Take me for a nice picnic [MF] [Romantic] [Long]

I’d been hinting for months that I wanted to be in a big, open field with you. With a blanket, a bluetooth speaker, some snacks, and some time. The weather had been too shitty to even consider it, but the day came where it was 75, sunny, and dry.

It just so happened to be a day that was really, really shitty for me at work. I had been whining to you over text during bathroom breaks. This is what prompted you to double check the weather and treat me to this well-deserved and long-awaited little picnic.

I get home and you insist that I take my shower like always, but then put on what you laid out on our bed. A bit bold, and I knew something was going on, but I was just excited to be out of work. “Ahhhh,” I said with a smirk. “If you say so.”

I begin stripping in the bedroom, pulling my scrubs down to my ankles, bending over slowly, just because I know you’re looking. I step out of them and continue to watch you watch me. I shake my long, red hair out of the bun it was tied up into. I peel off my shirt and unclasp my bra, exposing my small but firm breasts. I return your hungry gaze as I admire your tall physique… and the growing bulge in your pants.

You all but pounce, wrapping your long arms around my smaller frame, your fingertips sinking into the flesh of my waist. You kiss me deeply, but more slowly than the approach of your grasp. You pull away, gently biting my lower lip. I feel a warmth starting at my vulva and overcoming me. I’m disappointed when you gently push me towards the shower with your hand on my ass. You give me a spank and remind me to shower, dress, and meet you downstairs.

I run the water, let it warm, step in, and begin to feel the day wash away. The water running through my long hair and falling over my body. I wash my pussy, and with it, the little slick that followed your passionate kiss. I find myself tempted to play with my clit, as the water from the detachable head falls over my body, intensifying the need I feel to straddle you and finish what we started.

I hear your footsteps approach the bathroom. With a whiny, joking “Hurry upppp,” you pull back the curtain and greet me again with that hungry gaze, devouring the image of my wet, naked body. You smack my ass and I turn the water off. I dry myself as you fuss about downstairs in the kitchen. I don the sundress you left out on the bed. Your favorite… a little blue number with flowers that isn’t sheer, but appears that was when the wind picks up.

I head downstairs and you’ve pulled the car around, not offering me any time to see something that might help me guess where we’re going.

I hop in the passenger seat and you drive. I always love watching you drive your manual car, and I love even more that you place your hand on my thigh when you’re not shifting. I love your hands. They’re sculpted, strong, and I’m always reminded of what they’re capable of… I pull up the hem of my dress a little bit, with your eyes focused on the road. When you return your hand to my thigh, it’s bare. I let out a little sigh, relishing the feeling of your skin against mine. You shift again. This time your hand returns a little higher. My breath picks up a little as you slowly inch your fingers to my vulva, unimpeded by panties. You raise a brow and give me a smirk. I laugh, “Well, you didn’t lay out any panties for me…”

“I guess I didn’t,” you continue smiling at me, then return your eyes to the road. You start gently swirling your fingertips around my clit, drawing a small moan from my lips. Shift. Your fingers back to me, slow circles around my pleasure. Shift. I feel that familiar heat and tension between my legs. Shift. You curl your hand to place one finger inside me while your thumb circles my clit. I whimper, close to my orgasm. I’m left hungry once more as you pull your hand away to shift. The car slows down and I huff. You look at me and laugh, “Sorry, we’re here!”

I hadn’t been able to pay attention to where we were going. We were at a huge, empty field in the country, about 10 minutes away from our home. We had pulled over on some little backroad. You hop out of the car and open the trunk while I lower my dress and get out of the car. You’re holding a folded blanket, a basket, and a speaker, while wearing a goofy grin. I beam. “Really?!”

“Of course, baby, I know you had a shitty day and you’ve been saying you want this for a while.” You kiss me. “Let’s go.”

We walk through the tall grass and find a spot near some trees. I hold the basket and you flick out the blanket and gesture towards it. I remove my shoes and sit down on the blanket, holding the basket. You join me, holding your phone to start playing some gentle guitar music in the back. I stare at you, holding back tears, enjoyinh the certainty that I’ve found my soulmate. “Thank you… this is exactly what I needed today.”

You look at me, mouth open, about to say something. Instead you put your hand on my cheek and kiss me deeply. With your lips interlocked between mine, you move your body over me. Kissing me again, you lay me down and prop yourself up on your elbow. I love kissing you. I love feeling your energy matching mine, matching the speed, the rhythm. I love how you taste. I feel more warmth between my legs, and I begin to feel your cock harden in your pants and press against my thigh. I shift myself to grind into you, but you put your free hand on my hip. You begin kissing and nibbling my neck, down to my chest. You hungrily pull my dress all the way up to my neck, and gently suck my little, pink nipples. I moan, “Fuck…” as I feel the sunlight and the gently breeze on my naked body. I listen to the wind in the trees and watch the grass sway around us, engulfed in the privacy of nature. You kiss your way down my stomach and then gently, teasingly, kiss around the lips of my pussy. I gently grab your hair, playing with it between my fingers, encouraging you to go where I want you most. You look up at me sweetly. I moan, “Please?”

“Please what?” You look at me mischievously.

“Please lick my clit?” I ask, sweetly, desperate for you.

You begin circling your tongue around my wet pussy, then making small, flicking movements on my clit, causing my knees to jump. You laugh. I continue playing with your hair. You resume small circles over my clit, and it isn’t long before I feel an orgasm swelling inside me. My breath hastens, I moan in the pleasure you’re giving me. “Fuck, I’m gonna cum!” You look back up at me with conviction. I press my legs against your back, but do my best not to strangle you. I surrender to the pleasure, and feel myself climax. I feel my cunt spasm in sync with your hungry lapping. A little gush of warmth escapes me and runs down onto my asshole.

You wipe your mouth and move back up to my face. I kiss you, tasting myself on you. I kiss you deep, and our tongues swirl around each other’s. I wrap my arms around your neck and pull you as I roll over, so you’re on your back. I kiss you again, before urgently removing your belt and unzipping your pants. I pull them down with your briefs, and your hard cock bounces back up and hits your stomach, before standing upright. You put your hands behind your head. I begin kissing around your cock and gently flicking my tongue on your shaft. We look at each other as I swirl my tongue around the tip of your cock. Your brows come closer together as you enjoy watching and feeling me take you into my mouth. “Yesssss, baby.” Your moan encourages me as I take you further into my mouth, while continuing to move my tongue. You let your head fall back, giving into the bliss. Your other hand reaches down to gather my auburn locks into a ponytail, which you immediately use to impale my throat with your cock. I wasn’t expecting it, so I had to compose myself and relax my throat as you entered. Once you’re all the way in, I feel your cock twitch as a grunt escapes your lips. You pull my ponytail away from you, removing your cock from my mouth with a wet “pop!”

You only hold my hair out of the way now, and let me resume control. I gently suck, twirl my tongue, and bob my head around your cock. I use one of my hands to pump and gently spin around your shaft while I suck you. I feel your cock begin to twitch, and I taste your salty precum. I stop. I know we’re not done with each other yet.

I move upwards to kiss you and enjoy the scenery. The gently movement of the grass and the trees, the warmth. I begin kissing you for a moment until I decide I need to feel you inside me.

I straddle you and pull your arm to pull your toeso upright. My knees around you and your cock still out, I lean back and slowly lower myself onto your girth. My went cunt takes you in easily, but I move slowly to savor the feeling of my tight pussy stretching around your tip. I lean forward, bringing my cheat closer to yours as I take your shaft further into me. We lock eyes, watching each other enjoy the feeling of our bodies becoming one. Before I have your entire length inside me, I begin gyrating my hips. I move my feet underneath me, and you move your arm around me to hold my waist. I begin gently bouncing on your cock, feeling the walls of my pussy move around your shaft. Still looking at you, I kiss you hungrily. Our tongues dancing together, gently biting each other’s lips. I need more of you. I allow myself to drop all the way down on your cock. Your hands on my back squeeze my flesh, and you kiss me again.

I begin moving more quickly, feeling my orgasm build. You feel it too as my pussy begins twitching for you. “Cum for me. I want to feel you cum on my dick.” This was all the encouragement I needed. I impale myself on your full length and gyrate my hips. I look at you then throw my head back in pleasure. I feel myself spasming around your cock, rhythmically contracting as I surrender to my climax, crying out your name. As the orgasm subsides, you pull me in to rest on your chest. I feel your cock jumping inside me. You kiss me again. “Get on your fucking knees.”

I pull myself off of your cock and turn around, getting on my hands and knees. I arch my back, exposing my wet pussy to you. I sway my ass at you, ready for more. I feel your big hand come down on my asscheek, spanking me. The sting, combined with the glow of pleasure I had just experienced, made me burn for you. I look back at you, “Please take me.”

You place one hand on my hip, the other on your cock. You rub the head over my clit, playing with me. You jerk your cock over my clit, making my legs twitch. You grab your cock and start slowly entering me. We moan together. You slowly pump a few times, placing your other hand on my hip. I need more. I’m burning for you. I want to explode around you again. “Give it to me.” You keep pumping and take one hand off my hip. You grab my hair and twirl it around your hand, forcing me to arch my back and look back at you. With you bending forward, I can see your eyes meet mine. The same sweet eyes I know and love, but so consumed with lust, they appear almost dark. You begin fucking me harder than you ever have before. I feel the tip of your cock ramming against my walls, where I know you’ll make me cum. Your cock hits my cervix, an ache that pairs well with the pleasure. The hand on my hip begins smacking my ass, with the same effect. I feel myself being brought closer to another orgasm. I hear you groan and feel your cock jump. I know you’re not far from your own orgasm. My voice distorted with the sounds of your hips hitting mine, I cry out “I’m so fucking close… I need your cum in me!” Just as I feel my cunt begin to pulse with climax, you place both your hands on my hips and pull me deep onto your throbbing cock. I feel our sex pulse with each other as ropes of cum fill my tight pussy. I feel myself continue to contract around you as you muster any remaining pumps you can, giving me every drop of your hot load.. Exhausted and glowing, we both let ourselves fall forward and into a spooning position. We catch our breath and you gently pull yourself out of me. We sit up, I pull my dress down and you button up. I coo and place my head in your lap as your reach for the picnic basket.

I look up at you and you kiss my forehead. I laugh, “Told you this was a good idea. Thank you… We should have picnics more often.”

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ttv4r9/take_me_for_a_nice_picnic_mf_romantic_long

1 comment

  1. Wow, this is so well written
    I really enjoyed reading it and I hope to read more from u

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