This is my first time writing about my sexual experiences. This one being about me and my former classmate. (Criticism is welcome)
I got to Mason’s room and it’s clean, and carried his musky scent. The room had LED lights and I asked if I could change the colour. He approved and I changed the colour to red. He smiled. The room has PS5, computer set up and a Wii so we played games for two hours. As he was playing Minecraft, I noticed a large outline of his cock through his grey sweatpants, the mad woman in me decides to sit on his lap whilst he was gaming on his bed, he caresses my small waist and plants me in his dick. He asked if I wanted to play, I nodded but asked if he was OK since he couldn’t see. He said “Yeah I’m OK, I’m really OK”. I felt something hard against my butt.
After 10 minutes of playing, I stated that I should probably start going home. Although I enjoyed his company, all we were doing was gaming and talking. I attempted to get up from his lap, but he grabbed my waist and pulled me back down before turning me around to face him. “You’re really beautiful, has anyone told you that?” he told me. I felt butterflies in my stomach. I replied no then he gently caresses my cheek and pulled me forward to kiss me.
“Let me show you how you make me feel.”
The kiss was passionate. He slid his arms around my back my back and pulled me closer to him, I felt his dick rubbing on my pussy; he moaned “fuck~” when I grinded on him. He stopped for a second and gave me a look that was full of lust and desire. I’ve never seen this side of Mason before, he always seemed calm and composed. He carried me with my legs wrapped around his torso and gently laid me down on his bed; he took off his top then took off mine revealing my black lace bra, then continued kissing me. One hand was holding mine, and the other was tracing up my skirt finding itself on my satin panties, his fingers rubbing on my clit making me release tiny, breathy moan.
“You like that don’t you?” he teased, I nodded, he went back to kissing me. He felt my cum soaked panties, surprised I was aroused so easily. He took them off and inserted two of his fingers in me; I felt electric throughout my body, kissing me sensually whilst I was moaning in his mouth. He went slowly, then faster, then faster. At this point I was moaning like crazy, he had to cover my mouth. We were looking directly at each other, hypnotised. I didn’t break eye contact with his dreamy blue eyes. I was tearing up from how great it felt, grabbing onto his sheets with my legs trembling from pleasure I was on the verge of climaxing. My eyes were rolling backwards, “Faster, faster~” I moaned to him, my toes curling, I needed Mason so badly, he made me feel things I never thought I would experience.
“ahh~” I came all over his fingers, I was left with my heavy panting and the lingering sensation of him inside me. He licked his finger covered in my cum “You taste so sweet, I need more of you”. Mason spread my legs open and proceeded to lowered his head down to my pussy, he was going to go down on me, but I didn’t even recover from the first round. I felt his warm, wet tongue circling my clit, the sensation was too overwhelming I still felt sensitive from him fingering me. Bursts of electric shook my stomach, I don’t think I can take anymore.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tj8rb2/he_fingered_me_to_tears
This was pretty good, the only thing I have to criticize is that you were jumping between present and past tense. Just pick one and stick with it. :)