This is a story requested by my partner. I would love some input on it as I really don’t want to show it to any of my usual editors… I’m sure you’ll see why. I can’t see any spelling, grammar, tense errors anymore because I’ve been staring at it so long so if you find them feel free to lmk.
Please enjoy.
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You’re curled up fast asleep as I towel dry my hair, nestled into a pile of warm blankets. Lovely one, you look so delicate with your hair calling across your cheek. I haven’t seen you in days, so busy with work, family, your friends, that you’ve been heading straight to bed and off to work.
My fingers brush your cheek tenderly, pushing your hair back and pulling you towards the edge of the bed. They dip inside your mouth, parting your lips and teasing your tongue languidly. I lean down, whispering in your ear as you stir “suck them bunny”. You stop fussing at the sound of my voice, obeying as you settle back to serenity without opening your eyes.
And just like that, I want you. The towel hits the floor and I grip your hair, replacing the fingers in your mouth with my clit before flicking the sheets off of you to play with your cock. You nestle in closer, wrapping an arm around the thigh in front of you and suckling obediently. .
Teasing is getting you up, but not fast enough for my tastes. I want you _now_ not later when you feel like it. I adjust, placing my knee on the bed over your head so that I can lean forward to give your pretty cock a lick. Take it between my lips to suck until its hard enough to use.
My weight is on your face now and you’re fidgeting in your sleep, trying to turn away from the pressure. Not what I have in mind for tonight little toy. I lock my calves together, properly fucking your face as you start to resist.
One of your hands stays trapped under you, the other coming up to push me off. I grip your wrist, forcing it down to the bed and sit back all the way and cutting off your air as punishment. My hand cracks your thigh hard enough to leave a mark, shocking you wide awake.
Your muffled yelp of pain is perfection itself as you immediately stop resisting. Impressive really, considering that your chest is heaving, begging to breathe. “Fucktoys don’t move do they?” I can feel you shaking your head frantically no beneath me. Lo and behold, you’re also… rock hard, just like I wanted.
A quick slap leaves you bobbing back and forth helplessly, yelping again and franticly resuming your suckling in hopes of earning succor. Its amazing how much better at eating pussy you are when you’re in pain…
I slip off to one side, keeping you pinned and quickly straddle your hips. Not even bothering to hide the grin on my face as you gasp for breath or acknowledge as you try to tug your arm out from under your side. When I grind down onto you without letting you inside, I can’t help the shiver of pleasure when you whine in pain. You jerk in obvious confusion, trying to wriggle out from under me and only manage to make things worse for yourself.
My hand lashes out, this time across your face, then grips your throat roughly. Pressing you back into the pillows. Your mouth pops open to gasp for air that isnt there. The hand I’m pinning gets tucked under my knee and I reach down to stroke between my legs, keeping your hard while your mind reels “Your poor little dick wants attention doesn’t he baby?”
A frantic nod yes even though your eyes are saying no? Even better. The hand around your throat loosens enough for your to catch your breath. Turning my attention downwards, I toy with your cock gently until you start to thrust into my hand. A tight squeeze is enough make you yelp again, try to yank away from me into the bed. I go back to jerking you off with a gentle hand as though nothing happened, tilting you back and sinking down over you once I get you fully hard again.
My fingers are sticky with precum so I make you clean them off, fucking your mouth until I’m satisfied. They dip between my thighs to roll my clit while I ride you. I’m using my grip on your throat for support, dropping it down to twist your nips until you start to roll frantically, trying to get away from my cruel fingers. Another hard slap. A third. More pinches, bruising. You settle into the bed weeping silently as I orgasm, your arm cramped beyond belief beneath you.
I lean forward to kiss your lips tenderly, letting my cum drip onto your stomach before I lay down behind you. You’re tucked against my chest, my precious little spoon. My breath tickles your ear as I whisper “I love you little one” and nod off to sleep against your back, sated. Right before I drift off I hear you whisper back, sniffling. “Thank you daddy.”
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