When I do erp with a partner I usually describe actions well but my main problem is that I seem to think to write repetitive stuff and then going to another idea, usually during mid rp the script is already on sex and my mind goes blank on that moment, should I write *I keep thrusting* or do something else? I then bring the action above by kissing but I would like to know if there is a better way to write about a person thrusting into someone repetitively.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/paghq6/how_to_not_be_repetitive_in_erp
Sounds like you’re too focused on action?? You don’t have to physically do something different every message. Instead try writing about what you’re feeling or thinking or any changes in what you might look like–extra sweaty, pupils dilated, what your hands are doing. You can add some dialogue or describe the way your partner looks and how that makes you feel, also.
Try to write something that leads into another broader idea that you want to erp so your partner knows where you want to go with the scene. Or something more specific that will be easy for your partner to follow up with and reply to with their own extra details.