I have a story concept I want to write but it’s a bit extreme/sadistic

I won’t really get into the details of the story too much here (but you can definitely message me if you want to know more).

Basically it’s set in a fictional world where one gender (women) are dominant in all aspects of society. It is a bit femdom centered (mostly gentle). The specifics of the erotica I won’t mention here but I’d be interested to know who is interested and who wants to know more.

Comment or message me if you’re curious.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/u3apw6/i_have_a_story_concept_i_want_to_write_but_its_a

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  6. Don’t think too much about it, just write what you want to write :))

  9. I am curious about the specifics. I want to ask are you writing for the female gaze or male gaze?

    Written for men – the stories talk about the activity & actions with little setup or development. Written for women – it includes how the people involved grew or interacted and what led up to the hot sadistic scene.

    Example:

    Male Gaze – Woman orders a young man into the room, binds him to a spanking bench and sets about caning him from the back of his knees to his hips over the next hour.

    Female Gaze – Women has spoken to young man about raising his grades. After weeks with no improvement his main teacher is invited over, he is strapped to the bench and they read out-loud his incorrect homework and test answers. For each incorrect answer they each try to create a parallel strip on the back of each thigh or buttock with a pair of canes. Perhaps a female class-mate is also invited to give the correct answer (from memory) and witness his punishment. (She has to learn to motivate boys or men when she gets a household of her own.)

    See the difference?

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