*Disclaimer* This is my first time writing erotic fiction. So please give comments on how to improve.
After our date night at an expensive restaurant, we booked a hotel room for us to lay back and cuddle. We had no idea what would happen in the next couple hours. When we arrived at our room, A113, we kicked off our shoes and laid on the bed, we knew we had something in common. I felt a spark in his dreamy eyes, a sense of comfort and a sense of belonging. I laid on top of his chest, his heart throbbing and I could hear the sound of his beating heart. What music to my ears, it had a rhythm but I could not picture what it was. As we laid there, I felt a tingle inside me, something wasn’t right, why aren’t we doing anything. It was such an excellent date night but we just had dinner, I wanted more, I wanted him. I want to feel him. I bit my lip with pleasure just dreaming of what it would be like to have him. So I initiated the move.
“Hey, I want to jump in the shower real quick and get a clean up.” I whispered in his ear.
“Uh ok,” he muttered tiredly, “just make it quick, ok?”
“Sure”
He did not know what was going on as he continued to lay there on the bed.
I walked to the bathroom and closed the door leaving a gap so that he could walk in. I was ready.
As I stripped down my dress and undid my hair and looked in the mirror, I whispered to myself.
“You’re mine tonight, I’ve got you in my grasp”
I went into the shower and did my business.
A few minutes passed, he felt something wasn’t right.
“Why is she taking so long, I thought it’d be a quick shower?” ___asked himself, “Let me go take a look.”
When he walked to the door, he realized that the door wasn’t closed shut.
“Should I peek in? No, that’s not what a gentleman should do! But it’s the one time I get to see her. You know what, fuck it!”
As he peeked in, I caught a glimpse on him through the gap and quickly said,
“Are you liking what you’re seeing? It’s pretty good isn’t it, honey? There’s no need to peek, just come in a shower with me… ” I said.
“Well alright then”
As he took of his shirt, his pecks were amazing, his muscles bursting through the seams, it was intense but I could not turn my sight away. His Herculean body was just to mouthwatering.
“I wonder what he’s packing down there?” I asked myself
“Zzzp”
His pants dropped and I could see his bare ass and it was firm. All of a sudden, I felt a warm tingle down there, I was getting hotter and hotter by the second.
His underwear dropped and he turned around. My mouth dropped instantly as I gazed at his crotch. I let out a small gasp,
“Oh. My. God. I have never seen coxk that size, it’s huge.” I blurted out, ” how do you handle that…. thing…”
“What my coxk? It’s alright, pretty decent I guess.” He replied.
As he entered the shower and stood behind me, the warm feeling started get more intense and I sense some dripping.
I turned around and asked,
“Do you want me to wash you?”
“Sure”
“Would you mind passing the soap?”
“Here you go”
I started from the neck first and as I made my way down, I could no longer contain myself. He was right in front of me and he was butt naked but I didn’t felt creeped out. The presence of him being there made it an awesome experience.
Upon reaching his pectorals, my hands laid in his strong, steel-like chest. It was sensational. I continued to massage his chest and his back. The muscles on this man was insane. It was something I have never felt before.
As I made my way down to his abdomen, my eyes gazed on his crotch, and he had an erection.
“I see your friend wants some attention too,” I chuckled. “Maybe I can help with that.”
“Um ok, are you sure you’re ok with this?”
“Oh for sure”
My hands slid under his full grown erection and my God was I in for a treat. Just by looking at him from the start, I thought I would be able to wrap my fingers around it, but was I wrong. The girth on that being was wide. It was enormously long and thick.
The head poked out a little bit and from the looks of it, it too was big.
I washed him from the back massaging his trouser snake. My hands gliding up and down making that every inch was in my hand.
“Wow, even my hands can’t wrap around it!” I exclaimed
“Is it really that big? I thought it would be average at best!”
“Average?! This is no where near average, look at the size of that thing! It’s huge!!!”
“If you say so I suppose”
And by golly his balls were the dogs bollocks. The size of two tennis balls just hanging there waiting to be grabbed and massaged.
I could not hold myself back and reached for it. Even that couldn’t fit in my hands
After massaging his buff body, I requested,
“Would you also wash my body?”
“My pleasure!”
His body pressed against my back and I could feel his presence looming over me. His cock grazing my back and his hands went around my neck.
At times I wanted to blurt out, “choke me daddy” but I assumed that would make the romantic atmosphere vanish immediately.
His hands grazed against my breasts and I let out a small moan. He got the idea and continued to massage my Double D twins, my nipples fully hard as he cupped my breast.
He however did not get to clean my legs as I turned around and kissed him. His cock tucked up against my belly as we made out intensely.
Our tongues intertwined, lapping over each other. He had won me over and we were doing it in the shower just like how movies would do a love scene.
Even his kiss was just god-like. A simple word would describe it. Amazing.
And not long later we were on the bed making out, his mouth all over my neck and chest. His hand still grasping my left breast and we made out.
I finally had the courage to demand him.
“Do me! And don’t let back”
He nodded his head without saying a word. His python slid in and I let out a huge moan.
“Yes DADDY!!!!!!!!!!” Ahhhh”
My tight pussy had swallowed his massive shlong, squeezing it tighter and tighter.
His hips thrusted back and forth, his cock moving in and out.
“Ahhh Ahhhhhh Ahhhh” I moaned. “You’re wonderful!!!” I yelled through my moans.”
My pussy was getting wetter and wetter. I was so close to cumming. And yes this was just 10 mins into copulating. The sensation of having is cock inside me was indescribable.
My mind went blank. All I could do, see and feel was right in front of me. I had no control over my body, my body belonged to him.
As he took out his cock for a breather, my body quivered with ecstasy. I had squirted on to the sheets but that would not allow him to stop.
“Is that all you got?” I said as my voice shook with pleasure. “I’m yours and ravage me like you mean it!”
He didn’t say anything and grabbed my head and shoved his dick into my mouth.
The love juices pouring into my tiny mouth. The taste of my pussy and the juices from his cock we’re concocted into a liquid that tasted just like ambrosia.
I could not fit his massive snake like organ in my mouth and it only reached an eighth of the entire thing.
“Grrk Grrk *slurp* *slurp* *slurp* mmMmMMMmmm.” I tried to speak, but his cock had reached the back of my throat.
“*Gasp gasp*”
His hand left the back of my head as I gasped for air.
“*Cough cough cough cough*”
“I can’t even fit that thing in my mouth” I spluttered as slobber and drool clung onto my mouth and the tip.
He smiled mischievously as he grabbed my dainty body and flipped me into doggystyle.
He grabbed a pillow from the bed and placed it on the ground where he kneeled to taste the sweet juices of my pussy. His tongue reached my clitoris and I moaned in pleasure.
“Just like that…… Eat my pussy baby!!!!!”
His tongue running all over my pussy, he tugged on my labia making me moans even louder.
He spread open my pussy and made way for the opening. His tongue slipped in and moved up and down inside.
My immediate action was to pull his head closer to my body as his tongue danced inside my pussy.
Once he finished, he teased his cock grazing my pussy. I could not bear to have him tease me. It was right there. It was so close but it felt so far.
All of a sudden, he pushed forward, his cock inserting into my orifice. He leaned forward clasping my breasts hard as he continued to pound my pussy.
While pounding, the slap of my arse was heard. Continuous slapping caused my pretty bottom to glow red but I wanted it.
“Slap me harder, I’m a bad bitch! Punish my bare ass! I want it! I want it! Give it to me!” I yelled
As the slapping grew harder and harder I felt more comfortable with myself. Even though it was super intense and close to having an orgasm.
Something in my body sparked a desire for lust. It was insatiable.
I could hear his groans grow louder and louder signalling he was about to cum.
My moans had grew louder and louder as well.
“Fuuuuckkk!” I yelled as my abdomen contracted, I had just came.
It was up to the point where he quickly pulled out and I was on my knees waiting and begging for his tasty cum.
“Ahhh hahhhhh ahhhh!!!!!!” He groaned as his cum squirted out on to my face causing a mess.
Without a word he fell back on to the bed panting for air. The whole experience was sensational. It was a fantastic moment between him and I and I enjoyed it a lot.
After laying there for 15mins, I went to the bathroom shakily walking with cum was still on my face. I had forgot to clean up after he came, I was too exhausted from that session and had sat there panting in exhaustion much like him.
Once we had regained strength and everything was back to normal, I couldn’t help but thank him for his performance and we headed back to the lobby of the hotel and gave our goodbyes.
“What. A. Night. That. Was.” I said to myself
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