This is my first time sharing any of my writing…feedback welcomed but please be gentle 😬.
The pitter patter of gentle raindrops on the tin roof gently rouse him from his sleep. He rolls over and the filtered morning light streaming in through the window luminates her skin. He smiles and reaches out to stroke her soft glowing curves. She stirs but stays asleep. He moves over and presses his body up against hers. Feeling the warm of her skin on his, his face in her hair. Without meaning to he inhales gently and his senses are filled with the scent of her hair. He twitches. She pushes back into him and a low moan escapes his lips muffled into her hair. He reaches his hand forward and strokes her stomach, then bringing his fingertips up to explore the contours of her breasts. She pushes back again as he rolls her nipple between his finger and thumb. This time it was her lips that release a moan. He kisses her neck, loving how she melts under his touch and pushes back grinding into him. They do this for a while, listening to the gentle rain. His hands exploring the outside of her body, before his fingers explore inside. She rolls into him, his mouth on hers stifling her moans as she slides her body under his. Her hands reach down and guide him into her. They both gasp at that moment of entry. The rain echoing the intensity. He holds her hip firmly in one hand and the other rolling over her nipple. Her hands dragging her fingertips along his arms and torso and back up again. Feeling his skin react to the gentle touch and enjoying the feeling of slowly finding their rhythm. He mimics her touch with his mouth on her neck and then whispers in her ear, “I’m going to fuck you hard now”. She rises to meet him and they move together with the sound of the rain pounding against the roof. Their still sleepy bodies coming together over and over as the pleasure releases through them. They hold each other feeling their heartbeat slow as the roar of the rain above quietens to a gentle beat. And they drift off back into a satisfied slumber until the rain starts again…
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/q9slnd/rainy_sunday_morning_mf_sensual
Love this!!! keep it up :)
Good job!
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Short and sweet!