easy bond was forged between them sharing quips and jokes of student life sometimes switching in and out of languages. The carefree but also also maternal nature of the girl in question standing alongside her younger brother was attractive to the boy and those in the group could feel the slight air of excitement and nervousness between the two, but they allowed it to develop freely and with subtle encouragement.
The girl sometimes looped her hair in her fingers and allowed her bronze legs to catch the eyes of the boy. As they approached the station, the girl asked politely but also with a little force if they would like to hang out together as she had the rest of the day free. She gave a slight glance to her friends as if to give them warning that their presence was no longer needed and they should go their own way. The boy accepted the offer and the group left the train together. The girl friends parted ways and headed for the bike racks while she explained that her mother would soon be here to pick up her brother.
Sure enough the child was reunited with the parent and the girl briefly mentioned she was spending time with her friend Max, pointing to the boy. While going along with this, he didn’t question that they hadn’t actually exchanged names yet and therefore felt a thrill of excitement as the girl appeared to be planning a secret soiree. Finally alone, the two headed to the bike racks to pick up the girl’s bike. The boy did not own one in fact and so it was decided he would ride on the back while the girl rode. An amusing situation he thought and also secretly relished.
As they set off he put his hands around her waist for stability but soon she had to interchange between this and standing further forward in order to develop more power. She laughed as she struggled to keep an even pace and sometimes had to rest back into his open legs often creating a stimulating grinding sensation together. The wind blew on her skirt a little and raised up enough to catch a glimpse of her brightly coloured underwear, but the boy chivalrously helped to protect her dignity by spreading the skirt backdown along her thigs, at least it could be seen that way, maybe he was also caressing them tenderly as she eased pace. At one point, as if in response, she sat further back squarely into his lap increasing the bar of tension further. She could detect that the boy was being slightly aroused by this affair and once more they laughed together as they approached her flat.
The boy became a little embarrassed by the bulge in his crotch as she stepped off the bike in a graceful manner that concealed the contact made during the ride. She grabbed him gently, not by the hand, but by the wrist and led him inside. Her single dorm was only small but well kept and a gentle breeze blew through her window which helped to raise a few goosepimples across both their skins.
She closed and locked the dorm door and moved closer to the boy. She was a little smaller than him but of adequate height to look up slightly to his eyes but yet remain an equal. They edged yet closer and interlocked fingers. Neither were particularly experienced and they became a little more nervous now, with it being apparent that the previous maternal strength had subsided from the girl. In a slow but deliberate manner they leaned in closer and touched lips as a smile spread across both their faces. Pulling her in closer and locking his arms around her lower back and then down towards her pert buttocks she could now feel the inevitable rise of his penis resting against her stomach. Significantly more aroused she adjusted slightly in order to touch the proud throbbing head with her hands through his cotton shorts.
Delicately the strangers began to remove their tops and the boy could now feel her erect nipples through her lacey bra pressing against his hairy chest. She was definitely developing well, in her late teenage years. The boy fumbled a little with the her bra strap in the excitement of seeing her breasts. Laughing once again they pressed up against each other once more and began passionately kissing as they stood in the centre of the room naked on their top halves.
The girl began pulling slightly at his shorts as a sign that she wanted to go further and dutifully he undid them, letting them fall around his ankles. After both the unexpected foreplay of the bike ride and these gentle actions in the room a slight drop of precum could be seen on his boxer shorts around the outline of his penis head. The girl put her arms around his neck and felt the hairs stand up while his were moving ever nearer to the sensitive parts of the upper thighs. After a brief pause and smiling acknowledgement she unzipped the back of her skirt also letting it fall to the floor and took a step backwards towards the bed. He was running his fingers tantalisingly around the top of her bright thong waistband and she slightly shivered with ticklish anticipation. The inevitable was going to happen it was just a question of when. Almost simultaneously their hands moved to grab each others but cheeks as they pulled together once more.
She backed further towards the bed and prepared to lie down on to it. The boy came with her and began to remove his boxer shorts. The girl was becoming highly aroused by the sight and bit her lip with pleasure. Now lying down she raised her legs first higher together to help remove her thong and then spread them wide open in order to receive the strong erect cock in her tight pussy. Stimulated by this sight he followed her onto the bed drawing in close and started rubbing the head of his penis against the outside of her pussy in a circular motion pressing a little harder over the clitoris. As they gently kissed once more, her pussy lubricated his penis and they were both thrilled with anticipation. With her right hand she tried to find a condom on her bedside cabinet but to no avail. As a result she gave him permission to penetrate and fuck her on the condition he must pull out before cumming inside her.
He leaned forward and maneuvered his curved cock inside her pussy and her legs gently locked around his lower back. The boy breathed deeply through his nose in order to let more blood into his body and into the throbbing member swelling inside. She also started a good rhythmic breathing to allow ample space and also for her body receive the first thrusts. He was gentle at first moving slow and ensuring they regularly interchanged eye contact with kissing each others lips. He began to pick up the pace slightly as his penis head moved deeper and deeper inside her pussy. They both increased their breathing amongst pleasurable smiles.
She began feeling more and more euphoric waves as he pressed on harder but still with care, ensuring his body was slapping against hers and stimulating the clitoris to heightened sensations. They were both smiling and laughing with pleasure as he kissed her neck in time with his rhythm. She began moaning from as he leaned back slightly, rubbing saliva onto his hand and quickly across her clitoris. She spread her legs wide out behind his back and with a moan of ecstasy pulled her body rapidly so that her pussy juice could squirt freely out, first upwards like a fountain splashing on the boys stomach and chest, then back down with gravity on her own. Neither had experienced anything like this before and it gave them both an insatiable lust for more.
He re-entered her with a new unforgiving rhythm. The girls eyes were rolling slightly backwards as her body could barely contain the feelings, closer and closer they came to climax and more pussy juice came squirting out, this time without interrupting the motion. Despite being almost out of control of body and mind she begged the boy for more. The penis head pounding away inside and the foreskin being pulled back and forth by the lubricated friction the boy was almost ready. Breathing deeply and thrusting with intent a tingling sensation built up strongly through his shaft to the point of no return. He exclaimed he was going to cum and she tightened the muscles of her pelvic floor in return. She begged the boy once more and also in his native language, asked for him to cum deep inside of her. Screaming yes as they both neared the climax, the penis head rubbed against the g-spot with unbridled passion and the sensitive frenulum of the penis being relentlessly covered in pussy juices could take no more. Their entire bodies filled with an ecstatic wave in perfect unison as they came together. Him dumping a huge load of cum on to her tender walls, her receiving an exquisite tickling sensation as the cum drops splashed about her pussy. With a sigh of relief he slowed down. Out of breath and with cum juices dripping all around their bodies and on to the bed they both knew how lucky it was he managed to catch the train.
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