Violet had never really liked tall men , she wasn’t into those strong daddies who were so sexy, that any other girl would drop to her knees almost *instinctively* in submission.
No. She was into small nerds…
The type to have a nosebleed at the sight of just tits, or even underboob. The type that is so nervous around women that they are a stuttering, nervous mess. She always dreamed about domming one, grinning down at him as he would practically squeal like a pig whilst cumming insanely fast, as if she was *milking* him…
Oh how wrong she would be.. about the dom part
She never had been with a dom before, only pathetic subs who had small cocks. She expected so much more from the seemingly sexy people she fucked, but she was always disappointed..
“Ugh, did you cum already?” She sighed and got off the man who was currently in the middle of an orgasm, in a state of something like bliss even. She was too good for all these failures…
Until she met Teddy.
She was walking down the college hall with her books in her hand, her thick, *juicy* ass and G cups jiggling and bouncing with every slight movement. Of course this made her quite the sight to ogle at, the type to get groped and spanked in the hallway.
She really hated it when that happened, whenever a dude would do that without consent… however she knew that they didn’t care, they just wanted to fuck that ass they were currently staring at.. possibly make her a cum-dumpster:.
She shuddered at the thought, she was the most attractive girl in school by a long shot, but she couldn’t care less… she was homeless, no family, and couldn’t trust anybody to house her. After all, her sleeping sexy body being so vulnerable was a **really** bad idea…
Until she bumped into a guy, who yelped from surprise and fell back, dropping all his books as he held his nose in pain. Her books hit his nose..
Everything she had? She sold her body for…
She looked down at the man, and oh my god..
He was **adorable**! Had to be a freshman. She dwarfed his 5’6 stature with her 6’2 stature, he had an almost pinchable face and a scrawny body, he was exactly what she was into… could this be her new interest? What if she wasn’t pleased with his performance?
All she knew, is that this guy wouldn’t deny fucking her. Who would be dumb enough to anyway? To deny fucking the hottest piece of ass around?
“Oh hello, cutie~” Violet spoke seductively, helping him up on his feet. His eye level was on her tits, he couldn’t help but stare at her absolute jugs
“H-hey!” The man squeaked, his voice was pretty high, which was what she loved.
She also happened to love the new *bulge* in his pants
“What are you looking at?~” she whispered in his ear, smirking as she knew he would get all stuttery and nervous. He looked down shamefully, when Violet realized she had met this man before..
He had once before got caught watching BDSM hentai in the library, so yup, it was almost like God *intended* to have these two get together…
She took his hand. “I think I should give you something as an apology for hurting you, shouldn’t I, *darling*~” she smirked seductively and he rapidly nodded
“Let’s go to m-my dorm..” he stuttered and she nodded. “I understand, not wanting others to see your massive cock getting sucked by a slut like me?~”
He blushed so vividly that he almost fell over, his face like a literal tomato. Violet chuckled and picked him up, using her powerful back and arms to Carry him.
“Where’s the dorm, *sexy*?” Violet purred in his ear, and he began to direct her. He was getting hurled insults at her, getting groped and spanked by others.. but she didn’t care at this moment. She only cared about giving this nerd the time of his life
When they would eventually arrive, she would take her boob window shirt off, revealing her giant, juicy titties as they bounced from being dropped when her shirt came off. He got a mild nosebleed at the sight, as she slid off her backpack as well and pulled out a collar and leash, intending on using it on him. She took her *very* small panties off after she took her short short purple skirt off, letting this small man ogle at her sexy, juicy body..
She strutted to him, her black lipstick would definitely be noticed as she bent down to his height, and began to pepper his face with kisses, wanting to make it very obvious that he was her plaything now..
However, when he got naked, revealing his naked scrawny body, she was curious about what this little man’s package would be, would it be pathetic? A bitchbreaker?
The whore was almost *drooling* in excitement, excited to suck another cock, to drink more salty spunk!~
When he pulled his pants off, she gasped in absolute shock, her legs waivery and shaky just from the mere sight of the rod this little dude had.. he had a good 9 inches, surpassing her expectations exponentially…
She felt all feelings of being a dominant partner leave… she couldn’t help but wonder how nice it would be, on her knees and sucking this massive cock, completely naked while he only pulled his pants down, as if she was nothing but a *cockwarmer*
God.. that thought, that thought specifically made her horny as all fuck..
“Ohoho!~” She purred seductively and strutted to him
“Sorry if it’s small…” he whimpered, and she smirked. “Nah… you’ve got a rod, *sexy*…” she grabbed his dick, causing him to have the most adorable flustered face..
However, there was a feature that upset her… a bruise on his chest
Who hurt this adorable man? She felt protective mommy mode come on, but she would ask for it after worshipping this pole… this amazing rod that she would really want to worship for hours, days even..
She got on her knees, her mouth to the tip as she used her hand to jerk him off, the other fondling his fat nuts. If other girls knew he had this fat cock, they would be begging, naked on their knees… but Violet would have his huge, *musky* cock to herself
And she loved it
She knew he knew what to do too, as he had probably watched so much porn that he had been dreaming of this.. a big, thicc, beautiful goth on her knees, worshiping this beast of a cock.
He grabbed her hair, and with a deep voice he definitely practiced with in a mirror, shoved the cock in her mouth, causing her to moan and shake in submission
“Good slut, do what you do best, be my fucking cockwarmer~” He purred, before making her just suck away. She sucked like it was a popsicle, like her life depended on it… she didn’t even know the dude’s name, but she couldn’t care less, this was the best cock she had ever sucked. She knew already, even without being fucked and railed in the pussy or ass, that she couldn’t go back to other cocks… however he was still an inexperienced virgin.
However a virgin who wouldn’t disappoint, as he put the collar and leash on her. She was such a whore, a dirty slut who wouldn’t think twice to drop on her knees if ordered by a small, nerdy dork..
One like Teddy..
She had no gag reflex, having trained herself to not have one. Sucking like a witch, teddy was quivering and shaking from pleasure, biting his lip whilst having his hands on her head. She *secretly* hoped that he would bring in friends if he had any, so a gangbang would happen… Damn that would be amazing
He grabbed her head tight and began to facefuck her, thrusting sloppily as she melted into his legs, leaning on him. He was treating her mouth like a fleshlight..
And she absolutely *LOVED* it. She loved the feeling of being dominated by someone so much smaller than her..
She made the most slutty noises possible with her mouth, her eyes rolling to the back of her head as his cock went down her throat. It was hard to breathe for her, but she literally couldn’t care less. Her hands grasped his ass as she shoved his cock further in.
However when she made a whimpering sound from when he accidentally ripped hair out of her head, a small amount… he pulled out
“Are you ok, V-Violet?” He stuttered, and she was in shock..
Nobody had ever asked her that.. during sex, if she was hurt and made that sound, they would ignore it and continue.. she was turned on from them doing that, but the fact he stopped his pleasure to make sure she was ok?..
Yup, this was the one. She teared up quickly
“Nobody had… ever asked me before…” She smiled wide, and he wanted confirmation to continue
She grinned and let her mouth be used again. She used one hand to fondle her own tit and another to finger herself as well as fondling her clit. The pleasure for them both was insane.
“You love that, my little slutty fleshlight?~” he purred seductively, and she rapidly nodded. He slapped her lightly on the face, and she moaned from the sheer emotion from it all.
She had always cummed last or not cummed at all, and usually it would take a while to cum for her. However this was different, as *SHE* grew close to cumming!
“Cum for *daddy*~” He smirked and slapped one of her fat udders, and she squirts a huge amount. A small puddle of her juices in front of her. She almost snorted from this small man calling himself daddy, but also liked the confidence boost she gave him. She found it sexy that he saw *her*, how much *taller* and *stronger* she was, and claimed to be *her* daddy.
“Mmmmf… mmmf!~” she groaned as he cummed a few minutes later in her mouth and down her throat. It tasted fucking delicious to her, like a cold coffee on a hot day for scale.. she drank it all up like water, chugging the really massive load. He obviously hadn’t jerked in a week, but she would never complain about getting more of that delicious seed~
He pulled out, and she gasped for air. She was panting, like an actual mutt when he laid his cock on her face. His shaft was stared at by her, lust and horniness in her eyes.
“Oh that was amazing, daddy..” she purred and gazed hungrily at the cock, on her hands and knees now, looking up at him. He held her leash and smirked.
“Someone loves daddy’s cock?~” He spoke seductively, and she rapidly nodded immediately. He then dropped the leash and went to the closet, he followed but lowered down so it was like he was above her in *superiority*
And damn it made them both even more horny, as he pulled out some clothes from the closet. It was something like a slave leia cosplay, except it was even more revealing and pretty small on her.. how did he know?
Then it clicked in her head, he had been watching her for months before… she just hadn’t paid attention or noticed enough to spot this absolute stud, lord knows what he did.. sneaking into the girls locker room to measure her clothing while she was showering, maybe even finding the clothes in the box she slept in outside and doing whatever the fuck he wanted to them..
That thought turned her on, knowing how truly perverse this small nerd truly was.. almost like a *stalker*.. no, definitely like a stalker
“Have you been stalking me, daddy?~” She purred in his ear, and he looked back at her.
“Y-Yes. I’ve been sniffing your clothes and jerking off to them whilst you showered..” he looked down and blushed, she smirked
“So perverse, daddy..” She grinded on his ass with her crotch, and he turned around. He proceeded to forcefully put the slave outfit on her.
“On the bed, my dumb whore…” he spanked her, and she walked to the bed, laying on her back and spreading her legs wide without needing him to ask. She knew he wanted to fuck.. no, he wanted to BREED her it seemed like.. wanting to treat her body like a fleshlight, whilst still being kind and considerate out of it
It was like he was made for- no.. like SHE was *bred* to be fucked by him, to be his plaything to take anything he would like from him… he put on a condom after some struggles, eliciting a chuckle from her before he sauntered up to her, he was trembling in excitement, to be fucked and wrecked by this unexpected stud.
He put a hand on her thigh, and another on her ass, lining the cock up. “Beg for daddy’s cock, as if your life depended on it~” He smirked, and she complied
“Daddy please claim my slutty holes as your own… I want to be your fleshlight forever… I’m addicted to sucking and slobbering on your cock.. use me please~” she moaned as she groped herself whilst saying that, and that enough convinced him to rail this whore into the ground
He pounced on her basically and shoved his cock in roughly, eliciting a loud moan from her. He held her thicc hip in one hand, and her leash in another. He pulled the leash roughly, turning her on even more as he thrusted sloppily and quickly
“Good whore, being all for daddy~” He spanked her, eliciting another slutty moan as her tongue lolled out, her face now a literal Ahegao one. She was having the time of her life, and so was he.
He was obviously a virgin before this.. how was he so good? How was he railing and wrecking a whore so bad that she turned from a dom to a sub?… it was like he was a wizard, slamming at the perfect roughness, speed, and hardness
He pulled her in for a French kiss, and she wrapped her arms around him, as he then started to kiss her neck after the French kiss ended. He had her in a mating press, her first time being in one too. And she absolutely loved it, her ass and tits jiggling with each thrust
But then he started hitting her g-spot, and that’s when she really became a sexual mess, letting herself be a total plaything to this small daddy.
He groaned from how tight she was due to the surgeries she gave herself; and pulled out a rose from under the bed, before proceeding to put it in her hair. Her heart practically melted, she had never received a flower before! Yet she loved it… she loved how caring, loving he was being while fucking her brains out. She had truly fallen in love.. this man was absolutely perfect! Perfection!
However she got close again, if it was possible she would currently have heart pupils, being claimed and fucked by her new daddy. And that claim was finalized, when she squirted all over his cock, a panting mess..
And it didn’t take long for him to cum either, lasting another 10 minutes of thrusting into this tight slut, before pulling out and cumming all over her belly, chest, and crotch. The two were panting, she was shaking and he sighed
*Why did he sigh?* She thought
“Daddy, why did you sigh? What’s wrong?” She used her hands to scoop all the cum into her mouth, savoring that salty taste that she now craved..
“Sorry if I was disappointing.. my name is Teddy by the way, let’s save daddy for when we have sex..” he looked down, and looked sad… and she did not like to see it, so she hugged him to her tits
“You were amazing, teddy! The best experience I’ve ever had, by like, a landslide…” she grinned and he teared up, sniffling. He barely ever got compliments before, and he visibly tried to man up, which was something she knew was absolutely dumb.
“It’s ok to cry, Teddy… it’s all ok.. let it all out..” she stroked his head, wrapping her legs around his torso, and he began to cry into her..
She loved his cock, she loved how he dicked her down and claimed her, but.. she thought that who he was, his soft boi and nice boi demeanor.. she was just.. in love
“And I… I’m so grateful.. I… I..” he sniffled, and she gently shushed him.
“We can be partners, if you’d like… you’re the best guy I’ve ever met, and I can’t imagine myself being the girlfriend of anyone else..” she smiled and he just began to ugly cry, sobbing into her tits.. he quickly passed out from exhaustion and the sheer emotion of it all, and she snuggled him in
She loved him.. she never would cheat on him. After all, he was the best fuck she ever had, so why do anyone else?
She thought of that, before falling asleep…
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/t6m53d/mf_a_goth_whore_thinks_she_will_claim_a_nerd_as
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This was phenomenal. If you ever want an RP partner or someone to bounce ideas off of let me know.
One of the best stories I’ve read recently. This was super fun. Can’t wait to read the next part!
Incredible my guy.
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Excellent read, the tables-have-turned scenarios are a definite fetish of mine
Very well made I wouldn’t have beleive you if you told me this was your first well done
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Well done, I liked both characters. I hope to read more
This was so FUCKING AMAZING!!!!
I like the concept behind this. All in all, this was a decent read, and you did very well with describing the sex scenes.
I think one area that needs improvement though is with Violet’s transition from domineering to submissive; there should probably be more reasons why she wants to submit to Teddy.
Again, nice short story. Quite a nice read. Cheers!
Quite good for the first time.
However a few points
The protagonists were meeting or fucking for the first time. But the specific syntax of dirty talking seems to be same. That’s a bit much of a coincidence. So try to keep the differences you have built up in their characters, in the sexual aspects too. It would be nice if was kind of an exploration and revelation.
Very erotic sexy exciting rich language beatifully written exciting the reader’s emotions, igniting passion enthusing enlargment of breasts, manhoods to mate inflamed desirous to enjoy bliss wetness and mess of spurting juices of lust and shameless desirous.
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This was an amazing story. I’d gotten about half way through when I accidentally cleared my apps. I then spent 2 days trying to find it again cause I couldn’t remember.