The Seductress | Chapter 1 [18] [High school]

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My name is Jacob, but my friends called me Jake. I liked to consider myself to be good looking. I had brown hair, hazelnut eyes, perfectly tanned skin and a thousand dollar smile. I was also lucky-I had a big cock as well.

You might be thinking, “Oh, he used past tense. What happened?” Well, love happeend. I fell for this beautiful girl named-well, that’s not important-but she…changed me

Let’s start from the beginning. I am a senior at Los Angeles High, and on my first day of senior year, I met this new girl. She was beautiful and sexy as hell! So, being the nice guy that I am-er-was, I went over to talk to her. “Hi! I’m Jacob. I don’t recongize you, are you new here?” “Yeah, I just moved here” she said. “Well, welcome to LAHS! I can give you a quick tour of the campus if you want” I said. “Yeah, that would be great”. I think she could tell I was excited.

“So, were are you from?” I asked. “London.” she responded, almost gloomily. “No shit?! My parents are from London. So is my sister.”

“Oh, that’s cool.” she said. “Yeah.” I noticed things started to get awkward between us, so I tried to say something funny, but the bell rang. “That’s the bell. We better get to class. I never got your name?” I said. “Oh. It’s Veronica.” “Nice to meet you, Veronica!” I said while running towards my first class.

My first class is swimming. We have a coach, but she doesn’t usually come into the pool room with us, so things tend to get steamy real quick. I jumped in and went to stand next to my sister, when I heard the locker room door slam shut. My sister and her boyfriend were making out next to me, but all I could see was Veronica. She looked stunning! Her brown hair stopped just after her boobs, and the bikini she was wearing barely fit. You could tell it was about a size too small, because it looked like her boobs were about to spill out of her top. The bottoms of her bikini were also too small, and they barely covered her bare pussy and tiny ass.

“Damn” I whispered.

“What?” asked my sister while her boyfriend was fingering her. “Huh? Oh, nothing. Just…distracted” I said. “Oooooo. Jakey has a crush on the new girl” she said in a childish voice. “I do not. And she has a name you know. It’s Veronica” I said, trying not to faint. “Uhuh-OH BABY DON’T STOP” I just rolled my eyes and walked over to where Veronica was sitting.

“Hey. Nice day out, isn’t it?” I said. “Yeah, better than London! Who was that girl you were standing with? Is she your girlfriend?” Veronica asked. “EW, NO!” I screamed. “She’s my sister. And if she was my girlfriend, why would I let my best friend finger her?” I asked. “Good point. Hey, are you doing anything this afternoon?” asked Veronica. “No, just some homework.” I said. “Wanna get some coffee after school? Maybe you can help me with my homework.” asked Veronica. “Sure!” I said. “Great! See you then!”

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I wanted to post Chapter 1 to get some feedback before I release chapter 2

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/t30ik8/the_seductress_chapter_1_18_high_school

1 comment

  1. Great start… only feedback I can give is possibly make the next parts a little longer and more in depth… Set the mood surroundings etc…

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