The commute ended up more than fun [MF]

I’d known her nearly all my life, our parents were friends and we’d pretty much grown up together. Nothing much had ever happened in the past, I was always attracted to her but tried my best to hide it. It all came out one drunken night which was pretty wild, as best as my memory serves, but since then we have moved our separate ways. We still spoke now and then and saw each other at various functions. That was until we both got jobs in London and saw each other on the train quite regularly which brought us closer again in more ways than one…

It was great seeing her again, we’d talk about all sorts of things on the commute and we began to get to know each other again. I was still very much attracted to her and as time went on I felt the spark growing on both sides. This one particular time we’d actually planned to get the same train back from London together rather than leaving it to luck to bump into each other. I waited on the platform for her but the train turned up and she was running late. I got on in the hope of finding us a seat to share next to each other. 
Unfortunately there were no seats so I stood by the door watching the platform in the hope she’d still make it. Thankfully she did, she ran down the platform and I held the door for her, pulling her up into the train. I probably pulled her a little too hard as she bumped against me and I put my arm around her back to steady her. In what might have been an awkward embrace though our eyes locked and we both just laughed, I could already feel the energy between us. 

We stood in the doorway as the train moved off, we were just talking and catching up on the day we’d had but I couldn’t take my gaze away from her eyes and her lips, I wanted to kiss her so badly. The train was particularly bumpy that day and a few times we found we were thrown into each other, which of course I didn’t mind! It became a bit of a game and fun to get close together. 

Suddenly there was a much larger, more dramatic bump, quite a loud bang and screeching noise. I held on to her and we looked around us as the train slowly came to a stop. There was an announcement that something had happened and we’d need to stop for a short time while the driver investigated the issue.

A short while after, the conductor came through the train to check everyone was OK and saw that we were standing at the door between carriages. “Hi guys, if you carry on through the train there’s an empty first class carriage, take a seat in there, we don’t know how long we’ll be stopped for and no need to be standing when you can have a carriage to yourselves.” 

We looked at each other and smiled, gathered our belongings and headed through the train to the first class carriage. 

Being the gentleman that I am, I let her go infront of me, mainly so I could check out her arse! She was in work wear,  a tight black skirt, tights and a white shirt, she always looked so hot dressed smart like that. We got to the carriage and sure enough it was empty, we found a table seat so we’d have more space and I sat by the window, she slid across close to me. I liked that and took it as a signal she was possibly on the same page as me. I turned slightly as much as I could to face her and we carried on talking but again my focus was firmly fixed on her eyes and lips. I didn’t care anymore, we were alone and I went for it, I lent forward to kiss her. For a split second I hesitated as I got close, our lips brushed and then embraced. She smelt really good, my heart was racing as our tongues began to entwine. We kissed softly at first and then I put my hand around the back of her head pulling her in slightly harder and running my hands through her hair slightly. 

Her hand was on my leg now slightly squeezing my thigh and stroking it working her way up. I was already hard when her hand found what she was looking for and began to feel my length, stroking it through my trousers. 

She pulled away and began to kiss my neck. I still had one hand around the back of her neck and the other I started to feel her chest and unbutton the first couple of buttons on her shirt. She suddenly licked my ear and whispered “I want to suck your dick so bad” I was so fucking horny at that point I didn’t care where we were or who caught us! I pulled her hair a bit and we locked eyes again, we both smiled “You’re so fucking bad, I love it” I said. She took that as a sign and started to undo my trousers. I kissed her hard again and then moved to her neck, softly kissing to start with and breathing heavily against her skin as she undid my trousers and her hand reached in to find my hard cock. I kissed and licked her neck and had one hand on her leg at this point feeling up her thigh and slowly edging her skirt up. I was pleasantly surprised to find she was wearing stockings and not tights. She must have planned this as she knew I loved stockings.

By now she had her hand on my cock feeling its length, stroking it and teasing the head. There was enough room for her to maneuver herself down and she softly kissed the tip of my cock and swirled her tongue around it while still stroking with her hand. It felt amazing to be under her control, I had one hand on the back of her head running my fingers through her hair and slightly encouraging her. I laid back and looked up at the ceiling not believing what was happening, it was like I was in a dream. 

Her mouth was so wet and warm, she was sucking me hard now and breathing heavily against my cock. I pushed her head forcefully and she gagged slightly, she pulled away and looked up at me with a glint in her eye “choke me on that fat cock” she said and went back to sucking. I pushed hard again, this time holding her for longer as I heard her gag and choke, then I pulled her hair pulling her away from it forcefully, then again forcing her back down on it. This time I was in control of her.

This was getting too much for me and I wanted more! At the end of the carriage there was a toilet, I suggested we sneak in there for some fun. She led the way and I followed eagerly. The cubicle was tight but as soon as I’d locked the door I pushed her forward toward the wall to bend her over slightly, she supported herself with both hands against the wall as I hitched up her skirt. I slid her underwear down and they dropped to her feet. My cock was already out and hard as a rock, I teased her at first by sliding it between her legs, she was so wet and I could feel how hot her pussy was against my cock. I rubbed myself against her as my hands moved around to unbutton her shirt some more, I pulled her bra down to reveal her breasts and teased her nipples as my cock was still sliding between her legs making her even wetter. By now she was moaning softly, I reached down and slowly started to ease my cock into her, slowly inch by inch I slid back and forth as she let out soft moans each time. Once she had my full length deep inside her I teased her nipple again and with the other hand pulled her hair slightly, raising her head. She looked back at me, “fuck me hard” she said. That was enough for me and I yanked her hair back as I thrust hard into her, she let out a gasp as I kissed her neck and bit at her ear slightly while fucking her harder. By this point her soft moans had turned into loud groans as she tried to catch her breath with each thrust of my thick cock deep inside her. 

It was a confined space but we had just enough to really go at it, I was still feeling her breasts, pulling her hair and fucking her hard. Then I had one hand on her hip pulling her harder into me and the other hand I moved to her throat, I wrapped my fingers around her and squeezed softly to begin with and she let out a moan. “Fuck yeah, do it to me” she said. I squeezed harder and fucked her as hard as I could, suddenly I could feel her legs weaken as she began to shake in orgasm. She moaned loudly and I held her while still deep inside her, I could feel her pussy tighten as the waves of ecstasy ran through her body. I was close myself.

I continued but now at a slower pace with long motions sliding in and out, I whispered in her ear that I was going to cum. “Do it inside me” she said and I pushed deeper and deeper until I felt the hot cum shooting from my cock, filling her pussy and my own legs felt weak. It felt amazing to cum so deep inside of her.

I pulled out from her and she turned around to face me, “that was amazing!” She said with a big smile on her face, she kissed me hard and wrapped her arms around me. 

At that point the train suddenly began to move again, we quickly managed to tidy ourselves up and just as we were leaving the cubicle she looked at me with that glint in her eye again, “round two back at mine?”…

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