I love writing and decided to share my first story with you all. Would appreciate some feedback so I can get better. Thanks for taking the time to read
Their shadows danced on the walls in the candlelight filled room. Her white babydoll lingerie floated freely over her petite, slim frame. Her fingers delicately brushed over the deep scratches on his shoulder which couldn’t be more than a day old. ‘Good business trip?’ Her voice gentle and loving as always and her hands continued to survey the marks on his torso as she gently massaged him.
It was Sunday and he’d been gone all week. It was longer than normal but occasionally his trips would be more than the usual couple of days and she always longed for his return. ‘It was enjoyable thank you. Very worthwhile’ he replied, his eyes gazing upon her beauty. ‘I’m pleased to be back home with you my Princess’.
‘Are you ready to confess now my love’ her soft voice asked as she smiled. His thick hardness was growing between them and she gracefully fell to her knees. Her baby blue eyes looking up longingly into his.
‘My beautiful girl, please forgive me’ his hands now combing her hair as her mouth wrapped around his cock. ‘Forgive me beautiful girl for I have sinned’ he groaned as she continued to work him. Her small mouth choked on his fullness but she persevered as always, waiting for him to decide when to stop. He groaned his pleasure until his hands gently pulled her head up.
‘Kiss me. Kiss me sweet girl to let me know everything is ok’.
Her bright blue eyes fluttered again as she looked up at him. Her mouth moved to his and she kissed the man passionately on the lips. ‘Let me confess all’ he breathed.
She knew the routine well of the forgiveness he desired and she could feel her heart racing with excited anticipation. He pulled down her white thong and she straddled him, willingly easing herself onto his waiting hardness. A growl of pleasure built in the mans throat as she gasped and delicately rocked onto his thick cock.
‘Breathe baby girl, let me stretch you slow so it doesn’t hurt you’ He gently held her hips. He groaned, and knew he’d never tire of the feeling of first entering her. It was always a tight fit and took a little manoeuvring for her body to accustom. He grunted as she set the slow pace in his lap, her own pleasure growing as she took him deeper with each thrust. The white lingerie still covered her petite frame and encased her small breasts and the lace brushed his thigh.
‘Confess to me my lover. Confess and let me forgive and heal you’ her soft voice gently panted from the pleasure he gave.
His hands held her close as he began. ‘Annie and Cassie’ he groaned the names of his betrayal as their bodies worked together. ‘And Emily. Pretty Emily 4 times’. His cock pulsed as he reminisced of his last confession and she let out her loudest moan yet. Emily reminded him of her in so many ways – from her young, pert breasts to her long blonde hair. But his lover was so different from any of the sins he endured, even Emily. He could do things with Emily that he couldn’t do with her for she was too pure as her body had known no other man except him. Her innocence could not be subjected to his raw needs. As much as he tried, he couldn’t stop his desires so he pursued fulfilment by other means and his sins would be healed by her pureness. ‘Please forgive me for my pleasurable lusts, for I enjoyed them and should not’.
She held his face in her hands her baby blue eyes looked deep into his soul. Her face was full of lust and pleasure. Her lips kissed him passionately on his lips as she continued to give herself to him ‘Who was the fairest of them all my love?’ She panted her question.
‘You’ he groaned. ‘You my sweet girl, you’re always the fairest and purest of them all. For that there is no match and you will always only be mine’. He cradled her in his lap, the gentleness he showed her was something he’d experienced with no other. He vowed only to show her his new found soft side she’d uncovered. He feared if not he would scare or break her for she was too good for him but he’d never let her go. Though the wealth and power was all his, he knew in his cold heart that it was this sweet girl that controlled him. He needed her more than she could even know and she was for no one else to enjoy.
Her sweet soft moans filled the room. ‘I forgive you my lover. Cleanse yourself by filling me with your seed and your love. I’m yours, all yours and only yours. Fill me, I’ve been waiting for you my love’.
‘My sweet, sweet angel’ his voice was laced with ecstasy. Her body convulsed in his lap, her tightness pulsating on his unscrupulous cock. With his mind now consumed by just her, the images of his deceit dissolved and he reached his own noisy release.
He was cleansed and forgiven until the next time. His lewd thoughts would soon return and he would stray once again seeking his gratification.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ov62nc/confession_my_first_story_mf_cheating_sub_fiction
Great job. Good descriptions!!