( all characters are not real and 18+)
When the young woman [Elizabeth](https://www.reddit.com/r/ElizabethOlsen/comments/dkgxgt/queen_of_sideboob/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) married into the family she knew what she was signing up for. This family had a tradition that dated back as far as anyone could remember and was a rule that had to be followed 100%. The rule was simple, any woman 18 years or older was allowed to be used as a free use slut to any man 18 years or older in the house. Elizabeth was 18 when she married her husband who came from a very old wealthy family, and she fully supported the rule of letting her husband fuck her whenever he wanted however he wanted, she ever expected she’d be able to share the burden with many daughters when they came of age, yet out of the 3 children she had, only the youngest was a girl. As her sons began coming of age, she found the rule even more difficult to maintain, with her husband and two horny sons, she found during the day she had a cock in her more often than not, yet she still supported the rule, even if she found it tedious. She believed it was important to keep the sexual health of the men in her family important, and when her daughter turned 18, she made sure to impress that importance on her as well. The Daughter of this family [Julia](https://www.reddit.com/r/JuliaMerekouliasPics/comments/o30dbw/how_long_until_onlyfans/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) however, was less impressed with the rule, while she followed it, she wasn’t devoted to it the same way her mother was and partook reluctantly. The story of this family starts today on Julia’s 18th birthday being introduced to her new life
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[Julia](https://www.reddit.com/r/JuliaMerekouliasPics/comments/o30dbw/how_long_until_onlyfans/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) awoke this morning as if it was any other day yet today was special, it was her 18th birthday, a day she had both been dreading, and deeply curious about at the same time, Julia was attending her last year of high school and had the fit body of a young athlete, she was a member of both the cheer and track team and had a slim physique because of it, however, took after her mother and was exceptionally beautiful with an ample sized chest and an ass that filled out any pants she was the envy of her school yet remained a virgin, however, she expected that would not last long today. She did wonder who would be the one to take her virginity from her though, she had two older brothers and of course her father, would it be the eldest, Liam 20, who was the largest in the family in both stature and length, he was the roughest too, Julia had seen him manhandle mom a thousand times and particularly loved anal. Or would it be the middle child James 19, he was quieter and reserved yet possibly the most perverted, he wasn’t the tallest and definitely had the smallest cock, Julia had seen him blow his load after only a couple of strokes into mom. What she wasn’t hoping for was her father; he was a perverted man who seemed to like everything under the sun, and Julia knew he’d take a liking to her now that she was 18. Despite all these thoughts Julia crawled out of bed in her underwear and made her way to the bathroom to shower, she was typically up before the others and knew that she might at least get a shower in before the day started. Julia stripped down and entered the shower letting the almost burning hot water wash over her, she only had a couple of moments of bliss before she heard the door open however followed by the glass shower door opening and hearing a man step in, she didn’t need to turn around to know it was James who had entered, Julia immediately felt his hands cover her body as he pressed his hard crotch against her ass. Julia felt as her brother molested her body, he relished every second running his hands over her thighs, squeezing her ass and tits he was going to savour every second of being the first. Julia knew James was smaller, yet feeling his cock against her ass she realized just how puny he was, she couldn’t tell if she was disappointed or relieved. “Lets get this over with James so I can have my shower or are you just going to touch me all day” Julia said with exasperation, Julia’s mother Elizabeth had been impressing the importance of the woman’s role in the house on Julia for years and that is was their job to make the men feel good, yet Julia had no such feelings for this, she would follow the rule but there was no rule that said she had to enjoy it. She felt James cock twitch against her ass, she almost wondered if he’d cum right there, but not to her luck the young man hadn’t, James took hold of his cock, bringing it to her tight opening and pushed in, Julia was as tight as an 18-year-old virgin could be, yet James cock had little trouble squeezing in, Julia leaned forward placing her hands on the shower wall in front of her gently arching her back like her mother had taught her. Already James breath had become heavy and rapid as her brother pumped in and out of her in fast short thrusts, the young man squeezed her hips tight until a minute later he pushed himself as deep as he could into his little sister blowing his load into her tight young virgin pussy. Julia was unimpressed as she felt James collapse on top of her, his cock still inside of her, shooting out the last ropes of what he had. She had been bored throughout the short session and was mostly waiting for it to be over so she could finish her shower and clean herself up. When James caught his breath he pulled out of his sister his cock was followed by cum leaking out of her and running down her thigh with the shower water. Wordlessly the young man stepped out of the shower and Julia stood back up, “creep” she whispered to herself as she heard the bathroom door close. Julia grabbed a towel and cleaned herself out the best she could, she was on the pill but she didn’t care to have her brother’s cum inside of her, once she did the best she could she finished up her shower. She wrapped a towel around her chest covering herself up as she returned to her room, it was a Saturday, and her mother had laid her out clothes, this wasn’t a typical habit however today her mother wanted to make sure she looked perfect, on her dresser lies a small crop top with a V cut neckline that would show plenty of cleavages and no bra. Below it was one of her school uniform skirts that fell to her mid-thigh, along with them a set of black knee-high socks and black panties. Once finished dressing she looked in the mirror, she couldn’t deny she looked stunning, any man’s fantasy. Taking a deep breath she opened up her bedroom door and headed out knowing she was ahead for a long day.
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This is the first full erotic story I’ve ever written on Reddit and plan on following up with many many parts to the story of Julia and Elizabeth in this free use household, I’m really looking for feedback with this first part, what did you enjoy, what would you change how could I improve,
and if your interested in reading more.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/or1497/reluctant_freeuse_family_part_1_mf_bs
That was pretty darn good for your first story, 👏👍. It was a good read, and it kept my attention well.
My only suggestion would be that it might have been a bit more interesting and exciting if you had incorporated more “lead up” into your story. Instead of just jumping right into it almost as fast as she got into her shower. Even with regards to the mother, some more details about some of her own experiences over the years. Especially in the instance of her memories of say her first time with her boys. Adding a bit of stuff like that would probably help you flesh out your story a bit more as well as help you to develop a deeper character profile for each person in the family. I hope you continue writing and I am looking forward to reading more episodes of this story! I really hope that there’s something in the ramblings ( 😜🙃 ) that I shared with you that will be of some help to you in your future stories!
I feel like I need to say this, to a lot of people in this subreddit, but please format your story. Even simply just paragraphing can help break up the story and make it seem a lot better to the reader.
A lot of people will just not read a solid block of text, and it can be hard for a number of readers if they have other issues with reading.