1st attempt at erotica

As I push you back on the bed I reach down, both hands gliding up your thighs, I hook my thumbs under your lace panties and curl my fingers under the waist band and gently tug them from your body. I toss them to the floor and kneel down before gripping the back of your legs and pulling you so your hips were resting on the edge of the bed. One glance up at you showed the anticipation and hunger in your eyes. Leaning down I start to press small kisses along the inner side of one of your thighs while I trail my fingertips up the other, just barely making contact with your soft skin. I could smell your sweetness as my lips drew closer and closer to you, it made me want you, but I contained myself. I wanted to taste you first, to feel you squirm and shake under my tongue. I reach up and gently spread your lips apart and feel that you were already wet. You wanted this as much as I did. With just the tip of my tongue I slide it between your lips and the sweet taste of you was enough to drive me wild. Reaching your clit I run my tongue up and down against it, slowly at first before flicking it up and down quickly for a moment. Slowly I slide my other hand up your body, I could feel how tense you were as I buried my face between your legs. You were turned on and so was I. Slowly I slide my open palm over the top of your breast, my middle finger slowly pushing up your nipple as I feel it harden under my touch. I caress your breast while I continue to slide my tongue against your clit, now making small, quick circles against it. I take your hardened nipple between my fingertips and roll it between them, pinching just hard enough to hear a soft moan escapes your lips. Simultaneously I take your clit in my mouth and suck on it while at the same time flicking my tongue up and down quickly. I could feel your hips rise to push against my face harder. That soft moan getting louder as you arch your back. Hearing you moan just turned me on even more. I move my hand away from your nipple and back down your body, dragging my fingertips down your perfect body. Gently I push your thighs apart a little more, opening you up just enough. I look up at you wanting to see the pleasure on your face. Seeing your eyes closed and head tilted back, your lips parted as the sounds of pleasure escaped your lips was enough to turn me on by itself. While you had your eyes closed I quickly slid my tongue down your sweet, wet lips and drive my tongue inside you. Coating my tongue in your sweet nectar as I swirl my tongue around inside you. I knew I had some something right as your hands ran through my hair and gripped what hair you could get your hands on as you grind your hips into my face. I knew you wanted something else but right now you were pulling my tongue as deep inside you as.you could get it. I moan softly against you sending vibrations through your body and causing you to moan even louder this time. As I drove my tongue inside you, swirling it so I could touch every side of you with my tongue I reach up and start to rub your clit, pressing firmly against it as I start to make rapid small circles against it. Then your body tensed and you moaned out louder and louder as you started to shake underneath me. You were practically pulling my hair as you orgasmed, pushing me back after riding the waves of pleasure that coursed through your body.

You gasped for breath for a moment as you recovered. When you opened my eyes there was a new look in your eyes. A look filled with lust and passion. “I need you to fuck me. Hard” the words came out of your mouth and turned me on even more. You turned over and crawled further on the bed and I followed. I followed you, expecting you to turn onto your back at some point, but you don’t. Instead you stay on your knees and lean forward, your ass in the air as you turn your head to the side to look back at me from the pillow you rested it on. “Now” was all you said. I position myself between your legs, I could see that you were still incredibly wet, yet another turn on. I grab myself and slide the tip of my cock between your lips, it glided perfectly against you as I got your wetness over me. I press the head of it against your clit and gently rocked my hips forward so it slid across your clit. The gutteral moan that came from you told me you were in no mood for teasing. With one hand on your hips to hold you where I want you I slide back against you and push inside your tight opening. Now both hands rested on your hips as I held you in place as I pushed deeper and deeper inside you. A deep moan comes from your lips as I get every inch inside you. I hold myself there for a moment before I start to slowly slide out of you. I wanted you to feel every inch of me sliding out of you. As you felt the head of my cock almost slide out of you, you let out a small high pitched whimper “Nooo” you pleaded with me. Granting your wish I quickly thrust inside you, wasting no time. Now I found a good rhythm sliding in and out of you, moving from tip to base hard and fast. Your moans quickly gre louder and louder as I continued. I release one of your hips as I raised my hand above your ass, coming down hard as the *smack* reverberates around the room. A red hand print lift on your cheek as you moaned from the pleasure of the pain. I smack you again in the same spot, making the hand print a brighter red before I grabbed your ass firmly in my hand. I continue to thrust in and out of you. I could see you gripping the sheets as you began to scream. “Don’t cum. Not yet” I groan to you and you nod. I wanted this to build until you just couldn’t take it anymore. My thrusts grew harder as I pushed you to the brink, I knew you wanted to cum. I could feel myself getting closer as well. I slide my hand over your ass and start to tease your ass a little with my fingertip, pushing against it gently as I rubbed over it at the same time but didn’t quite push inside it. I look down at you and knew you were desperate to finish. “Good girl. Not yet.” I make a few faster thrusts deep into you, holding myself deep inside you with the last rapid thrust before going back to that perfect rhythm and slamming into you as hard as I could. Without giving you a warning I push my finger into your ass and start to slowly finger it as I fucked you hard. “Cum for me now baby. I’m going to cum” I moan out. With the permission you need you scream out and I could feel you clench around my cock and your body tighten and shake as you climaxed. When I knew you were at the peak of riding the wave of pleasure I thrust into you, hard and deep and release deep inside you. Pumping my warm cum inside you as we both finish together.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/ponfbm/1st_attempt_at_erotica

3 comments

  1. Not bad for a first attempt, from what I could get through. Definitely needs formatting into easier to read sections, a wall of text like that is hard on the eyes. Just my two cents, but you definitely seem to be on the right track!

  2. Good writing! Very descriptive, agree with the other comment about formatting. Try formatting into separate paragraphs to make it a little easier to read.

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