Edit : This is my very first attempt at writing erotic literature so any feedback is much appreciated.
Chapter 1 – The Aftermath.
Katie had been awake since the early hours, she didn’t know the exact time but the sun was just beginning to rise. “It must be nearly 6 am by now” she thought to herself.
She hadn’t slept all that well, or for long. A few drinks the evening before had turned into several drinks, and Katie had met a guy. She was very recently single and having been dragged out to a bar by her friends, desperate to find some way to alleviate her desire to shut herself off from the world, she had eventually come to be enjoying the evening.
Fast forward 12 hours and here she was, in a strange man’s bed staring at the ceiling, completely in a daze as she recalled more and more of the most unexpected and out of character night of her life.
A quick check when she had woken had revealed she was in fact, completely naked. “Well, fuck” she had said to herself, not able to quite recall at what point, or even in what room she had taken her clothes off.
She could remember putting them on though. Danni had been nagging her for days about going out with the girls that evening and eventually Katie had given up arguing and agreed to go out. Eventually she had dragged herself off the sofa and bathed, washed, blow dried and straightened her hair. Effort was even made to put on make up, a nice outfit and even some pretty underwear. “I mean, you never know” she had told herself.
A few cocktails into the evening, a few way too loud clubs for her liking and a few way too desperate guys hitting on her later, and the girls had settled into some seats round a table in an off the beaten track, relaxed gin bar. That was the moment the night changed.
Luke had seen Katie, Danni and their entourage as soon as they’d sat down at their table a few feet from his own. Instantly he had been drawn to Katie. She was naturally pretty, her long blonde hair down, wearing a short red dress that clung to her and accentuated her flawless curves, of course he had been instantly drawn to her.
It wasn’t too long before he had come over and offered to buy her a drink. He was charming and polite and funny, and it hadn’t been too much longer until the chattering and the gossip with the girls had faded into the background as Luke had captured her attention. Promises to keep her up to date with what bar they were in and if they were heading home had almost faded into the background as the girls had left, leaving her alone with this captivating, enthralling, and ultimately extremely handsome man.
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