You can read Part 1 [here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/mapjhg/mf_dark_twisted_collab_you_promised_not_to_hurt/).
She was bundled up the stairs and into the building by two strong men. Their hands were hard on her soft upper arms and at times she felt like she was being carried rather than walking.
The house had class, high ceilings with floral mouldings, tall, ornate, mirrors, plush carpets. She was taken upstairs and into an elegantly furnished room which had a grand piano and large windows overlooking the street.
A tall man in a sharp, grey, suit turned towards her. He had a square jaw and a white pocket square. He walked over to her, she shook, her eyes wide with fear. He took a single ringlet of her hair and smelled it, appreciating her scent. It was only cheap supermarket shampoo and that’s why he liked it, it said a lot about how hard they would look for her.
“Hello,” he said, guiding her chin upwards so his eyes looked directly into hers. He just looked at her for a while, watching her heart race, the delicious fear painted all across her face.
“You don’t need to say anything to me, a girl like you is transparent. I’m going to ask you some questions now, just be quiet for me. Can you do that?”
Something inside her went calm, it knew how to behave with a man like this, he saw this happen and said quietly, “good girl.”
“Now,” he said, “lets see.” He reached his hand down to her thighs and drew it up under her skirt. He gently massaged the wet patch on her soaked panties, “I see this turns you on, you like the roughness don’t you?”
He pinched her, hard, she writhed and squealed, it was a sexual sound and not one of pure pain, he knew this, she realised he knew this, she knew she had been seen. She felt frightened then, she knew she couldn’t hide what she wanted, he knew all the dreams she had when the lights were out and she was alone in her room.
“You can release her now,” he said to the men holding her, they let go. She sagged a little on her feet but the hand on her chin commanded her to stay standing, to stay locked in with him. Her body was soft, relaxed, her mind was swimming.
“I see you are a good find, a nice subby little whore. I could let you go right now, I could let you walk down the stairs and out into the street, get in a taxi, go home. And there you would find your man waiting for you, and he would console you and hold you in his arms.”
“Then you could go through the same motions over and over again, do the same old sex acts with him, listen to the same boring stories. He may be able to please your body a little some times but you know he’s never been able to get deep down into your mind, you humour him, fake it a little for him, just to help him think he’s not as dull as he really is.”
“Or you could stay here. And if you stay I will break you in as my little torture whore. That will entail intense sessions of pain and suffering, overwhelming you, flooding your body with adrenaline and endorphins, over and over. Each time taking another layer of clothing off your mind, psychologically undressing you, down to the deepest level. I will dominate the depths of you, we will go to places you’ve never been and I will plant my flag there, so securely you will never be able to remove it. You will be helpless, broken, obedient. You will sit attentively at my feet, eagerly waiting for any chance to please me, anything you can do to amuse me. And you will amuse me, by writhing, by screaming, by wailing, by crying out to gods who don’t give a shit about a piece of trash like you. No one will come for you, there will be no redemption, there will just be me and nothing else.”
“Don’t speak, don’t answer. I can clearly see what you want in your eyes. Good girl, once I have remade you I will be so proud of you, have no fear, I will look after you. And right now .. these two men are going to rape you.”
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So yeah there’s part 2! Looks like tough times for our poor protagonist. Lets see what cruelty Doll has instore for her next.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/mawete/mmmf_dark_twisted_collab_noncon_you_promised_not
It’s so good! I’m so excited to write the next part. Thank you for doing this with me ?