This is the opening setup and something of a rewrite of a similar story I did before, but its now set in its own sci fi themed universe. Would love if someone could take a look and provide feedback
https://docs.google.com/document/d/138YxRe2g-9PzvS1uPifMpY4pI_NCmq6GMdtNZMEd9vg/edit?usp=sharing
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/o4xq83/looking_for_feedback_on_this_first_part_of_nsfw