A COVID romance dom/sub long distance

Just wanted to get some feedback on my story :

Set up : you are a hard working young professional for an insurance agency call center during covid you’ve been assigned to a special project that requires collaboration with team members from all across the US . You really want to move up and believe this might be the opportunity you’ve been hoping for. You finally meet with another peer in Texas to discuss the project.

Part 1 : Zoom phone rings
Hi there it’s Ryan great to finally hear your voice after all these messages back and forth can you see me I’ll turn my cam on. Can you see me? Great I figured it would be easier to explain the scoring process if you can see me and my screen. Let me walk you through the escalation and scoring processes. I just sent the link to the spreadsheet; it has to be updated each time you…. (Gasps) your camera is on. Oh yeah I can see you too. Wow. Clears throat.
No, nothing is wrong; it’s just the uh the cam quality is just clearer than I expected. Since COVID hit I’ve been doing so many virtual meetings it’s nice to actually see a face again. Oh your one of the chosen few like me stuck in the office? Yea I feel like I’m not so alone in this office anymore us chatting every day has been…. Nice. I’m glad you like it too. Let’s chat again tomorrow.

Zoom phone rings:
Hey thanks for finding some time to meet with me today. I’m sure you’re just as snowed as me. But I have to say I’m impressed! you’ve caught on to the project very quickly I remember introducing you to the project last Thursday and you’re already scoring higher than most leaders in our bracket. Laughs Of course I do my homework too; I’m nowhere near on your level but I know a few things.
Like what ?

Like For example, I know you have been a supervisor for 5 years been and been with the company for 10 . You’re a hard worker and clearly very inspired and driven. Forgive me but I have to ask why you don’t apply for the manager spot? You’re clearly capable of so much more. Ah I see… I understand and I don’t feel any woman should feel held back by her gender or appearance. Know that you have my full support and I will help you in any way I can. Don’t give up on your dreams. Leadership changes and things here are always temporary. Keep doing what you’re doing it’s bound to pay off eventually.
I have to say in the most non creepy way possible that dress looks amazing on you. Do you have plans or something after work? Laughs yeah me neither…. well you look great. Ah I see.  Hey no judgement I get it, we are all dealing with this thing in our own way. If it makes you feel good or special to dress up to go to work then so be it. Life is short you know and we both know how stressful our job can be. So tell me about yourself; I know you’re amazingly talented and intelligent but what about you as a person. What are your passions ? Everyone has passions or should other wise what’s the point of life ? Laughs no you can’t be that boring. Well I’m sure there’s more to you than that. Maybe you just need help discovering it? Who is that in the picture on your desk there? Well Jim is a very very lucky man. Look I know when I see a girl that’s special that’s all I’m saying. Ah well He seems like a nice guy. Uh huh , wow that’s odd I mean, interesting. What? nothing ! No it’s none of my business. Well, the way you said that makes me think that maybe a nice guy isn’t what you need. It’s none of my business anyway. Listen I’d love to chat more when we have time. Can we do a lunch or something? Laughs Yes I know I’m in Texas and you’re in Georgia. But you’d be surprised what you can accomplish online. It will be just like this; talking, exchanging ideas and seeing you on cam makes me feel less alone. The office is basically empty they sent most of the staff home. Yep someone has to keep things moving? Great I will see you tomorrow then. How does 130 sound? Perfect.

Zoom call phone rings:

There she is! Exactly 130 pm good girl. Look at that smile does someone like that ? I think you might be blushing. Never been called a good girl before ? Well there’s a first time for everything right? Open the door of the office on the east side of the building and go pick up your lunch. The door dash guy should be there. Then set it on the desk where I can see it.

Perfect, good girl open the box but touch nothing do you understand? Look at the camera describe what you see. Uh huh, uh huh, yep how’d I do? I figured this is something you’d normally order. No no there’s no need to thank me. I like spending time with you even if we are miles away. Doing something like this at the same time makes me feel connected to you. Start with your salad how is it? Good I’m glad I guessed Italian then. Next open your fruit cup. Yea what kind of fruits are in there ? Perfect pick up the Strawberry but don’t eat it yet. Yes I’m serious. I told you you needed help discovering your passions this little exercise might help you discover more about you. Now Wait, breathe I want to just watch you. Now slowly run it across your full juicy lips for me now lick it. How does it taste ? Mmmhmmmm you’re getting all flushed I love how you look right now. Your body language tells me so much. I can tell you enjoy being given instruction. I wonder if you’re wet in your panties? After you finish your lunch text me a picture of them I want to see what I did to you with just my words. Yea but I can tell you like this as much as I do. Look I would never force you to do anything but if enjoyed that and I believe you did as much as I did. Then I would love to explore it with you. I feel That I can be myself with you and I like that. I won’t get in the way of boyscout Jim promise. Laughs we are just to people that want to have a little fun . And playing with you in this way. Sigh I mean that there’s a side of me that’s sees how gorgeous you are and wants to unleash on you devour you but that side has stayed locked away. Because for most people it’s a little too aggressive I guess? I feel there’s a lot of chemistry between us and if you feel the same send me that picture. Just your panties nothing more. If not we will never speak of this again. Deal?

 Part 2

Phone alert sound he says to himself oh my god she actually sent it. Wow. Ok Ryan it’s just a beautiful girl who finally wants to acts out your biggest fantasy. You can do this. No big deal.

Texts back: exactly what I hoped for you want this just like I do. I will call you at exactly 10 you will answer all of my calls from now on with the camera on do you understand? Good girl.

Zoom call sound
Ohhh I like red on you very pretty. Well it’s true you don’t have to look away when you get a compliment. You’re gorgeous never doubt that. I don’t believe that for a second everything on my screen looks perfect. So what are your favorite colors to wear ? Uh huh but that’s your favorite? Wear it tomorrow I want to see how this dress fit your body. Send me a picture of 2 different colors of panties you would wear too. I will pick those out for you also What? Why are you laughing? I think you like it. You’re smiling and the way you tuck your hair behind your ear tells me you’re nervous happy. What do you think I’ve been doing the last three
months ? I see you nearly every day I study your body language. I can’t stop thinking about you. I know more than you think. Tomorrow are you off ? Good I will call you tomorrow and I will give you some instructions. Good girl.

Text sound :
Where are you? Good and you’re alone? Good. Are you wearing your AirPods? Good you’ll need your hands free. Today I’m going to show you it doesn’t matter if we are a thousand miles a part I can make you cum whenever and however I want. Strip down to your bra and panties you’ll need to get a bottle of water a belt preferably Jim’s if he’s got one lying around. And 2 wooden clothes pins run them over cold water for about 2 minutes then Get on your knees in front of the bed. Take a picture of the items I asked for and send it to me when you are ready place your hands palm down on top of your knees and wait for me to call.

Phone rings: is daddy’s girl ready to play? Yes what? Your response should be yes sir or yes daddy. Good girl I knew you were a quick learner. Are you in the bedroom ? Good take off your bra slowly and look in the mirror. Look at your curves you’re beautiful most women would love to have your body. Embrace your beauty looking at your nipples already starting to get hard for me. Touch them as I would run your hands all over then focus on getting your nipples hard. My god you’re everything I’ve ever wished for. Your moans are amazing that’s it don’t hold back. Place the clothes pins on each of those hard nipples and send me a picture. Fuck baby you’re so fucking hot. No leave them there for a bit take off those sexy panties and work your way to my pussy. Stroke those wet lips feel how you’re already leaking for daddy. Perfect. Fold the belt in half use it to slap that aching clit. Yes you can. Do you trust me ? You know I would never hurt you on purpose I only want to make you feel good. Go softly the first time see did it hurt? No? Good. Again, again again a little hard I want to hear your juices splatter. Yes yes omg perfect. Stop. how do you feel? Good that trembling in your legs means daddy’s girl will cum soon. Grab the belt feel the leather in your hand stretch it all the way out. Perfect place it in between your sexy thighs. Grip one side of the belt in each hand and slide up and down on the belt. I’m going to use Jim’s belt to give you what he can’t. How does that feel? The leather rubbing against your clit. Oh I love those moans . Keep going keep going I can hear you building keep bucking your hips. I can hear you’re nearly there baby I want you to ask me for it do you understand? Ask me if you can come like a good girl. Yes beg me. Omg yes you sexy thing you can cum daddy girl can cum now. I want to hear your Moans of pleasure good girl. Look down at your nipples are the pins still there ? Good twist them for me. Yes. Now yank them off hard. Did it hurt baby? Yeah? Oh my god Fuck I can’t hold back anymore I’m going to cum . Shit. (Ryan orgasms )(Exhausted tone) see I told you the distance wasn’t that bad . How do you feel? What do you mean different ? Like on a cloud? Ah I see get in bed do you have a soft blanket nearby? Wrap yourself in it. Close your eyes breathe when I breathe in and out. In and out you’re so beautiful baby you did so well today I can’t believe you never did that before. Laughs of course we will do more but for right now just breathe with me imagine our fingers tangling together. I’m so proud of you you trusted me thank you baby. It does t matter how far I am I feel strongly connected to you. You will probably pass out soon and I have some paper work to get caught up on tomorrow I will send my perfect girl a surprise how does that sound? Ok get some rest and drink that water the whole bottle ok ? Good girl. I will call you tomorrow.

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