Critical Fail (or Success), pt 3

There are few crises worthy of such a gathering. Only two situations in our order’s impressive history have brought such talent together. To hold myself and my comrades in high regard may tread the dangerous line of _pride_, but only a fool would consider us less than legendary. My group alone consisted of one of the world’s most powerful white witches (many still question the order’s decision to allow her in), a mechanical warrior with strength and talents honed over centuries, and myself. Potentially the greatest paladin warrior to ever walk these lands. Now, answering this most noble call, I may solidify my place in history. 

Our mission sounds simple enough. Some succubus or another has been wreaking havoc along the countryside. We’ve handled a few of these lusty beasts before, but this one was concerning to our wizened leaders. She’s left devastation in her wake, and even somehow earned a devout following? Puzzling, to be sure, they’re usually more along the lines of mindless slaves to their urges. Such has been my experience, at least. We accepted the mission, along with no fewer than seven other capable parties. This demon will be reduced to ash within a fortnight. 

How foolish we were. So certain in our own abilities, so naive to think this would be so easy. We were walking through a wooded area, not dense enough for much of an ambush but they still managed to catch us by surprise. Our metallic companion was the first to fall, a near imperceptible combination of kicks and punches before any of us had much time to react. The aggressors were gone as quick as they struck. I took position around Flora, my mystical companion. My shield guarded her on one side, sword at the other while she prepared a spell. Something giggled as it ran by some trees a few yards ahead, drawing my attention. Flora sent an Illuminated projectile in its direction, shattering trunks and setting nearby trees ablaze. I turned at the sound of twigs cracking under footsteps behind me, barely registering a pink figure before sudden pain and darkness consumed me. My consciousness faded to the sounds of screams.

I woke some time later. My surroundings had changed, and my armor had been removed. Light danced across rocky walls, a fire burning somewhere deeper into this cave. I turned my head to search the new area, sharp pain stabbing at the base of my skull. Flora was laid out face down along the opposite wall, also naked. My eyes lingered far longer than a celibate warrior should allow, and my shame rose almost as quickly as my neglected manhood. The moaning echoing throughout the cavern didn’t help my lust.

We weren’t restrained, which I thought was odd, so I tried getting up. It took considerable effort, but I finally got to my feet and made my way over to my fallen companion. She was still breathing, but looked to have been badly beaten. Her typically dark, silky hair was soaked in blood, bruising already evident on her cheek, arms, legs, and buttocks. We must have been out for a while, likely due to some sort of dark magic. Our gear was nowhere in sight, and I wasn’t sure which way to go to retrieve it. Or at least something to defend ourselves while we escaped.

Time had run out. A beautiful, horrifying creature stood silently in the narrow chamber. The light flicked over her pink skin, giving it a glittering appearance. Muscles tensed and relaxed tantalizingly when she walked to me, her wide hips swaying seductively. Her full breasts jiggled with each step, long hair bouncing behind her. My already hard cock stiffened further, almost painfully so as she approached. I recognized this as the succubus we’d been sent to eliminate, but every fiber of my being wanted nothing more than to fornicate with this demon.

She smiled warmly at me, put her hands on my shoulders and let her fingernails scratch teasingly as she dropped to her knees before me. I made no motion to interrupt, no attempt to fight as her head fell to my crotch. Her hand wrapped around the base of my throbbing member, and she looked up, directly into my eyes as her long, wonderful tongue slid up the length of my cock. She moaned as she licked over the thick head, savoring the bliss already leaking from my tip. A playful giggle slipped from her lips just before she swallowed my full nine inches into her mouth and down her throat. She held there, nose pressed into my pelvis for a magnificent pause, then pulled away. Her lips stayed wrapped around me, sucking expertly as more of my shaft emerged. My glistening manhood popped from her mouth, and we shared a satisfied sigh.

“_Before I get too carried away…_” she said, more to herself than anyone else. She pulled a vibrant, pink pebble from her mouth, something like a smoothed gemstone. Her hand still at the base of my cock angled it up, the hand with the stone wrapping around my eager cockhead. She positioned the stone against the tip of my member, and guided it inside. A mixture of fear, fascination, and lust swirled in my mind and chest as I watched the object disappear into my erection. I felt it slide down, aided by her fingers as they slid down my shaft. It arrived at the lowest portion of my manhood, and then with a little effort, slipped somewhere deeper. “_Can’t go getting burned by holy seed now, can I?_”

The demon smirked at me as the ground pulled away. I fell, landing flat on my back, gasping for air. Tightness built in my groin, and my painfully hard erection throbbed even harder. The vile, intoxicatingly beautiful creature moaned happily to herself as we both watched my manhood grow, veins bulging along it as it continued to inflate. I felt as though it had doubled in size, though it couldn’t have grown more than a few inches. She crawled up between my legs, staring at the monstrosity she’d built in my lap. “_Fuck, even your balls grew,_” she breathed, her own lust building. Her mouth opened, dark lips spreading wide as her face approached my throbbing member. 

I reached for her, but my body felt encumbered. My movements were sluggish, and then halted completely by other hands. Three more women gathered around me, restraining my arms as the vile demon enveloped my cock in her marvelous mouth. I groaned at the sudden and unexpected pleasures sweeping through me. The other women were unsurprisingly naked, each the pinnacle of perfection. It was as though I’d been restrained by marble statues of goddesses come to life, my eyes lingering on gently swaying breasts and pink flesh between parted legs. My hands grasped at them, holding a thigh of one and calf of another kneeling woman. The third had one foot on my chest, and I let my eyes wander up her toned leg, then focus on the dripping slit high over me. Arousal and lust leaked down her leg, gleaming in the low lights as her foot left my chest. I got one look at the beautiful monstrosity eagerly sucking at my oversized shaft before darkness filled my vision.

A hand at my head guided my face forward, my mouth coming into contact with something warm and wet. I opened my mouth and set my tongue to work on the delicious folds presented, happily abandoning my promises of “chastity” and “purity,” or whatever they were. This woman tasted amazing, and I wanted to taste every last drop of her pleasure as my own built ever higher. Hands began stroking up and down my shaft as the demon continued suckling, and an unfamiliar sensation crept up. I groaned into the woman at my face as my once ignored cock pulsed, my long forbidden seed filling the mouth of the creature I’d been sent to kill. I brought both of my now freed hands to the smoothed ass of the savory woman letting me feast upon her, holding her mounds tightly as I pushed my face harder into her. She screamed as her body began to quake in my grasp, and I felt the demon release my still pulsing manhood from her mouth.

Another set of lips took their place atop my gushing tip, warmer and wetter than the last. The woman at my face bucked forward and fell from my hands, and I was once again able to see my surroundings. The demon was on her feet, watching intently as one of the other women lowered herself at my waist. Another groan left my chest as I watched my enhanced meat disappear inside her, streams of juices draining down my length beneath her tightness. She moaned softly as inch after inch sunk into her, another woman kneeling next to her. The other woman put her hand over the stretching pink of her friend, then used her fingers to rub at her. The impaled woman shrieked, her body quivering against my hips. Her tightness increased significantly, and my balls became drenched as she trembled. The sensations redoubled the pulsing of my cock, and I could see a slight bump forming in her abdomen when she leaned back.

My mind started going fuzzy after that. Each woman took turns on my cock, toying with whoever was on top. They would play with each other’s bountiful breasts, sometimes fingers, sometimes mouths. Their hands would constantly rub between the legs of their penetrated friend, each sudden increase in pleasure sending my own orgasm higher. All three ended up filled and covered in my thick, pink tinged seed. I laid there, mostly unmoving while they all had their way with me. My last conscious vision was the demon arriving back between my legs. She grasped my pleasure slicked, still cuming cock in one hand, and used the other to guide another of the pulsating gems into my tip. The seed stopped flowing once the gem slipped inside, getting worked down my shaft like the first. She put another one at my tip and slid it in, then another. They all found their way to my lowest point, and then slipped beyond, one after another. The cave went dark, but my being awoke.

_breathe_

_fuck_

_breed_

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