Manpower: revenge of the nerds. Feedback wanted! [noncon, freeuse, maledom]

So, I’m a terrible writer but want to get a bit better. Not even sure if this is the right sub for this kind of post but I’ll give it a shot. I love the freeuse/noncon type stories, so I wrote one here… any feedback, comments, whatever would be great!

[https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/mmpie/39338/Manpower/103720/Chapter-1/Revenge-of-nerds-Day-1](https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/mmpie/39338/Manpower/103720/Chapter-1/Revenge-of-nerds-Day-1)

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ms5blq/manpower_revenge_of_the_nerds_feedback_wanted