Red Pt2 [MF]

^(People wanted the second (and so far final) part to this, so here it is! I’ve included a short run-in for context; for those who have read) [^(Part 1)](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/oio9oa/red_pt1_mf/)^(, carry on after the asterisks…or not 😁 ENJOY!)

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“As nice as these are…” he suggested, hooking two fingers of each hand into the front of her waistband, then sliding them around to each side.

She nodded in agreement, lifting her rear from the duvet, allowing him to pull the garment towards him and then up and off her legs as she raised them up straight. They ended up tossed onto his discarded trousers. She lowered her knees down onto his shoulders, legs hanging behind him. She knew full well what the next logical step was.

“All in good time, minx.” thought the man, thoroughly enjoying his efforts.

He knew that often a longer route was the most rewarding way to get to a destination. Rather than go for the obvious target, as enticing as it certainly was, he simply turned his face to her inner thigh, opened his mouth and bit. Not too hard, but definitely enough to catch some skin and keep it there with minimal effort. He heard the girl breathe out sharply. He released the skin and licked it. There was barely a mark. He placed a hand under her rump to lift her pelvis slightly, cheekily parting her buttocks a tiny bit as he did so. He moved his mouth up her thigh a few inches and repeated the nipping. He felt her bumcheeks tighten and release with each pinch of the teeth. Finally his lips arrived at hers. Instead of focusing on her foof, he exhaled a long, warm breath upon it, then moved his face to partway up her other thigh…and bit. The girl wiggled her arse on his hands as she sought to be touched where she wanted. With the same insolent pace, the man bit and licked up along her leg. Once again, his mouth arrived at the inevitable destination.

*****

Without stopping, he licked the flat of his tongue up over her right labia, then the left. The girl groaned with need.

“More.”

He tilted his head and sucked one side of her cunt into his mouth, licking between the inner and outer lips, running his tongue up and down both sides of the inner. He sucked harder and released her, tilting his head the opposite way to do the same to the other side. He heard her breathing speed up. Releasing the labia from his hungry mouth, he flattened his tongue as wide as possible and slowly licked up her lips, allowing his tongue piercing and then the tip to flick over her clit and jewellery.

“Oh!” she exclaimed, finally getting some attention on her clit after the slow build-up. He kissed it quickly, giving the nubbin another quick once-over with his tongue, causing her to stifle a shaky squeak. He lowered her posterior back down to the bed, moving his hands back up to fan his fingers over her nipples again. The girl tried to regain some composure while still breathing rapidly, reaching for a pillow. As she pulled the pillow under her head he changed tact and began to lightly flick his fingertips over the very ends of her peaks, varying the pressure that his nails used on her nipples each time. She released another ragged breath. Head comfortably elevated, she looked down herself at the man, past her chest with his naughty hands, wanting, almost, to regain some control of the situation.

“Get back down there.” There was no pleading here, just a quiet but firm request bordering on command. The man knew it was what they both wanted regardless.

“As you wish.” he said, locking his eyes with hers.

He kissed both of her breasts again before kneeling back down between her legs, running his hands down her flat belly as he did so. Keeping eye contact he lowered his face past the small tidy triangle of fuzz there so that his nose was inches from her opening, he half-closed his eyes and inhaled deeply and obviously. Her musk was almost intoxicating, mingling with the faint post-club smells of sweat and alcohol. Closing his eyes he exhaled through his mouth, making sure the warm air flowed over her sensitive flesh. He opened his eyes, hers were still locked with his. He gave her a confident half-smile, almost predatory, as placed his left hand onto her pubic mons. He gently pushed away from himself with his hand, the motion pulling her skin tight and raising her hood away from her clitoris.

His face dropped quickly to her cunt, forming a seal around her nubbin and upper half of her labia. “Hoooh!” he heard her gasp. Making sure his tongue was very wet he set to work.

He lightly tickled the underside of her clit before moving his tongue up over it and back down again, making contact with her clit, labia and piercing on just the upstrokes. “Uh…uh…” she repeated to herself, eyes closed and head back on the pillow. He kept looking at what he could see of her face, licked and listened. There was no special technique to pleasuring someone new, no magic tricks or one-size-fits-all move that worked for everyone. The secret was to try something, pay close attention to your lover, change it slightly and see if their reaction was positive. If something worked, stick with that with slight variations to see if it can be improved, if something doesn’t work, go back to what worked best or try something else and repeat. He started licking faster, upping the tempo. Lick lick lick. Uh…uh…uh… her breathing also increased. He pulled back slightly and gave her a long slow lick over her vulva up to her clit, slipping his tongue inside her opening as he did so. She let out a hot sigh that was a mix of frustration and desire. His mouth covered her again, the tongue licking but this time making light contact on both up and downstrokes.

“Oh fucking hell…” she whispered and bit her lip. He sped up. Lick lick lick lick lick lick. He could hear her breathing hard through her nose in time with his downstrokes. He licked a bit more firmly, gauging the pressure by her reaction. Her clit was a firm bump under his tongue, his long lick had mixed her slickness with his saliva there to ensure there was as little friction as possible. He increased the speed again, watching her carefully. She released her bottom lip, breathing in through clenched teeth and out with a sound of pleasure.

He kept up this pressure and rhythm. Her breathing grew more rapid.

“Oh…oh…oh…please…” she was tweaking her nipples, playing with them as she neared her climax. “Oh, oh, OH! What the fuck?!”

He had stopped licking just as she’d reached the cusp. She stared at him in disbelief, taking in the sight of his deep breathing and a mix of both their fluids dampening his beard.

“I need a drink.” he said innocently, even though the ice in his glass was long gone the sheen of condensation told her that there was a large chance that this was anything but an innocent repast. He gave her a wide-eyed puppy look as he swigged the cold water and placed the glass back onto the sideboard. The look melted into a mischievous grin as he lowered his head and exhaled a frigid breath onto her heat.

“Oh fuck…” she whispered and closed her eyes.

Again, he flattened his tongue and lapped at her, covering all of her mimsy with cold sensations.

“Haaaaaaaa…” she exhaled quietly, trying not to provide the man with too much satisfaction. His tongue had now narrowed to focus on her vulva and entrance. She breathed deeply in and out as his cool tongue pushed deeper inside her with each lick, stealing a bit more of her heat each time. She had plenty more where that came from, months of lockdown-enforced celibacy driving her need to orgasm at the mercy of this beautiful teasing man.

That man felt the coolness leaving his tongue, the sensation being replaced by the taste of a strong tang and knew that he couldn’t get away with much more wanton torment: with his nose rubbing against her clit-bar and hood as he licked her sensitive folds she smelled divine but he couldn’t stay there forever, as much as he’d like to. Maybe another time, if he was fortunate enough to be permitted. But here and now, it was time to give this rare beauty what she deserved and desired.

He pulled away, savouring her taste. She noticed this and smiled, almost bashfully. He smiled back and winked. She flashed her grey eyes at him, taking a prepatory deep breath.

He scattered lingering kisses all over her nether lips, he felt her squirm, yearning for a long pent-up release not by her own hand. This time he looped his arms under her legs and brought his hands up onto her lower abdomen, thumbs meeting just where her pubic fuzz descended, simultaneously pushing down with his hands to keep her still while pulling up with his thumbs slightly to expose her most sensitive part again. Lowering his mouth to her he started to lick, making sure his tongue was as wet as possible to help banish any lingering coolness. His tongue set a brisk pace, but a light pressure, and he watched her. No fucking about this time. As an amusing musician one said “…it’s business time.” He smirked against her mimsy at the thought and immediately he felt a hand grip his hair at the root and push his mouth firmly onto her quim. It seemed that the redhead now equated smirks with mischief at her expense and was having none of it. A fast learner, smart, but mistaken…this time. This time he had no intention of denying her.

He kept licking but increased the pressure slightly again, feeling her clitoris move back and forth slightly under his tongue.

“Fucking hell…oh fucking hell…” the girl trembled.

Instead of increasing the pressure with his tongue directly, the man moved his biceps up and forwards, bringing his shoulders up. Her legs moved up with him up and back, exposing herself to him further as her vulnerable privates became the closest part of her to him. It was exactly what she wanted. More. Lick lick lick. He relentlessly tongued her, the sensations coursing through her until very little else mattered. Ah…ah…ah…AH…AH…AH

“Please…” now that was a beg, but his only goal in life at that moment in time was to satisfy her.

He paused for just a second, breathing out against her. He breathed in. Then he continued the tonguework, a fraction faster than before.

“Ah, thhhhhhh, ah, thhhhhhh…AH…nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng FUCK!” finally, through gritted teeth and wide-eyed, she came. Twice denied, twice as hard.

He continued to lick until the shudders had subsided, then slowly licked more and more gently until it was almost a feather-touch before withdrawing.

The man gave her fanny a quick kiss, causing her to twitch.

“Sensitive!” she said to him, her voice barely a quivering whisper.

“I know.” he whispered back, cheekily nipping her inner thigh with his teeth. The redheaded vixen-nymph squealed and swatted his head.

It was 2am. There was still fun to be had this night: slow, deep, shallow, fast, passionate fun. The man was happy that he’d gone out tonight. All because of her.

M.

XXI II MMXXI

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