(First time ever writing erotic lit)
We had an immediate connection. I could tell just by looking at her that she wanted me. As our eyes locked, we inched closer and closer to each other until our foreheads were pressed together and our hearts racing. I start to make out with her and grab her thigh, she lets out a submissive little squeal. Now I have her.
I take off my shirt and watch her eyes gaze up at me as I push her against the counter. I grab the back of her neck with one hand and softly glide my hand up and down her pussy through her leggings. She’s already wet. I tear off her pants and she looks at me with her horny eyes. A thin layer of nectar covering her pussy lips makes my eyes roll to the back of my head. “Get up” I tell her. She stands up and presses her naked body against me as she gazes up at me. I guide her hands to my cock, which is rock hard at this point. She strokes my cock like a nervous little slut, not sure what I’m going to do with her. “Now get on your knees and start sucking” I command her. Without a second thought she’s on the floor. She wraps her lips around my head and sucks my dick furiously like a little whore. Her pussy starts dripping juices onto the floor as she pleasures me. I pull her head back and place my hard cock across her face. Suddenly she’s breathing heavily through her nose, smelling the testosterone off my dick as her pussy continues to drip. “I want to become a part of you” she says to me as she sits on the counter. Her eyes shift from submissive to animalistic as she spreads her wet pussy for me. “Fuck me”. My heart rate jumps and I tease her pussy, rubbing her clit with my head as she looks at me so desperately for my cock.
I start fucking her real slow. Not letting her have more than the first couple inches. She starts letting out moans as my thick cock starts stretching her pussy open. I go a little deeper. Now I can really hear her wetness. Her pussy grips me as I fuck her more steadily. As she rolls her head back, I look down. Her juices are flowing down my cock and my legs. She tilts her head forward and looks at me with an aggressive stare, “I want you to use me”. I pick her up off the counter and force her against a wall. “I’m gonna make you my little fuck toy whether you want it or not”. She lets out a huge moan as I start railing her from behind. The sound of her sloppy pussy getting me even harder. She looks back at me in her peripherals with lustful eyes. I stick my thumb in her mouth and hold her jaw while I fuck her. She’s about to cum. Right as she’s climaxing I wrap my hand around her neck, choking while filling her up with my cock. I pound her pussy harder and harder until she lets out a squeal. I pull out and feel her squirt all over me. She starts trembling and drops to the floor as her pussy convulses. I stand over her slowly stroking my cock as she regains her awareness. “that was so good” she says to me. “We aren’t done yet” I say as I pick her up off the ground and carry her to the bathroom.
I put her in front of the mirror and place a sharpie to her forehead. S L U T. She lets out a horny gasp as she reads it and braces herself. I get a firm grip on the base of her hair and make her watch in the mirror. She looks at me towering over behind her, anticipating my cock. She bends over the counter as I push my cock inside her with no mercy. “oh.. oh! oh!!”. My balls start slapping against her clit as I get deeper, her pussy coating them with an extra layer of juices with every thrust. “You’ve been a naughty naughty girl today” she nods with a submissive whimper as I continue to fuck her. I flip her over and pound her pussy in missionary as my cum starts to build up. Her eyes locked on my cock as I thrust in and out of her. “oh my god right there!!” she yells as she covers her mouth. I pick up the speed, fucking her furiously as her pussy squeezes back. She moans “cum inside me!!” I press my forehead against hers and stare into her eyes as she grips my dick harder. I’m throbbing. Her eyes roll to the back of her head and my cock starts twitching as I unload my cum inside her. I start grunting and moaning as she makes me explode. I fill up her pussy as she claws my back with her nails, squirming and screaming for my cum as she makes me bleed. She keeps me pulled towards her so she can feel me inside her for as long as she can. I slowly pull out my cock and she lets out one final moan as my cum gushes out of her.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/sv6mh3/making_her_my_slut_mf
Might want to add some paragraphs there.