Fuck the plot, right? Let’s get to the main dish. Isn’t that what you came here for, anyway? I know you’ve been lusting over me. I know you’ve been aching for me. I know you have a laundry list of things you’d do to me. I know this is the moment you’ve been waiting for. Making me submit to you.
That’s why the moment you get ahold of me you strip me off my pants and throw me to the bed. I get excited just seeing how fierce you are handling me. You roll me onto doggy position, and you start licking my buttcheeks while massaging my breasts with your hands.
I feel your teeth nibbling lightly on my round cheeks, it’s making me quiver. Your hand moves all around my body, grabbing everything within its reach, and one hand is rubbing my clit as you start eating me out. I must be very wet already. To be honest I’ve actually been wet since I decided to give up control and let you use me.
You roll my clit with your fingers and pinch it, making me squeal. Next thing I know, one of your hand is grabbing my hair, pulling my head backwards. “Take a deep breath and hold it,” You said. Your voice like a low growl, menacing, but captivating. “Count down slowly from twenty and tell me when you get to zero.”
I oblige, closing my eyes as I draw a deep breath. Twenty.. Nineteen.. Eighteen.. I feel your tongue continues to play on my labia, running up and down, flicking, sucking, all while your fingers are massaging my clit. It’s hard to stay still holding my breath. It feels so good, I want to moan. But you know what I want more? To please you. So I stay obedient, continuing to count down as I feel the rush of sensation pulsating from my pussy, running through my body.
Nearing zero, I reach my hand back to tap you. It’s my cue, and you understand it perfectly. I wonder if you’ve been counting down together with me?
“Breathe,” You ordered. I let go of my breath finally, feeling as if I was released from bounds, free, and… As I inhale, your fingers barge into my pussy, deep and hard, it’s so unexpected that I let out a moan that sounds like a yelp. You start the pace, in and out furiously in a rough manner. I love it. With each thrusts I can’t help but moan and grunt.
“Hold your breath and count down very slowly from twenty again,” You said, while your fingers keep thrusting my super wet hole. It’s like my body is ready to obey you, I take another deep breath. Counting down in my mind, twenty.. Nineteen.. Eighteen.. This time one of my hands covers my mouth and nose, as I whimper helplessly. But it’s amazing how just by taking my breath away it seems my other senses are becoming more sensitive.
Your hand carressing me, your fingers going in and out of me, your breath against my skin, my juices trickling down my thighs, all those small little details feel amplified somehow.
I tap you to tell you I’m nearing zero, and you took your fingers out of me. I almost want to cry, I want it back in, but you have other things in mind. Everything happens so fast. I count down to zero, you putting the tip of your cock to my opening, you telling me to breathe, I exhale and soon gasp loudly as your thick hard cock rams into my pussy.
Goodness gracious, everything is overwhelming. I can feel a hint of pain where your cock stretches my pussy, I can feel my insides throbbing like crazy, clenching to your hard shaft, massaging you. “Give your body to me,” You said, before you start your deep hard thrusts into me, making our thighs slapping with each other, my juices splatter to your skin. It feels so hot, so mind numbing. “You belong to me,” you said.
I don’t know what it is about being claimed belonging to someone, but it really sends me to the edge. It makes me plead to you, “Call me your slut please!” like a desperate little bitch.
“Not yet,” you said between thrusts, “But good girl for asking.”
Your denial is making me frustrated. I don’t back down easily though, I raise my voice and plead again, “Please sir, call me your slut!” I am desperate as fuck.
“You want to be my slut?”
“Yes!”
You slap my butt so hard, I let out an exasparated scream.
“You have to earn it. You do want to earn it right?”
“Yes sir..”
“Who do you belong to?”
“You, sir”
You slap my butt hard again, this time it’s really sending me very close to the edge. I can feel my legs start shaking, my hands are about to give up as the pleasure builds up to the roofs. “S—Sir, I might cum soon!” I can’t hold it, I’m closing my eyes about to surrender to the pleasure.
But you said, “No!”
UGH!!!
You take your cock out and flip me over. I’m on my back now, crying cos I’m edging so fucking much. I want to be called YOUR slut. It’s important to me and you know that. I’m frustrated. I want to cum, too, but fuck me I for needing your permission so bad.
You fold my legs up, push my knees to my chest, and ram your hard cock in again. The full weight of your body against me, screwing your cock in as deep as possible, it feels amazing. I can’t help but grunt and moan and scream with every thrusts.
“Hold your breath. Don’t breathe until I tell you to,” you said in between thrusts, and I can’t help but just… Obey. I hold my breath again and with both hands trying to clasp my mouth so I don’t breathe out. You slap my breasts, my butt, every places that was touched by your hands feels hot, there’s a stinging pain. All while you keep shoving yourself in so hard, so rough, you clasp my nipples with your fingers and you twist it hard. It hurts so fucking much I want to scream. It’s so fucking good. I don’t know anymore.
“You’re mine,” such ferocity in your voice, “Good girl. Breathe.”
I let out the biggest sigh and moan as I feel oxygen rush through my lungs, bringing me back to life, so fucking close to the fucking edge, I feel my legs tughtening as I’m trying to catch my breath. “Sir I’m cumming please sir can I come!!” I cried out, a mixture of plea and announcement, I’m fucking losing myself.
“No!” You said, taking your thick cock out of me. UUUUUGGHHHH!!! FUCK!
The mind numbing mix of frustration and a tad big of anger wash over me as my climax got denied, again. And you slap my pussy, hard, the ringing sound followed by my yelp. AH FUCK
“Count, slut!” You said. So I did. Two, three, four! With each count my voice grows more hysterical, it hurts, it feels good, it’s nothing I’ve ever felt before. Five! And you put yourself in again as I scream from relief.
“Sirrrr I wanna cummmmm,” I don’t even fucking recognize my voice anymore, it’s shaking, as is my legs. I can’t open my eyes anymore, concentrating on not cumming until you say I can. But fuck! Right now there’s nothing in this whole wide world that I’d want more than fucking cumming all over your cock.
“Give yourself to me. Give me everything,” You say as you pick up the pace. Your hand rubbing my clit furiously. I’m a fucking mess right now. All wet from sweat, juices, and tears.
“Sir please…” I cry, I really can’t fucking hold it anymore.
“Who do you belong to?”
“You sir..”
“Say it.”
“I belong to you sir..”
“Who’s my little cumslut?”
“I’m your little cumslut sir please can I fucking cum…” My voice as shaky as ever.
“Hold your breath. Count down from thirty.”
Fuccckkkkk “Sir I can’t..” I’m so fucking crying right now. Can I just fucking cum please I’m right on the edge holding on to tiny strings of self control that I can feel loosening up.
“I wasn’t asking. Do it.”
So I do it. I clasp both of my hands to my mouth. I’m crying and honestly my body is shaking, my legs are giving up, as you keep the pace thrusting me deep and hard, your hand rubbing my clit, fucking me into oblivion. How can I not cum? I can’t think anymore.
Three.. Two.. One. I tap your hand furiously as a sign that the count is over. And then you growl “Good girl, cum for me. You’re my little slut.”
Theeeere’s the magic words. And just like that, I release myself and burst into climax. My whole body shakes as I scream/moan and arch my back, I cum so fucking hard I lost control of my body. Legs tightening and trembling, all the built up excitements just fucking drown me, it’s fucking crazy. Might be the most intense I have ever cum.
I lay there, powerless, honestly feeling like my soul has left my body. My legs are so sensitive, my arms limp, my buttcheeks are sore from your smacks, I’m out of breath, my head numb…
But wait. I’m forgetting something. You haven’t cum yet. I peek at you, face flushed like mine.
“Good girl,” your breath is heavy too. “Now on your knees and hands again.”
Oh fuck here we go again.
(Written based on experience, and with permission of my owner)
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/pfrd3a/make_me_submit_to_you_fsub_mdom_breath_play
That was beautiful, extremely erotic and a wild ride. Thank you for sharing!