First story, wrote it off the cuff trying to get a little bit of everything in.
feedback wanted/appreciated!
You’re home alone washing dishes. You have your hair in a messy bun wearing an oversized tee shirt, no bra, and some light cotton booty shorts. The kind of booty shorts that leave nothing to the imagination, the lower portion of your ass cheeks on display for your kitchen cabinets to see, the outline of your labia pressing against the fabric. You’re lost in your own world blasting music and swaying your hips and legs to the rhythm, that rhythmic swaying rubs your shorts fabric against your clit sending little sparks of pleasure up your back, making you wet, noticeable to anyone who would be standing there, but who cares your alone right? What you didn’t hear is me quietly come in the front door, I’ve been standing there watching this display for about 10 minutes and I feel my cock growing in my pants. You finish the dishes and put your hands on the edge of the counter still vibing to the music when I come up behind you and place my hand atop yours, pressing my waist against yours softly, effectively pinning you there. You are startled, but only for a moment when you recognize my voice when I say “it’s ok baby girl, it’s just me” I tell you to keep your hand on the counter and do not move. You comply as I trace my hand up your arms stopping for a moment to massage your shoulders and neck while you softly moan in approval. I then put my hands on your waist under your shirt rubbing softly to your stomach and up to your breasts, lightly dragging my fingers Around your hard nipples and areola, the around the soft flesh of your boobs before going back down to your waist, I tease the waist band of your shorts with my fingers around the front then circle to the back. This makes you quiver and stand on the sides of your feet curling your toes. With one hand I move to your ass, kneading and massaging firmly and with the other I find the crease of your thighs. To my surprise your already dripping wet, you can barley contain yourself, I tease the area between your labia and thigh sending shockwaves up your spine. You cry out “please daddy, please stop teasing”. “No baby girl, I’m just getting started” I lead you over to the living room where I instruct you to face away from me while I sit on the couch. You reluctantly listen, then I tell you to strip and back slowly to me. When you arrive I sit down and tell you to bend at the waist and support your self on the coffee table. With you exposed now I have full access to two of your eager holes. I grab one cheek per hand and spread them apart, then push my face into you. I tease your pussy with my tongue and lightly rub your clit with my fingers making you cry out in ecstasy. I move my face and place 2 fingers from the other hand inside you, curling downward as to access the front wall of your vagina. When I reach your spot a jolt of electricity hits you and makes you jump, and you gush your fluids on my hand as you writhe with pleasure. Once the wave of pleasure subsides you turn around and give me a smirk and say “now it’s my turn” you push me on the couch and pull my pants of in a way that is so sexy making my erection even more intense. You pull me to the edge of the couch to the point I’m barely sitting on it. You get on your knees in front of me and grab the base of my rock hard cock in one hand then smile at me and start to tease my shaft with your tongue, slowly and firmly pressing against my cock like your trying to massage it. You come up and lick around the base of the head before licking it all over, sending bolts of pleasure up my back. With your other hand you start to lightly use your fingers to tease my balls, (you know it’s my favorite) effectively melting me into the couch moaning “fuck yea baby girl, that’s how daddy likes it”. at this point I grab the back of your head and slowly push you down the length of my cock, you moan because you love being daddy’s little cock slut. Forced to use your mouth to please me. You gag and soak my cock with your spit and your mascara runs down your face from your eyes tearing up. Once I’ve had enough I pick you up and put you on the edge of the couches arm rest,sitting up as I pull you close and insert my hot wet cock into your welcoming pussy. I push to the hilt with ease and you shout “ohhh Fuckkkk” while wrapping your legs around me. I then begin pounding you mercilessly, each thrust sending pleasure throughout your entire body. At this point I’ve lost count of how many times you’ve came, but it’s been a lot based of how limp your are getting. All the body crashing orgasms start to take there toll and I move is to the bed. I lay down first and you crawl on top of me. This position is my favorite I can see your breast’s bounce with every thrust I can reach all of you to deliver more pleasure, it’s just perfect You grab the headboard as I start pounding you from underneath, alternating my mouth between your boobs, teasing your asshole with my fingers until it accepts them. I grab your hips and grip your pelvis licking you into place while I deliver another round of nonstop orgasms until you can’t even think I stop after I think you’ve had enough to give you a break and get you some water. I come back too you pouting and “I ask what’s wrong?” You look up at me and say “daddy hasn’t cum yet, I want daddy to cum” I reply “ok baby girl let’s do what we talked about then” your eyes light up and say “yay! This is gonna be fun 😈”. You bring out the restraints and tie me up tight with a pillow under my lower back. You then bring out a hard glass massager, cylindrical in shape and a bottle of lube. You ask me “are you ready daddy? 😈” I nod and you get to work, teasing my balls and deep throating my cock. I’m pulling against my restraints from the pleasure, you then lube up the massager and slowly push it into my ass. Once you hit my prostate I feel a jolt of electricity from there to the head of my cock pushing me over the edge. I cry out “oh fuck, oh fuck, ohhhh fuckkkkkkkkkkkk” as rope after rope of hot cum flys all over my chest. But you don’t stop there you continue to stroke my cock relentlessly as I grunt and softly scream from the sensitivity. Thrashing against my restraints attempting to get away from your grip. You give me an evil little giggle and say “aweee daddy is it sensitive? Is it too much?? Well that’s too bad, we are gonna drain your balls tonight daddy, no matter how long it takes 😈”. You continue to stroke f or what seems like an eternity until I feel the pressure build up again, you see my change of expression and ask “is daddy gonna cum???” I nod and you put the Massager back in to stimulate my prostate, rapidly fucking my ass along with simultaneous cock stimulation make me erupt again, this time you aim at your tits, and paint them with cum. You ease up the stroking after I stop cumming and untie me, as I lay there composing myself you clean me up and tease my cock with your mouth and tongue getting me ready for the next round 😉😉
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/prve19/after_chore_playtime_mf_foreplay_post_orgasm
feedback: paragraphs. It is really difficult to read a solid wall of text.
Otherwise, decent.