I was drinking in a bar alone on a Thursday night after a bad day of work reflecting on the past year of my life. After my girlfriend left me, I had been in a downward spiral and didn’t know when it would stop. I was working a dead end job and living in a shitty apartment. I liked this bar because it reflected how shitty I feel. It was a small dive bar that felt like an old time saloon. It was dim lit, had a single bar that ran the length of the room, and a few cocktail tables throughout. Most of the stools and decoration were falling apart and the carpet smelled like 20 years of cigarettes and beer.
I sat in my sorrows with my hat pulled down low, beard grown and scraggly, wearing an old t-shirt and jeans. As I sipped on a glass of bourbon, a group of twenty-something aged beautiful women walked up to the bar to order drinks. I didn’t bother attempting to be social given the state of my emotional health, but of course fate had other plans. The enthusiastic group brought energy and cheerfulness that I hadn’t seen in some time. Upon chatting and waiting for their drinks, a beautiful redhead woman wearing a tight white tank top, jeans, and brown heels bumped into me.
“Excuse me, I’m sorry, I guess the drinks are already hitting me haha” she proclaimed.
“No worried mam, that’s why we are all here for right?” I replied.
She laughed and said “oh gosh, don’t call me mam, makes me feel old.”
“What would you prefer I call you then?”
“Call me Rosie, but I better get back to my friends, it’s girls night out.”
Rosie walked back to her group and I continued on feeling sorry for myself. Especially after that interaction, knowing that I would never attract a girl like that. I pounded my drink and ordered one more before I head home. I could hear the girls laughing and having fun at one of the cocktail tables. I stared at whatever sports game was on the 20 year old television behind the bar. As I was almost finished with my last drink, the bar was quiet and I thought I was the last one in there. As I stand up to leave, I notice the girls are still here and there’s a drunk guy bothering them.
I catch eyes with Rosie and could see the discomfort in her facial expression. “Ah fuck” I whisper to myself and walk over to the table. “Hey ladies is everything alright?” I inquire. “Oh fuck off man, they are fine go back to the bar” he replies. I look at Rosie and could tell that this guy wouldn’t leave them alone. “Alright man, it’s time to go home,” I say as I put my hand on his shoulder. He turn and punches me in the eyebrow and nearly knocks me down. I stumble back towards him, grab the back of his head, and slam it into the table knocking him out cold.
“Sorry ladies” I say as I throw some money of the table for their drinks, “I should probably go before someone calls the cops.”
As I was walking out the door I heard Rosie say “hey are you ok? That looked like a nasty punch!”
I reply “yeah I’ll be fine, it’s not the first time I’ve been punched.”
“Let me take a look at that” she says as she softly places he hand on my cheek. “Oh no your bleeding.”
I touch my eyebrow and feel the warm blood on my hand.
“I never got a chance to thank you after helping us with that guy, he was being so creepy.” Rosie says with a smile.
“Ah don’t mention it, anyone else would do the same thing.”
Rosie offered to take me back to her place and clean me up. She lived just down the street and I figured it would be nice to have a girl take care of me for once. We walked into her house, it was small but neatly decorated. The living room took up most of the front room with stairs on the left. The kitchen was in the back and that’s where she took me.
“Here sit down” she pulled out a barstool from island counter and went to gather supplies from one of the cabinets. She came back with bandaids, rubbing alcohol, and a couple beers.
We popped open the beers and cheered each other. “To the savior of the night” she says “now let me take a look at that eye.”
She takes off my hat slowly and brushes my thick brown hair to the side. I wince as she touches my eyebrow and say “yep that hurts now.” She grabs the rubbing alcohol and soaks a towel in it and starts cleaning the wound. I scrunch my face up again as the rubbing alcohol burns.
“Sorry” she says, “gotta clean it so it doesn’t get infected.”
Once she bandaged it up and put the supplies away she came back with a cold towel. “This might make it feel better” she said as she held the back of my head and wiped my face. I looked up at her and our eyes locked which brought a smile to her face. She slowly leaned in and kissed me, then paused for a second and kissed me again. I grabbed her by the waist and pulled her closer in between my legs. I felt her soft breasts against my chest and her tight butt in my hand. She grabbed my face with both hands and we French kissed passionately. Suddenly all my worries in the world were gone and we were just in the moment.
She grabbed my hand and let me upstairs to the bedroom. The bed had a white comforter on top of a cushioned bed frame and sat next to a couple mirrored night stands. There was a chair in the opposite corner and a dresser along the wall. She sat me down on the bed and started to strip off her clothing. Starting with her heels and pants and then stopping to take off my boots for me. I watched lustfully as she slowly pulled her shirt over her head. She held it over her breasts momentarily and smiled before dropping it on the floor. She was wearing a white lace lingerie set underneath. I could feel my cock growing underneath my jeans.
She climbed on top of me and put my face in between her breasts. I grabbed her ass with both hands and pulled her into me. She moaned a little and we both started to dry hump each other slowly while we tongued each other’s mouths. She thrusted her pelvis into me faster and faster until her pussy was soaking wet and my dick was rock hard. She startled unbuckling my belt and then stood up to take my pants off. I stripped off my shirt and she finished getting nude.
I’m still sitting upright as her naked body climbs back on me. I kiss her neck and firmly grab her chest as she grinds on top of me. My cock is laying along her pussy and ass cheeks and I can feel how wet her hole is. We make out and grab and squeeze at each other until we can’t take it anymore. As I’m caressing her breast and sucking on her nipple, she reaches down and grabs my thick cock in her hand. After stroking it some and feeling it throb, she slides in in her mound and lets out a huge moan.
She wraps her arms and legs around me and slowly grinds my cock. I kiss her neck and squeeze her ass, shoving her down on my dick even deeper. Our hands wander and explore every inch of our bodies as we thrust into each other. I can feel sweat and wetness dripping down my balls. My pelvic area is soaked from her grinding on me. “Oh yeah fuck me baby” I say to her and she thrusts a little faster.
“Mmm yes I’m about to cum” she whispers in my ear. It turned me on so much that I could feel my cock starting to pulse. “Uhh yes I’m cumming!” She screamed out. I came inside her as she wrapped tightly around me and felt her convulse with every pump of my dick.
We laid down in the bed and stared into each others eyes. I brushed the hair from her face and kissed her. She reaches down and started rubbing my cock. “Mmm somebody’s still hard.” She says. I smile and kiss her again, this time with tongue. I start playing with her clit as we kissed and felt each other. I rub the outside of her hole and can feel my cum edging out. She’s still stroking my cock as I rub her clit and finger her pussy. I rub her clit in a circle motion and insert a finger whenever she moves her hips towards my hand. She gets close to orgasm again and tells me to wait.
She gets up and turns around with her ass facing me and says “I want you to fuck me from behind.” I kneel behind her and slap her ass. I grab my big dick in my hand and rub it on her clit while I rub her anus with my thumb. I slowly insert my shaft into her and me moans “yes fuck me like that.” I grab both ass cheeks in my hands and thrust my member in and out as my cum drips down her leg. She thrusts her ass back into me, driving my dick deep inside making me want to jizz again.
“Yes baby, put your finger in my ass” she says as I ride her. I start playing with the outside of her anus while sliding my cock in and out. I insert my finger in and out slowly. I feel feel my cock with my finger as a fuck her. “Oh yes baby like that” she screams as she thrusts her ass back and forth even faster, “I’m gonna cum again.” I feel her pussy tighten as she cums on my dick. “Oh yes mmm yes!” She screams.
She turns around and puts my dick in her mouth and sucks passionately. I grab her tits and play with her nipples. She licks my shaft and then puts the head in her mouth a few times. I can feel myself about to cum. She stroked my cock with one hand while sucking on the tip with her soft wet mouth. I grab my dick as I’m about to jizz and and stroke it in front of her. I cum on her face and breasts and she sucks on the tip to finish me off.
After she gets cleaned up, we lay back in bed and admire each others naked bodies. This has got to be the craziest hookup I’ve ever had I thought to myself.
“How does your eye feel now?” She asks with a smile on her face. “Holy shit I forgot all about it” I say as I touch my eyebrow.
“Hmm I guess my treatment worked then.”
I laugh and kiss her and we fall asleep.
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