Chapter 1 : The introduction
It was a sunny afternoon. Whitney, a tall young girl with bright blue eyes of 19 years, was eating her lunch. She was tired because of all the sleepless nights, working on her essay to please the professor. The professor, an average sized man in his mid 40s, with a face so cold that you could feel the scary winds when he is hot headed. After her lunch, she went back to her class and checked her report one last time before turning it in. “Is this sentence right? Could I improve it.” Becoming agitated she finally makes up her mind “ No I have to just turn it in”. As she puts her report in a file she notices someone and could not lift her eye off him. Jessie was his name. He was a hard worker, had many dreams, passionate and most importantly greyed our every other guy in the class. He too was tall and was the same age as Whitney but unlike her was energetic and enthusiastic. He had long black hair, blue eyes, soft skin and a decent hairline. Whitney thought he was a new student and couldn’t wait to find out more. She took her report with her and started walking towards him. When she does this I notice her and Introduce myself “I am Jessie your new professor. Are you here to hand in your report? ” Whitney was shocked. She couldn’t digest this new information. “A young handsome boy who is also very smart. This ain’t right”. She handed him the paper and walks back to her desk. He starts his lecture but the only thing she can focus on is him. The way he moves his hand, the way he says “entropy” “lexical integrity” and so on. The way he looked at her to jolt her back to life. “Oh god did he look at me ? I hope he doesn’t think I’m not interesting to him“.
The class ends and the students dismissed. Whitney packs up her back, getting ready to go home but this time she was feeling something different. A feeling of euphoria which she never felt, not even when she masturbates!! She didn’t quite understand and was drenched in the high of things.
(Jessie POV)
As I was teaching the class, I was getting distracted. The girl who handed the report stayed on my mind like an ear worm. “Her silky hair, her tiny nose, her voice, her name ughhh she was everything I wanted to be !! “ I thought to myself while trying to sleep. The sleep that never came.
Both Jesse and Whitney kept thinking about each other. Euphoria filled both their hearts and they were feeling things which neither of them could understand. Both being virgin, both being pure. It was like the perfect storm waiting to happen but the question is, will it happen?
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/qu4l6i/whitney_innocent_gone_wild
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