Chapter One: Barcelona
[WARNING: Heavy Themes of Mind Break and Non-Consent]
Eliza bon Barbshank looked through her mirror, and it showed her the mountain road that led into main gates. Eliza’s handmaiden was brushing her long black hair, pulling it past Elizas pointed ears. Eliza wanted to have it free and flowing for the greeting ceremony. In the upcoming journey she would likely have it tied up more often then not, or even cut it entirely if it got in her way.
The mountain elves lived high up in the peaks, secluded from the works of man and other elves. While other elven kingdoms slowly joined under the flag of the Cathrain Empire, the mountain elves remained independent. Now after years of negotiations, Elizas father had come to an agreement with the Cathrain Emperor that allowed for them to continue their independence. As a sign of trust, Eliza would be meeting the Emperor’s grandson, and traveling with him to the capital.
Eliza wouldn’t be surprised if there were talks of marriage. This trip was probably an attempt to push the Emperor’s grandson and her to be on friendlier terms with each other before anything was suggested. Eliza didn’t hate the idea of an arranged marriage, it was a logical route of diplomacy. However she dreaded the idea of being stuck on a horse for the next few months with someone insufferablly dull, arrogant, moronic, or worst of all: all of the above.
Talfen, Elzas handmaiden, finished brushing. Eliza stood up and stretched, flexing her muscles in the mirror. Her body was tone from decades of training, something she was very proud of. Elves had naturally fit bodies, but getting them into the form that Eliza had took much more effort then it did for humans. Elizas abs especially were the mark of a dedicated and agile warrior. Eliza knew she was being a little vain every time she looked in the mirror like this, but she had earned it after all.
With a small wave of Eliza’s hand, the mirror returned back to a live view of the mountain road. This time, it showed several horses racing down it. Human men and women, alongside some whose species Eliza couldn’t identify from here, were having the time of their lives. The snow exploded behind each of the horses, and even without sound it felt like she could hear the yells of excitment. The feeling was infectious, and she couldn’t help but smile along with them.
Eliza waved her hand again, and the mirror returned to normal. While she had been looking at the incoming royal and his entourage, Talfen retrieved her clothes for the ceremony. The ceremony would involve welcoming the grandson into the castle, followed by a day of celebrations and banquets. Eliza would rather they just be on their way. However she understood that sometimes you just needed to put on a show.
Even at their speed it would take them another hour to reach the city. Eliza used it to finish getting ready. As she put on the winter dress, furs wrapping around her shoulders, she wondered if she would miss being able to dress like this. The valley below was much too warm for the furs that she enjoyed so much.
Just as she finished with her deep red lipstick there was a knock at her door. Talfen opened it, and Eliza looked to see who it was. Leto the High Elf, leader of the mountains, shaper of laws, and Elizas father came into the room. Eliza stood up and smiled warmly. They embraced each other while Talfen left the room.
Eliza looked up at himand realized he wasn’t smiling. “Whats wrong Father?” She tilted her head
Her father sighed while pulling a chair towards him. “Sit down, I have something I want to discuss with you.”
Eliza felt a tension in the room while she took her seat. Her father gathered himself for a moment, something she had never seen him do in all of her 90 years. He spoke slowly “What are your thoughts on our guests?”
Eliza was surprised that he wanted her opinion. “I’ve been watching them through the mirror. They seem young, naive. Like most humans they live in the moment so it’s hard to see what plans they have.”
Her father nodded. “Humans have a way of being naive and cunning at the same time. You need to remember that”
Eliza frowned “What do you mean?”
Her father looked at her in the eyes “In the past five years of negotiations, I have sent over two dozen spies into the valleys to gather information on this Cathrain Empire. None have returned”
A jolt of anxiety. “Dead?” Eliza asked softly
Her father shook his head “We don’t know. But if they had been, why haven’t the Cathrains said anything in negotiations? No moves, even up to the moment we signed the final agreements. So our problem is this: Will the Cathrains make a move, or did they never plan to make one? And if the Cathrains had no plans, where did our spies go? We know too little about the valley, the humans, and even the elves that have united with them. It’s your job to find our enemies, and any allies, old or new.”
Eliza swallowed and smiled weakly “And here I thought a potential marriage would be my greatest problem”
That gave her father a small chuckle “Well that’s still a possibility. If the Cathrains are our allies that may be the only way to permanently secure our independence. Befriend the Emperor’s grandson, but don’t trust him. Make them think we just want a marriage, and find out where our spies have gone. Your mother insisted on sending four bodyguards with you, so you should be safe in the meantime.”
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Several hours later Eliza was sitting at her seat in the dining hall. The ceremony itself she had been unable to get a close look at Gerard Cathrain, or any of his accomplices. Now at the dining table, it was just her father, mother, her, guards, and the guests. Eliza had a full view of them, and was intrigued.
Gerard was handsome, of course, she wouldn’t have expected differently from royalty. He had red hair that went past his ears, brushed roughly behind them and curling towards his head. He had freckles on his nose that she would almost call cute. His eyes were a brilliant green, and Eliza felt like she could feel whenever he looked at her. She wasn’t sure how to feel about the places his eyes were traveling either.
His four Companions were interesting. Two humans, a Dwarf, and fourth person who at a glance could be human. Her name was Sunny Day, and there was just something off about her. Besides her name of course. The way her mouth and eyes moved when she talked felt learned, not natural. Like she was imitating what a human would do.
It was all the more obvious when compared to the actual two humans who sat close to her. One was male, named Allen, no last name. He had dirty blonde hair that was cut close to his head. It was spiked up at the front, and shaved down at the sides. He always seemed deep in thought, focused somewhere else.
The female, Mila, no last name, was much more in the moment. Her dirty blonde hair was also shaved at the sides, but the top of her hair was long enough to form a ponytail. Although she was similar to Allen, a difference in facial features told her they weren’t related. Her muscles were just as defined as Elizas, something that comforted her. Someone to keep up a workout regiment with would make it much easier.
Lastly the dwarf. His name was Retayn Hammerhell. It seemed he was the main bodyguard for Gerard, his eyes darting everywhere. He looked like what the books described, hairier then a bear but half the height of a human.
The first course of was brought out, and Eliza’s father started the dinner conversation. “How did you fair on the journey here Prince Gerard?”
Gerard spoke calmly, almost warmly. “Very well, we were mainly worried about the snow in the pass, but it wasn’t nearly as bad as we feared”
Elizas mother smiled “You were right to come in the summer. In the winter that pass is almost impossible to travel through”
Eliza couldn’t contain her curiosity “So what is it like down in the valley?”
Gerard turned to her “Much warmer then up here. Much more open too. With all of these mountains around me this is the closest I’ve ever felt to claustrophobic.” He looked at Eliza for a moment and continued “And I must say, you are even more stunning then our ambassador described”
Eliza pretended to blush and smiled. Such compliments were to be expected “Thank you. Our ambassador neglected to describe you, so your appearance was a very welcome surprise” The game had started. Eliza guessed there would be alot of flattering in the upcoming months.
Gerard chuckled “We humans sometimes forget to stay focused on our goals. I’m sure our poor ambassador was just too captivated by your appearance to not mention it.”
Allen spoke next “Whats the farthest you’ve been from this city, Miss Eliza?”
Eliza wasn’t sure how to feel about a mere bodyguard using her first name, but ignored the offense for diplomacy’s sake. “I’ve been to several of the mountain Elf cities near here, but never anywhere near the valley. I am very excited to be in a completely new environment.” It was the truth, maybe a little too open but that couldn’t hurt.
Gerard nodded “We’re all excited to show you around the Cathrain plains. Although it only took us five days to get here, I plan to have us take a longer route that will take a few weeks. The scenic route as it were.”
Mila spoke “It’s beautiful down there, especially now in the summer. Well be eating the finest in fresh fruit and seafood all the way to Cathrain.”
The rest of the dinner conversation was much of the same mundane diplomatic drivel. Nothing particularly insightful. The dwarf never spoke except for the offhand grunt of affirmation.. Eliza hoped that they would become more open with her as they traveled. Her four guards accompanying her could make that difficult, but she would do her best regardless.
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It was close to midnight, and Gerard was playing with his new toy. As the wife of the High Elf he guessed she could be called a Queen, but she had no official title. Her position was one of great respect, and that was enough for Gerard to want her.
Gerard looked down at her, holding her black hair in one hand as she looked up at him. Her lips were wrapped around his cock, kissing the base. Her black lipstick left lip prints wherever they desperately pressed. Her eyes held nothing but pure lust and devotion, and her muffled moans held the same.
At dinner he had learned she was fond of reading, and half an hour earlier he had approached her in the castle library. In better circumstances he would have spent days even weeks getting her to this point. Alas, time was short, and such pleasures were reserved for other knifeared sluts.
For now he settled for the immediate desperation and arousal he had filled her with. A small vial of liquid and Gerard had his toy. Now she was completely naked at his knees, worshipping his human cock. The nobility of elves cracked so easily, and he loved them for it.
Gerard heard the library door open behind him and sighed. “What is it Mila?”
Mila showed no signs of embarrassment towards Gerard’s nudity. “I swear, nobody here can control themselves. Even Retayn is off playing with the high elf”
Gerard chuckled to himself and pulled the queens hair towards him, her tongue working faster in response. “As long as no one touches the daughter or bodyguards we’re fine. Our dear Eliza said her goodbyes, and well be leaving early tomorrow before she can notice a difference.”
Mila sat down in a chair “And why exactly are the bodyguards off limits?”
Gerard turned his head to face her and grinned “It’s going to be a long trip, and I think we’ll all want something to stave off the boredom on the way”
Mila grinned back “Maybe I’ll go play with that handmaiden of hers then. Seeing the queen all perched up like this has me going.”
Gerard turned back to his toy and pulled her off his cock. She gasped for air, and drool dripped off of her chin. Tomorrow she would wake up and feel torn between her betrayal of her husband, and the addiction to Gerards cock. The high Elf would feel the same. The next few quiet would leave them so desperate, Gerard couldn’t wait to see the results.
However, he had another toy to look forward to. And one who he would savor every step of the way.
“Put your face to the floor knife-ear, let’s see if your cunt will do any better to satisfy me”
*End of Chapter One*
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