(ch.4)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Chapter IV

(The reckoning)

As Bruce and crystal go to their suite to get the hot tub ready, Eric and Jessica got to their room to shave Eric’s manhood. Jessica orders Eric to get to get into the shower while she gets the razor. Eric stands there in the shower while Jessica squats in front of him to give him a good shave.

Jessica: spread your legs so I can get in there…. Oh my god, today was just unbelievable, I never thought the nude beach would be so much fun. The freedom of being completely naked in public was just amazing. Must’ve been super embarrassing for you though, having the smallest dick on that beach…. I mean wow, out of hundreds of dicks on that beach, yours was literally the smallest. I mean I know it’s what you have and all, but I mean, I wished it was at least like normal. But no, it’s like you were a different species out there. And when it inverted into your body….. Wow, you looked like a girl, especially with your bush. Let’s see how it will look now all shaved and clean, maybe it will start to look like a normal man’s penis. Ok, all done… let’s see (Jessica dries him up and stares at Eric’s shaved manhood). Ok, well it definitely looks a bit bigger…. I mean I can see it now, but…. I’m sorry dear; it looks like a little prepubescent boy’s penis. Well, at least it’s better than looking like a pussy.

Jessica gets up frustrated and just walks off to the balcony completely naked, forgetting to put on any cover out of frustration. Eric walks out to the bathroom. She orders him to get her a drink from the mini bar as she lights up a cigarette. He gets her a little vodka bottle, she tells him not to bother to cover up and to join her naked. She takes the little shot bottle and puts it next to Eric’s penis before opening it.

Jessica: even this tiny little one shot bottle is bigger than your tiny little penis (she then opens it and takes a drink). Come closer let me take a look; you literally look like a baby boy. I can’t believe my husband has the smallest dick on earth. It was really embarrassing for me today at the beach. I mean I never thought you were big or anything like that, but I at least thought you were normal. But NO! Your dick is ridiculously tiny. You know how humiliating it was for me? My husband, having the smallest penis out on that beach! I mean you weren’t even close in size to anyone out there!

As Eric stands there listening to Jessica complain, they both hear the sound of two girls laughing out loud. Jessica looks over to where the sound is coming from; the two girls were on a balcony one floor up looking down at them. One girl apologizes and tells Jessica, ‘ I’m sorry we couldn’t help but over hear you, and we just had to look over and see the world’s smallest dick, omg it is tiny! Can we come over and take a better look?’ Jessica gives them the room number and orders Eric to open the door for the girls and get her another drink while she lights up another cigarette. Within seconds the two beautiful young women were in the room.

Girl.1: omg that is literally the smallest dick I’ve ever seen.

Girl.2: looks just like a baby.

Jessica: it was so embarrassing today out on the nude beach. He literally had the smallest dick out there.

Girl.1: can we take pictures.

Jessica: sure why not, everyone at the beach took pictures today. His pictures are probably all over the internet by now.

The girls start taking pictures of Eric’s penis. Making poses and small penis signs and laughing out loud while they are doing it. Jessica was just sitting there frustrated. As the whole scene was playing out, Eric’s tears start rolling down his cheeks; he was utterly humiliated and destroyed as a man and as a husband. Then something happens, Eric feels a twitch in his penis.

Girl.1: omg it’s moving

Girl.2: I think he’s getting an erection

Girl.1: omg that is sooo cute, the world’s smallest erection.

Jessica gets up and walks over to Eric: OMG THAT IS DISGUSTING! Are you enjoying this? Do you like being told you have a tiny useless little dick?! (She then grabs his balls and squeezes them tightly, and starts stroking him with two fingers), do you like this; being stroked with just two fingers? The girls seem to be enjoying the show: the world’s smallest erection! Do you get off on being humiliated for having a baby dick?

Eric, with his tears still rolling down his cheeks, can’t believe what is happening.’ Is this all a dream?’ he thinks to himself. ‘How can this be happening to me?’ He then feels a shudder in his hips, and electric shocks throughout his body. Then he feels his hips and legs convulsing; climax! Eric shoots a huge load! His body keeps convulsing violently, and his little penis keeps shooting ropes of cum all over the floor; it was the strongest orgasm he had ever felt. It was like an out of body experience for him. Unaware of his surroundings while he was in his orgasmic Trans state of mind, he feels a sudden electro shocking pain in his balls. He falls to the floor in a fetal position, grasping his balls, with the last drops of cum still leaking from his little dick. What happened was that Jessica was so upset with him, once she saw him Cumming she stopped stroking him and kicked his balls with all her force. She felt somewhat relieved after the kick, even empowered by it. The girls had been taking a video of the entire humiliating hand job that ended with a swift kick to the nuts, ruining Eric’s greatest orgasm. The girls couldn’t believe what they had just witnessed. Just as Eric had fallen to the floor with pain, there was knock on the door. Crystal came to see why Eric and Jessica were late; she was only wearing a bath towel.

Crystal: what’s holding you guys up? Omg why is Eric on the floor? What happened?

Jessica: you can’t believe what just happened. Eric likes being made fun of for having a little dick.

Crystal: really? Kinky! Did he cum?

Jessica: like never before.

Crystal: is that why he’s on the floor?

Jessica: no, I kicked him in the nuts!

Crystal: is he ok? Eric, are you ok? Just go take a cold shower, you’ll be fine.

(Eric slowly gets up goes to take a cold shower).

Girl.1: we have a video, wanna see it? It’s all like 30seconds!

Crystal: wow, Eric has a kinky side, I like it.

Jessica: what do you like about it, it’s pathetic.

Crystal: oh honey, there’s so much for me to teach you. Now just wrap a towel on and let’s go, Bruce is waiting.

Girl.1: yeah we have to go as well, thanks for the show.

(Eric comes out of the shower)

Crystal hands him a wash cloth and says while smirking: this should be enough for you, big boy.

Girl.2: omg, is he gonna walk out like this?

Crystal: you know how little boys are always allowed walk around naked and you think their little penises are just adorable? Well this is kinda the same thing, right?

The girls leave. Eric, Jessica and crystal walk over to take the elevator up to the executive floor to go to Bruce’s suite. The way to suite seemed endless to Eric; he was being led on a walk of shame with two dominating women, exposing his shame in public even more. They get to the suite, but not before they get stopped for some pictures and small penis remarks and jokes along the way. No one seeing Eric walking around the hotel naked was offended. They just thought his penis was hilarious.

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