I stayed the night at my girlfriends house as I wake up I realize she got called in to work. It’s fairly early, around 9-10 am, I think no one is home so I get up to use the restroom. Keep in mind I think no one is home so I go in my underwear. As I walk out of the room her sexy, big breasted, thick ass, huge thigh, beautiful ebony mother walks out of her room, obviously her not knowing I was there she’s walking around in her bra and underwear. Both of us in a shock not knowing anyone was home stand there in an awkward state for a moment before we both walk back into the separate bedrooms. About a half hour passes and she texts me and ask if i want breakfast, me being hungry I reply with a yes, she says alright and tells me it’ll be done soon. Finally she text me and tells me it’s done, I head downstairs and I notice she’s in her shower robe with nothing under. Trying to avoid another awkward moment I ignore it and tell her thank you. I can’t help but look shes stunning I’ve dreamed abt this moment for years. As I grab my plate she opens the fridge to get me a drink and I can’t help but look while she’s bending over in the fridge. I feel myself starting to get a hard-on. I can see she’s looking at me out of the corner of her eye but she isn’t saying anything. She grabs orange juice out of the fridge and ask if this is ok, I reply with a yes. She starts pouring my drink and I can’t help but feel on her. I make up an excuse so i can squeeze behind her and tease myself. I walk behind and have my hard cock rub against her “a bit excited this morning”, she says. I can’t help my face turning red and she notices “don’t be shy, i seen you looking.” I stand there shocked for a moment but eventually reply and tell her i’m sorry i can’t help it. She tells me it’s ok and says she’s been staring at my boner too. She proceeds to open up her robe and get on her knees, she starts by pulling my shorts down and licking up my shaft slowly. As she licks up and down slowly she then puts the tip in her mouth and begins to slowly put my 11 inch dick down her throat. She starts choking “it’s bigger then i expected” i giggle and start rubbing her big amazing tits as she’s swallowing my dick. She starts to speed up and get real sloppy and wet. “She’s freakier then i thought” I said to myself in my head. I grab her by the hair and start face fucking her. After a few minutes she tells me she wants me to fill her up from the back. She stands up and bends over the counter and i slowly slide in all of my dick and pound her hard. I’m trying to hold in my cum i’ve never finished this fast. I only fucked her for 10 minutes before i couldn’t hold it any longer. She’s screaming and moaning so loud telling me she loves this dick. I tell her i’m abt to finish and she says “do it on my face” then she gets on her knees and starts sucking. After i finish we clean up and and i eat her pussy til she cums all over my face. She cleans me up and then we lay down and watch movies (if you like time in for part two :) )
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ptbrxh/mother_in_law
You lost me at “11 inch dick”. Be realistic.
Youve got a good idea here but for me it’s a bit too much telling what’s going on and not showing what’s happening in your scene, I’m guessing that you’re going for a quite quick depiction here but I’d add in a few more descriptive words here and there for punch, describing her body type rather than telling us she’s a big breasted woman. My example would be using the robe that she’s wearing “Her bathrobe clung to her body showcasing all her curves and voluptuous breasts. All the while her eyes stared back at me in shock…but with a little arousal?” Id also say rather than having the whole thing in a block maybe have a little space inbetween segments where something else is happening