Fun in the woods [primal] [bdsm] [public]

This is my first story, so any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is extremely welcome. Just don’t be a dick please.

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“So how long do I have again?” Anna asked.

I looked over at her, grinning. She was a short girl, but with curves in all the right places. Short brunette hair, pale skin, she was a vision, especially in the tank top and gym shorts she was wearing. How she was with me, a tall, nerdy goth was beyond me.

“2 minutes. Then I start the chase,” I explained to her again. She’d already asked twice, but I figured it was the nerves. I don’t think she’d ever participated in this type of activity before, so I know she was on edge, which suited me fine. “After my timer goes off, then I start the hunt.”

She stared apprehensively at the woods we were at. I could tell she was thinking about many different scenarios that could go wrong, so I tried to alleviate her worries. “I have a medkit, we have our phones on us, and if you’re hurt, just call for me. I’ll come immediately and we’ll get ya taken care of.”

“Ok, if you’re sure…”

I smirked at her, “In that case, your two minutes start…NOW!”

She took off into the woods, her perfect ass bouncing as she ran over roots and sticks. It wasn’t long before I lost sight of her.

I sat back on my car, waiting for the timer on my phone to go off, and crossed my arms. Most people don’t understand this part of me, where I have the overwhelming urge to chase my “prey,” whether it’s my girlfriend, a friend, or someone I’ve worked with in the past. The hunt, spotting my prey, chasing them down, it’s my favorite. Especially with what might happen at the end. But all of my previous girlfriends never wanted to take it outside, so it was mostly a 30 second chase around the house. Not that there is anything wrong with that, but it was never quite as fulfilling.

Then I met Anna. She was in no way new to this world, showing me things even I didn’t know about. But she had never done This. I wanted to change that, so here we are, in the woods, on a hot summer day.

I jumped as my timer went off. Guess I was involved with my thoughts. I took off at a slow jog, saving my energy for when I spotted her.

It wasn’t long. I didn’t see her, but I saw broken branches she stepped on, or leaves kicked the wrong way. I followed the tracks, picking up my speed. “The game is afoot,” I whispered to myself. I said I was a nerd.

It wasn’t long until I came to a small stream. Knowing her, she probably ran down it a bit to try to cover her tracks. I followed along, until I saw signs of her climbing out. Not a big one, just a rock that had been disturbed. But it was enough.

I jogged for a little bit longer, resting when needed, until I heard shuffling ahead of me. When I was younger, my dad taught me how to walk quietly in the woods during hunting season, so I sped up but took more caution.

And there she was. Standing next to a tree, panting. I guess she had tried to run, and got tired. Bunnies never learn.

I got within 15 feet of her, before I let out a low growl. I tell you, the look on her face when she jumped, squealed, turned around and saw me, damn near made up for the heat. She took off running, but I was hot on her heels. My prey was in sight.

I chased her for a while, letting her lose energy, while still keeping her in sight. I may have let her gain some ground, hope is a good motivator, but I’d always close the gap again. She’d let out these little squeals of fear every so often, or screams when I almost caught her, it was intoxicating.

We ran for what seemed like hours, but couldn’t have been more than 45 minutes, when I decided enough was enough. I put on an extra burst of speed, letting out a bestial roar, and tackled her to the ground.

Credit where it’s due, she struggled and kicked, but I had a secret weapon. I held her down and reached into my pocket for my paracord, which I had already cut to length beforehand.

I grabbed her hands and tied them by the wrist before I did the same to her ankles, then I stood up to look at what I had caught.

Her hair was a mess, leaves and sticks in it from our scuffle. Her entire body was coated in sweat, and she was breathing heavily, which was doing very interesting things with her chest.

“Who am I,” I growled down at her.

She glared at me, and said the one thing that’ll set me off; “Fuck you!” she yelled.

Well, I couldn’t let that stand. I went down, holding her hands down, as I bit down hard on her neck. She let out a gasp that turned into a moan as I kissed and licked her neck, biting that special spot right below her ear. We made out, both of us still breathing hard from the chase, as my hands wandered up and down her body.

I couldn’t take anymore clothing, so I ripped her tank top and bra off, and took off my own shirt. I resumed kissing her neck, moving down and catching a nipple in my mouth. She gasped and arched her back, moaning as I captured her other nipple between my fingers. I went up and down her torso, biting at her hips and her breasts, watching her squirm and moan.

I reached the top of her shorts, and in one smooth motion took them and her panties to her knees. I continued my journey, kissing and biting her hips and legs. She was gasping, arching her back, and moaning when I’d find an especially potent spot. She was breathing fast, and I could smell her arousal all around me.

I ran my hands up and down the inside of her legs, watching her squirm and open them when my hands got close. I teased her for a while, barely touching her lips before I’d move on, and she would move her hips, trying to maintain contact. It was only after she let out a strained “Pleeeaaaasssseee…” that I acquiesced, rubbing up and down her slit, and rubbing my finger around her hole.

“Please Daddy, stick them in,” she begged me. Who was I to deny that request? I slid two fingers in, curling them to hit her g-spot. She was going wild, bucking her hips and moaning loudly.

Then I started rubbing her clit with my thumb at the same time, and she tensed, curling up on herself until she exploded, yelling out “OHMIGOD.” She thrashed around, trying to escape the unendurable pleasure I was administering, until she finally collapsed, breathing hard and shaking.

After that, I couldn’t wait any longer to take my prize. I ripped my own shorts off, and flipped her around, grabbing her hips to pull her up. She squealed, and pushed her ass back towards me.

I teased her entrance with my dick, just going around and up to her clit, until she pushed back and begged me “Please daddy, fill me up…” I couldn’t stop myself; I plunged hard into her, shaking her ass as I went to the hilt. She arched her back as I started slow, pulling myself almost all the way out before pushing my dick slowly back in. We stayed at that rhythm for a while, but I knew I couldn’t last long after that chase.

I picked up the pace watching her ass jiggle with every impact. She was cooing with every withdraw, and letting out little “uh”s every time I went in. We worked up a sweat, my hands roaming around her back, grabbing her hair, and reaching around to grab her neck in that way I know she likes.

She finally looked back at me, and said “Take me daddy. Make me yours.” I couldn’t last after that. I grabbed her hips and started thrusting hard and fast, smacking her ass every so often. She was gone, lost in the bliss of a thorough fucking, as I rode her hard.

Eventually the end came, and I went as deep as I could, before busting everywhere imside of her. I guess she could feel it, because she let out a loud moan and came at the same time, squeezing and milking me for every drop.

We lay there afterwards, basking in post sex bliss, breathing heavy, when I leaned over and bit the back it of her neck hard enough to draw blood. “Mine…” I growled in her ear, before I rolled off and laid down on the ground. She curled up to me, laying her head on my chest, regaining her breath as well. “Yours…” she mumbled, before falling asleep. Guess I have to carry her to the car now. Good thing I like doing it.

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