I [m] would love some honest opinions and constructive criticism on some of my stories

Hi, I’m new to this sub but not to writing erotica. Most of my stories never get posted because I either don’t finish them or I don’t like how they turn out.

So this is why I’m here, I have a wordpress with a few of what I feel are my better stories and I’d love for you to read any or all of them if you’re interested. Here’s a short list of what I have:

Personal Trainer – female pov about an older married woman and her younger Male trainer

Luthier – male pov about a married instrument maker and a female helper

Mr. Smith’s Lady – male pov about a dom and his fiance’s best friend

Night Shift – female pov about a newly trained ambulance worker and her male co-worker

You might ask why am I doing this? Well mostly its because I want to start putting out stories again but I’m the type of person that wants to become better at whatever they’re doing. So I’m looking for feedback, what worked, what didn’t, what could make it better? I would also love people who are the editing type if they want to give my stories a proofread.

Send me a chat or PM if you want the link to the wordpress.

Happy reading everybody!

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ly3gnr/i_m_would_love_some_honest_opinions_and