My first attempt at writing erotica [1st person pov][M4M]

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With the gentle fall of snow around me I walk up to the front door of the handsome man I had spoken to for some time. With every step i take closer to that door my heart beats faster both with anxiety and excitement. This is the moment we were waiting for, what all the teasing, flirting and virtual fucking had led to.

 
As I reach the door my cock twitches in anticipation of what waits behind. With a slight hesitation I reach for the door and knock.

 
As the door opens, before me stands a man of perfection, from the shape of his face, the look in his eye, the subtle presence of a bulge between his lushous legs. At that point all anxiety left my mind. From that moment I knew I made the right decision, as I’m invited in and step through the threshold out of the cold, two types of warmth hit me, the one from the house and the one from my own groin.

 
The excitement is palpable, not a word is said as he leads the way to his bedroom, the place where magic is going to be brought alive. I can’t help but look as he walks ahead, admiring his gorgeous behind, oh the things I am going to do to those perfect cheeks and the treasure that the keep buried away.
 

As we enter the room in can hardly contain myself, the moment the door closes I pounce. I push this glorious man against the wall, cushioning his head from the impact and assault his lips with mine, a faint moan growing and escaping from within me.
 

I carefully place my thigh against his groin, and its clear the attraction is mutual, the feeling of a cock hardening against me drives me wild, as he grinds against my leg I start to savour the moans escaping his lips, adding flavour to them in a way i was never aware could happen.

 
I can’t help myself, my hand which has been resting and caressing his face slowly, gently runs across the outline of his jaw, down across his biteble neck.
I feel the faint but clear shudder from him, his arousal becoming more obvious by the second, I’m already leaking, feeling a small wet patch form in my underwear which like I can feel one forming on my leg im sure he can feel the same from me.

 
My hand slowly works its way, steadily down his form, enjoying the gentle warmth emanating from him. My hand, inching closer and closer to the glorious, delicious meat that hangs between his legs. I gently but purposefully glide my hand over the outline of the perfect cock only just being contained by the thin fabric between us. We move towards the bed  not once separating in this desperate moment. Both hungry for the other

As we reach the bed, clothes being ripped off eachother in the process, I can’t help but wrap my hand against the firmness this man has on his person, a few gentle rubs and I know what I want, what I need.
 

Never taking my lips from him, I work my way lower, down his chest, across his stomach, breathing a warm wet breath against his groin. But not yet, I plant a kiss on his thigh, enjoying the feeling of his cock twitching in my hand, gently stroking the head with my thumb, the craving to dive on that cock is strong. But the desire to tease is stronger
I take a good long smell of his groin, the smell of his arousal adding to my own. With one smooth movement I take one ball into my mouth, enjoying the flavour, sucking, lapping and rolling it around in my mouth like the most delicious sweet.
 

The moans, the feeling of his hand gently gripping my hair. Its enough to drive me wild. I know what needs to be done.

I remove that perfect testicle from my mouth, and follow the natural line that formed when this perfect being was created. A long, slow lick, from the balls and up the shaft, finally reaching the tip top of this beautiful pole. A bead of precum formed at the slit. I can’t resist it any longer. I must taste this fluid, the nectar of the god infront of me

A firm but gentle pressure on my head and the little thrust from below  tells me all I need to know, I gently, slowly take this man into my mouth, the flavour, the smell, the warmth from the cock all driving my senses. I slowly, carefully take more and more of him in. A moan or two rumble in my throat. My own cock twitching a drooling with excitement.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/l8ous1/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_1st_person

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