After a long hike (fm), (female POV), (sensual), (birthday), (hotel), (shy), (creampie), (wholesome)

Hi, this is the third story I’ve posted.

This one is somewhat similar to the 2nd story, but a bit longer. I don’t know if I succeeded in capturing what I wanted to in this story, but I wanted to share it nonetheless.

I appreciate all the encouragement, and feedback from everyone thus far, it really does mean a lot to me! Do not worry, I have no intention of stopping any time soon :)

Of course, if you have any feedback, or comments, please let me know! I would love to hear what you think.

Onto the story!

You finally just get back to your hotel room. Both you and him got up early in the morning to go hiking, and are now thoroughly sore, and tiered. It was worth it though. He can’t seem to stop smiling, despite being sore. You know how much he loves hiking, and it warms your heart to see him so happy, so content.

As you enter the room, you both take your muddy boots off at the door, and immediately begin stripping off your dirty clothes, until only your underwear remains.

You notice he can’t help but stare at your body, with that same look of happiness on his face, like he can’t really believe you’re his, and he’s yours. There’s something else in that look though, something you recognize. A longing, a deep seated desire. You wanted to make this special day perfect for him, and you intended to do just that.

Realizing he’s been caught, he avoids your eyes, and tells you “You can go ahead, and take your shower first, sweetheart”. You respond by approaching him, exaggerating your hip movements a bit “I have no intention of taking a shower just yet” you say seductively.

You push him onto the queen sized bed, and fall upon him, like a lioness upon her prey. He’s so initially surprised by this, he doesn’t know how to react. You make the decision for him, by placing your lips on his, and rubbing your body against his, in all the ways you know will drive him wild.

You know you’ve succeeded, because you can feel his manhood pushing against you through his underwear. His hands begin to wander, as you continue to kiss. He first undoes your bra, and then cups your ass, thoroughly kneading it, and forcing your crotch even harder against his underwear clad manhood.

You both eventually stop the kiss to catch your breaths. There is only desire left in his eyes, desperate, animal desire, like his whole life depends on this moment, and he won’t let anything stop him. He pulls your bra away, and your soft, sensitive tits make contact with his muscular chest, sending shivers down both of you. He pulls his underwear off frantically, and knowing what’s coming next, you follow suit, pulling your panties down.

What ensues might be comparable to a lust filled wrestling match, both of you pushing your naked bodies against eachother, trying to pull, or push the other to feel each other in a new, and pleasurable way. Eventually, he ends up on top of you. His eyes meet yours, but there is something different there alongside the lust, anxiety?

“What is it?” You ask “You look worried”

“Well, there’s something I want to try, but I don’t know what you’ll think of it”

“I’ll do anything you want” you reply “I want to do whatever it takes to make you happy today, my love”.

“Well, I want you to lower yourself a little bit.” He seems apprehensive about what comes next. “I want… to use your belly button, to feel what it’s like, and while I do that, I want you to… I want you to play with my nipples. You always seem so stimulated by it, so I wanted to try it. I hope that’s ok with you” he eventually stammers out.

“Of course, I would do anything for you” you reply, and begin to move into position to make his desires, a reality. You rub his rigid length against the smooth skin of your stomach, and move your head to his right nipple.

You begin by swirling around his nipple with your tongue, teasing him, until you start to flick your tongue directly onto him. You can feel his body react to this new, unfamiliar sensation, he even lets out an uncharacteristic moan.

While you do this, he continues to press his manhood against your belly, smearing your smooth skin with his precum, before eventually arriving at your belly button. He simply rubs the head of his cock against your navel, pushing against it. You know how sensitive it is, and you’re sure he’s feeling immense pleasure, based on how little he is moving, to prevent himself from exploding right there and then.

This goes on for a bit, and he continues to moan, completely letting himself go, when he whispers to you “Please stop sweetheart, you’re going to make me cum”.

You do as you’re told, and are rewarded by the look on his face, one of complete pleasure, and contentedness. Without any words, he lines himself up with your already wet folds, and inserts himself.

As he does this, he looks into your eyes “I think it’s time I return the favour, sweetheart” and he moves his head to your right nipple, and begins to tease you, just as you did him.

Both of you are incredibly horny at this point, and it doesn’t take long for his initial thrusting to turn into full on hard fucking, pressing his pelvis into yours with every thrust, causing the hotel bed creak. As he fucks you, he continues to move his tongue around your nipple, falling over it like a wave, then returning to his mouth, like the tide recedes. He alternates between the wave like motions, and spurts of flicking, and sucking, all of which drive you wild.

He eventually lifts his head, and gives you a look that tells you he’s about to cum. Your not paying much attention though, as you’ve just past the point of no return yourself, which immediately pushes him over the edge.

You feel your body contracts, as you begin to spasm on his manhood. He thrusts into your quivering folds one final time, as deep as he could possibly be, and begins to erupt inside of you. After the first two shots however, he pulls out, and presses his sensitive cockhead against your navel, stimulating him even further, causing him to moan, and even arch his back from the intense sensation. Your belly button becomes filled with his seed, overflowing onto your belly, slowly leaking down your waist.

He let’s himself fall onto you in exhaustion, from the days hike, and now this, his semi hard manhood still pressed against your belly.

He whispers into your ear “I love you” before you can begin to hear him breath softly, steadily. He just fell asleep, and you couldn’t be happier.

You never want this moment to end, but you too soon drift off to sleep, both of you naked, dirty, and now sticky from cum, but both of you in absolute bliss.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/kwh5hf/after_a_long_hike_fm_female_pov_sensual_birthday

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