[[Hello, this is my first time writing a short story, let alone smut. Its actually 7 chapters long (so far. I left it open ended so if it is recieved well I will continue it) and gets dirtier and kinkier as it goes on. I am posting the first two chapters here and I hope you guys like reading it as much as I like writing it! feedback is appreciated ans if it does well I’ll post the rest]]
Eliana is a 19 year old biochem/premed major with big dreams. To achieve those dreams she adapted a very serious and cold exterior, keeping most people away from her, so she may focus on her work. In her loneliness she started a habit of picturing herself doing incredibly dirty and kinky things with men she finds attractive. It’s her dirty little secret and it’s not hurting anyone considering its all in her head. She’s about 5’4″ with a slim pear shaped body. Her hips are rather wide and her ass is plump, but she does lack in the chest region. She has a long ashy brown hair that she normally curls or does up. She always dresses nicely, fairly modest in the winter but in the summer she dawns cute sun dresses and tops that leave little to the imagination. She knows she is attractive and even though she doesn’t want a relationship she definitely wants people to admire sometimes.
Shane is 20 and your run of the mill engineering major. He Flew across the country to run away from his family and pursue a career in engineering. The only problem now is passing calculus. He’s fairly good at everything else, physics, programming and the likes, but for some reason he struggles in calculus. Granted he might be getting distracted by a very cute girl who sits one row in front of him. He not normally actively a pervert, but this girl felt unique and her coldness was exciting to him. He loved the chase and couldn’t wait for the eventual rewards he will get when he breaks her. He’s definitely a looker and an intimidating one at that. He’s tall, probably 6’0″ even, with wavy dark brown hair that he normally leaves in a mess. He’s not clad with muscle, he’s built fairly lean and can get what he needs to done. He’s one to dress nicely as well. He normally would wear a nice pair of slacks, sometimes patterned, along with a sweater and an undershirt if it’s not too hot.
chapter 1:
Eliana is very smart, serious and honestly an extremely shy girl with an overactive imagination. She lacks the confidence to play out her fantasies in real life, let alone pursue a man. She meets a confident, cocky and incredibly attractive classmate who becomes the main character in her usually dirty fantasies. She hates how crazy he drives her and as a result actively avoids him, acts cold and ignores him. Yet he still manages to be around every corner, waiting to make a snide comment that’s going to make her blush.
Shane, on the other hand, can see directly through her cold exterior. He can see the fire in her eyes when she imagines them together. He might not know exactly what is going on in her pretty little mind, but just judging from the pink tinge that sweeps her face every time she looks at him, it must be something dirty. He loves to drag out their interactions and take advantage of her awkwardness to make her blush in the hallways or in class, but he wants more. He wants to see her squirm in frustration and pleasure when she can’t just shrug him off and walk away. He wants to trap her in a corner and see how far his words alone can make her go. He started to beg her for private tutoring. She already has perfect grades and his calculus grade is…embarrassing to say the least. Not that he intends on studying math with her.
She couldn’t help but agree to the constant pestering for a tutor. she most certainly didn’t want to, but her people pleasing personality coupled with her lack of confidence caused her to say yes. Granted, this boy isn’t just any boy in her class, he’s the one she can’t keep her mind off of and can’t seem to avoid. She couldn’t give you the real reason she agreed to go. Part of her wants and hopes to indulge in her fantasies, but the other part of her is in some serious denial. She took one last deep breath as she slipped her tablet into her bag and grabbed her keys. On her way out she was stopped by her reflection in the mirror. Do I look okay..? She asks herself, looking her body up and down. It was just turning spring time on campus and the weather was warming up. She was excited to wear a sage green floral printed sun dress today. The dress was not low cut and covered her cleavage well, but the straps were noodles and the tight stretchy fabric drew all of the attention to her round hips. The dress was ankle length, but it was flowy and a long slit ran up the side to about mid thigh height. Her soft thighs would occasionally peak through the slit. She had her hair down today, but it was nicely curled and it bounced softly on her back and shoulders. She nodded to herself, you look good.
“Please don’t embarrass yourself..” She whispered to herself on the way to her car. This was going to be the longest 10 minute drive of her life.
Shane was over the moon excited about this study session. The past four months had been spent sitting behind the most attractive woman he’d ever had the pleasure of seeing. He loved the smell her vanilla perfume, to the point that the scent of vanilla alone is enough to make his dick jump. Her hair was always so soft looking and he loved to imagine the feeling of his hand gripping the back of her head. His mind often would drift to these types of thoughts during class, which may explain his D average in calc this semester. Regardless, he was happy to shamelessly indulge in such a cute thing. She was always so cold to him, giving him short responses and ending their interactions quickly. The only reason he keeps pestering her now is because he realized what was going on in that head of hers. She tries to hide her desires, but sometimes he will catch her face flushing pink and her head lolling as she had her dirty thoughts. She would squirm in her seat sometimes, but it was barely noticeable. Shane was the only one to notice because his eyes are glued onto her for 2 hours every day in class. He too took a pit stop at the mirror before heading out. He looked himself up and down, ensuring his outfit was perfect for the occasion. He wore a brown plain patterned pair of slacks, perfectly hemmed. He also wore a loose off white undershirt and on top he had a slightly baggy dark brown sweater. No matter how nicely he is dressed. he still manages to leave his hair a bit of a mess. He tries to fix a couple stray strands in the mirror. I guess it wouldn’t hurt to do my hair sometimes.. he chuckled to himself and shook his head. nah. He looked just fine, regardless he already knew for a fact it didn’t matter how messy his hair was. She was still going to crumble under him. He did a hop, skip and a jump on his way out the door and hummed his way to his car.
He eyed himself in his rear view mirror. “Don’t fuck this up..” He squinted at himself and smirked. This was going to be the longest 10 minute drive of his life.
chapter 2:
Eliana looks at the exit sign hanging over the road, university exit 13. She was nearly 5 minutes away and so far it has felt like an eternity. She is so incredibly nervous, yet excited at the same time. Her body is jittery and her face feels hot. She hasn’t even seen him yet and she already feels flustered. Yet again her mind failed her as it drifts off into its dirty fantasy world. How could she not? She was alone with her thoughts, 5 minutes away from being alone with the most handsome man she’s ever laid eyes on. For the past 4 months she has felt his hot breath behind her. The feeling of it often made her wish he was panting on the back of her neck, out of passion and exhaustion. She would then think of how nice his hands would feel holding her, rubbing her and using her like a doll. She has quite the innocent appearance, but it would surprise many to find out she wants to be used and abused like a toy made only for her partners pleasure. The way she so desperately wants someone to take what they want from her regardless of what she says is almost shameful. Which is why she would never admit it out loud. However, she will imagine all of the ways Shane could take control of her and fuck her silly…Her panties began to feel a bit slick as she let her mind drift away. She snapped back out of it once she realized she was there already.
She wondered to herself what Shane’s intentions could be..that is if he had any other intentions. Her mind could just be getting the best of her..there is no way they will do anything other than study. Here we go. There’s no backing out now. She exited her car and started the trek up to their agreed meeting location. She came about 15 minutes early, so she could…calm down a bit and get herself together before she faced her demons.
Shane normally wouldn’t leave this early for anything, but this time was different. It may be hard to believe but he was nervous too deep down. He expressed his nervousness by acting over exciting and hyping his car ride up the whole way. He sang loudly and wiggled in his seat to the music that was bumping through his speakers. What a perfect day. He thought to himself and he knew it was only going to get better from there. He wondered what she might decide to wear today. She was always the kind of girl to dress nice no matter the occasion, so he knew he was in for some eye candy. Her style was one of the things he admired about her. It was impressive that she had the motivation to get herself ready like that every morning, but he’s not complaining one bit. He especially loved the dresses she would wear. They always sinched her waist and showed off her beautiful curves. The flow of those dresses would tease the hell of him..barely letting him see the shape of her legs and ass. He hoped to god she would wear a dress. He smiled to himself at the thought, just before realizing he is already parked and this was it. Put your confident face on, Shane. He pumped himself up and go out of his car. The walk up to the library was short, but there was no sign of Eliana yet. perfect. He purposely arrived about 30 minutes early so he could choose where they sit.
The library was large and consisted of multiple levels. the higher levels were for silent reading and study only and the lower levels were usually more lively, perfect for eating while studying or studying in groups. The walls were lines were a couple of small semi-private rooms meant for studying in groups. It seems like a great place to study, it’s not sound proof but no one will hear anything if you talk at a normal volume. The best part about it was the windowed wall. Everyone could see directly into these rooms and he saw this as the perfect opportunity to humiliate her into submission. What will she do when he teases her in front of a big open window?
He nodded and high fived himself mentally for the idea. Within the next 15 minutes he finds himself an empty study room and sets his computer up. The room had a table with 4 chairs and a white board on one wall and the window on the other. He conveniently placed himself facing away from the window in the middle of the table. She would have no choice but to sit towards the window and face the rest of the library.
15 minutes should have been early enough to get there before him, but she was sadly mistaken. She caught a glimpse of his unruly hair from across the room. She stopped dead in her tracks, as she was going to make a b line for the restroom, and stared at him. Shane has his eyes trained on her before she even noticed he was there. He may or may not have been staring the entrance down waiting for her. She sighs, great..do I still go to the bathroom? I don’t even have to go right now.. She just wanted a moment to collect herself is all..she decided to turn and head to the restroom, figuring he would be fine with waiting another few minutes. She was 15 minutes early anyway.
Shane had been staring at that god damn door for 15 minutes straight. It felt much longer than that, but when she finally appeared it didn’t matter how long he had to wait. His eyes widen and he can’t help but crack a small smirk..holy fucking cow. Spring has blessed him this year, in the form of his hot crush wearing some of the sexiest dresses he’s ever seen. He only got to oggle at her for a split second before she turned away and headed in the direction of the bathroom. So cute. He felt butterflies forming in his stomach. He was a bit relieved that she went to restroom first..it gives him one last second to realize what he’s gotten himself into. Underperformance is a huge fear of his, especially when it comes to women. A woman this beautiful makes his heart skip a beat and his dick twitch. He wants to see her messy and begging but he also can’t help but admire her as well. After a minute or two she reemerges from the bathroom and she is now walking towards the study room. Shane bites his lower lip in anticipation and sits up straight. He tries not to stare too much at her swaying hips as she walks over. She doesn’t seem to notice anyway.
“good morning, pretty girl.” His husky, yet soft voice cooed. His mind was a mess of dirty and romantic thoughts. Being alone with Eliana was overwhelming and he couldn’t form a single coherent thought. Just the sight of this girl was enough to make him go crazy, but he was a master at keeping his composure..she could never tell what was going on in his head.
Once out of sight, she rushed to the restroom and stopped in front of the mirror. Here she was, making sure she looked good and her fell perfectly. All for a boy she would never admit to drooling over all semester. She adjusted the straps of her dress and fixed the waist so it say nicely on her hips. She kept staring for another minute but there was nothing left to correct. She couldn’t stall anymore and she needed to join Shane in that room.
She shuffled out if the restroom and started on the walk to the room. It wasn’t too long of a walk, but it was long enough for a hundred thoughts to race through her mind. She watched him try not to stare at her, finding it cute that he was still awkward sometimes no matter how confident he may look. She goes over her lines and rehearses her greeting a few times before she finally makes it to the door. She turns the handle and is greeted with the usual snide comment that makes her skin turn just a little pink.
“good morning, Shane.” She says in a flat tone. She is often known for being monotone and rather serious, especially when she is nervous. It’s honestly a defense mechanism at this point; she just doesn’t do well with people..especially not raging hot men who seem to read her like a book.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/u57l72/an_exciting_study_session_mf_humiliation_rough
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