This is my first attempt at writing smut and my first post here, so I am open to any feedback on my writing and word choices and tags. I’ll post the next part if there is interest.
“I can see your freckle.”
“What?” I ask, looking around for a mirror to check my face.
“No, the one you told me you use to gauge whether your top is too revealing. I can see it.” you say.
“Oh.” I look down and realize you are correct and that the tops of my breasts are fully visible. I grab at my shirt to adjust it, but you pull my hand away.
“No.” you say. “If you’re going to be naughty and show them off, I want to see them.”
You slide your index finger down my neck and stroke my cleavage as you pull my top down, alowing my tits to spill out. You take one in your hand and gently rub your thumb around my nipple, causing it to stiffen under your hand. I gasp a little, feeling thte sensation tingling down my spine and arousing me between my legs.
You smirk while you tease my now completely erect nipple with your thumb and roll it between your fingers, giving it the tiniest squeeze. I am about to ask what you find so amusing when you abruptly spin me around, grab my shoulders, and push me against the wall.
“If you’re going to be a bad girl, you need to be punished.” you say. “Only bad girls get wet showing off their tits. If I check you, are you going to be wet?”
“I…I think so” I stammer, still taking in the shock of your sudden change in demeanor.
You lift my skirt and pull down my panties, exposing my bare ass. You slide one hand up my thigh until you reach my hot mound. You gently tease my pussy lips open and stroke me with one finger. I immediately know that I am in trouble and that my dripping cunt has betrayed my arousal.
You insert your finger into my wetness and then take it out and stick it in my mouth.
“What do you taste?”
“My pussy.”
“What does that mean?”
“I’m wet.”
“And…?”
“And I’m a bad girl for getting so wet.”
“And…?”
“And I need to be punished.”
“Good. You do need to be punished. I’m going to leave you here while I think about how best to punish you.”
Before I know what is hapening, I feel leather sliding around my wrist and hear a buckle being fastened. You grab my free hand and bind that one, too, then connect my cuffs behind my back.
I try to turn to look at you, but a blindfold comes down over my eyes and I feel it tied tight behind my head.
Then, silence.
I try to take in what has happened. My bare tits are still exposed to the world and my panties are around my ankles. I test to see if I can move around but when I try to waddle away from the wall, I realize my cuffs are tethered to something. Clearly you knew I wouldn’t be able to help myself and had already planned at least this much out.
“Are…are you still there?” I call out.
I am greeted by more silence and let my guard down for a second, thinking you left me alone. Then I feel your hot breath on the back of my shoulder as you growl in my ear
“Don’t talk. Don’t say another fucking word. You are not allowed to speak unless I command it. Nod if you understand.”
I nod furiously.
As you retreat, I can feel your beard brush against the nape of my neck and it sends shivers down my spine.
I wait.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/szodjh/getting_punished_for_being_a_bad_girl_part_1_mf
Please continue this is a good start
Yeah this was goood!
Oh yes. You definitely have to keep this going.